Happy Thanksgiving! Sneaking this in for those of you reading in bed after a day of indulgence. đ Find chapter 2 here.
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They left the restaurant and walked several blocks to a chocolate bar and ordered a few different desserts that they all shared in addition to another round of drinks. At some point everyone was feeding everyone else a bite of their food and Elizabeth ended up wiping a dollop of whipped cream off Willâs nose while she laughed. Jane dabbed her napkin around Charlieâs mouth and both women dissolved into giggles when they realized they were taking care of the wrong man.
Of course, neither man complained.
âSo, which one of you is older?â asked Charles. By this point, they were all thoroughly buzzed and heading toward full-out drunk. They sat in a collection of lavish chairs and small sofas in the corner of their third venue of the night, a bar just up the street from the chocolate place.
The women looked at each other and giggled lightly again. âShould we tell them?â asked Elizabeth.
âI donât know. Itâs been a pretty interesting night so far. I donât know if they could handle it,â Jane replied.
They looked at the men with identical mischievous looks, but on Jane it was surprising and therefore intriguing, while on Elizabeth it looked downright dangerous.
âHandle what?â asked Charles.
âJaneâs older,â said Elizabeth. âA little bit.â
Jane rolled her eyes. âQuit trying to make yourself sound younger. It was four minutes.â
âDidnât stop you from bossing me around when we were kids,â retorted Elizabeth.
âYouâre twins?â asked a surprised Will.
âTriplets,â they said in unison.
Charlesâs eyes were enormous and Will spluttered on his drink.
âSee, thatâs what always happens,â said Elizabeth with a shake of her head.
âThatâs why we donât usually tell people,â added Jane.
âYou all right?â Elizabeth hit Willâs back lightly as he coughed.
He nodded.
âSo whereâs the other one?â asked Charles.
âMary lives in San Francisco,â said Jane.
âYou didnât want to live nearer to each other as adults?â asked Will.
âYes and no,â said Jane.
âYou have to understand, growing up triplets makes you a bit of an exhibit,â said Elizabeth.
âEveryone knows who you are, everyone wants to ask you a million ridiculous questions.â Jane shook her head. âItâs exhausting. When it was time to go to college, we were all looking into different fields and it was natural to just go where we wanted without wondering where the other would be. If we were close, okay, if not, that was okay, too. It wasnât like weâd lose touch.â
âSo youâre a physical therapist, youâre a lawyer, and Mary is?â asked Charles.
âA musician,â answered Jane.
âShe plays viola in the symphony,â added Elizabeth.
âWow. Thatâs impressive,â said Charles.
Will was looking at the women silently, trying to see the resemblance. He also had to admit to a small amount of doubt in their story. After all, they had played a joke on them once already tonight, who was to say they werenât doing it again?
âIf youâre trying to figure out if we look alike, youâre looking in the wrong place,â said Elizabeth to Will.
âExcuse me?â
âWe get that a lot, people looking at us, trying to see if we are even a tiny bit identical. Iâll tell you nowâwe are completely fraternal. We each had our own egg, thank you very much, we just happened to be womb mates.â
He smiled at her explanation. âSo you have absolutely nothing in common?â
âNot exactly. Jane,â she caught her sisterâs attention from where she was talking to Charles. âSmile.â The girls pressed their faces together and showed Will, then turned to Charles to show them their identical smiles and matching perfect teeth. âAnd,â Elizabeth said. She pulled her hair back behind her ears. âWe have the same elf ear.â
They each turned their heads one way to show a regular ear, then the other way to show that their right ears were pointed on top.
âI stand corrected,â Will said with hands up in defeat.
They giggled and Jane went back to talking to Charles who sat in the chair next to her side of the sofa while Elizabeth continued her conversation with Will on her side.
âWe also have the same toes, though Janeâs feet are bigger than mine. And we have the same knees. See?â She extended her leg out next to her sisterâs; Jane was already wearing a shorter dress than Elizabethâs and one leg was stretched out in front of her as she leaned over the arm of the sofa.
Will smiled and nodded. âDoes your other sister share your knees and ears?â he asked with a restrained smile.
âActually, no. Her feet are the same size as mine, though. But if you saw her, youâd know we were all related. Sheâs the link between us. We all have the same smile, but Jane and Mary have the same eyes, and me and Mary have the same nose and chin.â
âIs she blonde or brunette like you?â
âNeither! Sheâs a redhead!â She fished in her purse, then pulled out her phone. âHere.â She turned it toward him and showed him a picture of three women in sparkly party hats.
âA blonde, a brunette, and a redhead walk into a party?â he said.
âYeah, I know, we get that a lot. That was New Yearâs Eve last year. We came to stay with Jane and celebrated in Times Square. It was really fun.â
âAnd noisy and dirty,â he added.
She smiled. âAnd that, too.â She sipped her drink and leaned further over the arm of the sofa. âSo, what do you do with yourself, Will?â
âFor work or for play?â
She tilted her head to the side and pursed her lips. âHmmm. For play.â
He smiled. âMountain climbing.â
Her eyes popped open. âMountain climbing? Wow. I wouldnât have guessed that.â
âWhyâs that?â
âYou seem so⌠restrained.â
âRestrained?â
âControlled.â
âI would think control would be useful on the side of a mountain.â
She nodded. âI canât argue with that. Iâve just always thought climbers were wilderâthrill seekers. I stand corrected.â She raised her glass towards him in a silent salute.
âThank you.â They each took a sip and he smiled and looked down, shaking his head slightly, then he looked back at her, an odd look in his eye.
She squinted and stared at him. âWhat?â
He shook his head again. His mouth opened, then closed in a grimace. âI donât climb mountains.â
âWhat?â
âIt sounds terrifying. And youâre right, Iâm not a thrill seeker, and Iâm too restrained to risk my life for a temporary rush.â Her eyes were so wide he could see all the way around her green irises. âYou played a trick on us, so I thought Iâd play one on you, but Iâm a terrible liar.â
She stared at him in shock for a moment, then she smiled and began laughing. âYouâre right, youâre not a very good liar.â She laid a hand on his arm and he laughed with her. âPro tip: commit to the story. If you break too soon, no one will believe you.â
âIâll remember that.â
âSo, what do you really do for fun?â
âI play racquetball.â
It was such a different answer from the one he had already given her that she couldnât help but laugh. Or maybe it was the cocktail. âThatâs certainly safer than mountain climbing.â
He chuckled. âI do enjoy hiking, though. I just donât get to do it as often as Iâd like. Itâs easier to pop into a gym than a state park.â
âOf course. So is it your job that keeps you chained to the city, or something else?â
âMostly work.â
âAre you going to tell me what you do? Or shall I guess?â
âGuessing might be amusing.â
âHmm. You wear that jacket like you were born in it; I assume youâve been wearing it at least a decade. So, something in an office.â She tapped her lip with her finger. âYou werenât at the conference and Iâve never heard of you, so I donât think youâre a lawyer. Youâre too honest to be a politician, though I think you could get elected if you tried hard enough.â She smiled mischievously and he raised a brow. âYouâre good with numbers, but I donât know if thatâs because of your job or a natural talent. Maybe you were a Mathlete.â
âHow do you know Iâm good with numbers?â
âYou figured the tip at the last two places without checkingâa perfect fifteen percent.â
âHow did you know it was perfect?â
âI was a Mathlete,â she said proudly.
He smiled.
âYouâre not scruffy enough to be in IT, and not smooth enough for sales. Pardon me saying so, but you clearly earn a good living. I could see you doing something in management. Definitely not medicine.â
âWhy not medicine?â
âThereâs a raw edge to most doctors that you donât have. Especially the successful ones. And you didnât ask any medical questions about a set of triplets you came into close contact with. So you canât be a scientist either. Doctors and scientists are almost insatiably curious about things like that. Itâs what makes them good at their jobs.â She shrugged.
âSo youâve narrowed it down. Whatâs left?â
âIâm going to say youâre not in publishing, advertising, or banking. Maybe finance⌠but I doubt it. Definitely some sort of business. And youâre in charge in some way. A VP maybe? Even a president of something? A company that makes things or does things. You would want to be useful.â
He was looking at her intently, his eyes dark and steady on hers.
âAm I getting close?â
âUnnervingly close.â
She smiled. âIf I really wanted to be clever, Iâd say you work in a family business that you inherited in some way, possibly even several generations old.â
âWhy would you say that?â
âYouâre proud, but in the best sense of the word. And youâre terribly confident, but not cocky. The kind of confident that comes with generations of security and good decisions. Regardless of whether or not Iâm right about your job, Iâd lay money on your family.â
âReally?â
âReally. I knew a guy in law school. He was old moneyâcrazy old money. His family ran charities and sat on more boards than I have fingers. There were plenty of other rich kids aroundâspoiled and entitled. But he wasnât like that. He was quietly confident. Like he knew his place in the world, and nothing and no one would ever be able to shake that. He could trace his family back more than twenty generations. That kind of solidity canât be bought.â She took a sip of her drink and pointed at him. âAnd you have it.â
He smiled, slow and dreamy and just a little boyish. Her insides twisted up and she blinked hard to clear her vision.
âHow do you do that?â he asked softly.
âDo what?â
âKnow everything about me in one evening?â
She flushed. âI donât know everything. I donât know your favorite color, or what you like to do on Sunday mornings, or your dogâs name.â
âRed, walk in the park, and I donât have a dog.â
âYou donât?â
âIâm not home enough.â
âAhh. You never did tell me what you do that keeps you away from home so much that you canât have a dog.â
âI run a division of a large company called Pemberley.â
âPemberley?â
He nodded.
âI did a deal with them last year.â
âDid you? May I ask which deal?â
âOf course. Itâs no secret. I was the counsel for Dovedale when they sold a factory to Pemberley.â
His brows raised. âI know of the deal. It wasnât my division, so I donât know any details. You must be pretty successful yourself if you have such illustrious clients.â
âI do all right,â she said quietly, swirling the last of the ice in her glass.
Will watched her stare into her drink, then looked up and met Charlesâs eye. His friend raised a brow, and Will matched his look, shooting a quick glance to Jane and back to Charles. Charles almost shrugged, then Jane released a massive yawn and stood.
âThis has been really fun, but Iâm beat. Shall we call it a night?â She looked to her sister and the two of them seemed to have some sort of conversation without words.
Liz nodded and stood. âIâm exhausted. Letâs get out of here.â
They made their way outside and the men went to the corner to hail a cab. Elizabeth and Charles were staying at the same hotel, and Jane lived ten blocks north of their current location.
âIs Will taking you home?â Elizabeth asked.
âThat was the plan, but,â Jane hesitated.
âDo you think heâs going to try something?â
âNo! I just want to avoid the awkwardness.â She looked her sister in the eye. âWe need to talk.â
âWe do. How about I go home with you?â
âPerfect. Maybe meet the guys for brunch if theyâre free?â
âYou sure you want to do that?â
âMaybe we should check with them in the morning.â
âGood idea.â
They looked up as Charles jogged back to them. âWillâs got a cab. Shall we?â
They followed him to the corner; it was impossible to miss the anxious looks between the guys.
âSlight change of plan, gentleman,â Liz said. âIâm going home with Jane. Do you two mind sharing a cab and letting us take this one?â
âNot at all,â Will replied automatically.
Liz thought he was one of those guys trained so thoroughly with a certain set of manners that they became automatic. In this situation, she was more than grateful for it.
The sisters smiled and stepped into the cab, each saying they would call or text the next day as she ducked in. It wasnât lost on the men that they didnât specify whom they would call.
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This is getting more and more interesting. A nice story that WD and EB are off to a good start. I hope you won’t torture us by prolonging the wait for the next chapter;)
Thank you Elizabet for the excerpt.
Author
Thank you! I won’t make you wait. I’ll post a chapter every few days until we get to the end. đ
Thank you so much Ms Adams.
Iâm really loving this story! This chapter was my favourite (so far!) The triplets bit was a total surprise đą!
I love the rapport between Darcy and Elizabeth, they are so obviously the perfect couple and it seems that Jane and Charles are equally suited! Who knew?
Canât wait for more đđ
Author
Thank you!!!
Usually I don’t like modern P&P versions, but this one has obviously caught my attention, especially the triplet aspect of the story. Now that both men seem to be interested in the sister that they didn’t bring to dinner, they have to figure out how to get with the sister that appeals to them the most. Looks like the sisters are aware of the delimema and plan to discuss among themselves before future contact. I am interested in seeing how and whom they decide to approach. Also, it would be nice to see Mary thrown into the mix. I like this version without Kitty and Lydia unless they are entering as twins! I actually know a family that had a set of triplets and a set of twins as their first and second pregnancies sans fertility drugs!
Author
I know a lot of multiples myself, and I went to school with a set of triplets so I’m sure that’s how this idea crept up on me.
I’m keeping Lydia and Kitty out of this one. Just not necessary for this little ditty! Thankfully!
Oh so entertaining! Canât wait for the next chapter.
Love this story!!! Canât wait for the next chapter!!!
Thank you for such a lovely chapter.
I love the way this one is going, the easy way between Lizzy and Darcy.
Pray, write on. Canât wait to find out what happens next.
Author
Thank you! I’ve often wondered if they had met on a more even playing field, like in modern times as friends of friends, if they would have hit it off. So much of the strife between them in P&P was because of the time period and the specific circumstances. It’s fun to move that around and play with it a bit.
Oooh can’t wait to see what happens next!
That was a most excellent scene between D&E. She was magnificent. Well done!! I loved it. I can’t wait to see how they switch up or swap as your title states. Love this.
Triplets? That is a first. Loving the interactions.
I am soooo enjoying this story, Elizabeth! Obviously, Jane and Elizabeth will be discussing switching dates, and the guys seem headed in a similar direction. Looks quite intriguing!!
Thank you for sharing these chapters with us, and I have to admit to hoping for at least one more to be posted here. đ
Warmly,
Susanne đ
Your fight scene had me cackling, what improvisational skills! The four of them seem pretty easy going as the evening wore on, and since no one is really the odd man out maybe they will all see the wisdom of just going with their instincts. Iâm anticipating hearing their subsequent conversations after the date. Thanks for introducing me to my first Bennet triplets, I hope we get to meet Mary, too.
Author
Thank you! I’m so glad you’re enjoying it. And Mary will eventually make an appearance. đ
So glad we get to meet Mary when she makes an appearance looking forward to it.
This is a brilliant twist on P and P – I am really enjoying reading and being surprised. How does Mr Bennet cope with triplets or for that matter the full of worry and nerves Mrs Bennet or do the parents not feature in this modern version?
This is a great story. I hope you will continue.
This is really good. Hoping for more.
Hi Ms. Adams! Iâm part of a Pride & Prejudice Variations group on Facebook and this story came up as a recommendation, but weâre having trouble finding it. I think it used to be on Amazon, but it isnât available there anymore. Is there any other place we can read the full story? The excerpt was wonderful!
Yes I clicked on the link for ch 4 but just get an error message…. would love to finish this story. V intriguing intro!!
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