New release-The First Moment of Their Acquaintance

I love a good short story, especially at this time of year when reading time gets more scarce! I hope you all do, too, especially when you see what great company my little tale finds itself in! An Inducement Into Matrimony was released today and includes the First Moment of Their Acquaintance, in which Darcy is persuaded by his cousins to attempt to recreate a first impression with Elizabeth Bennet. A happily ever after is guaranteed!

For sure, there’s a giveaway!–I will send you a paperback of this beauty, signed by me–just leave me a comment below to enter the giveaway.


Bingley’s colour was high, and his eyes could not be moved from Miss Bennet. With a vague sort of bowing gesture, he said, “Miss Bennet, Miss Elizabeth, allow me to present Mr William Darcy.”

“Mr William Darcy?” Elizabeth echoed with clear bemusement.
 Miss Bennet appeared enthralled by Bingley, and the older lady was engaged in another conversation; thus Elizabeth was left to converse with Darcy, which suited him very well.

“Mr Fitzwilliam Darcy is my cousin,” he told her.
Her eyes slowly roamed across his countenance.

“Your cousin?” She looked dubious. “You are very much alike, sir.”

“We have heard it all of our lives,” he said with a genial smile.
 From the corner of his eye, he noticed Bingley escorting Miss Bennet towards the set of dancers just forming. “Will you do me the honour of dancing the next with me?”

Her eyes went wide again, and a spark of mischief came into her countenance. “You are fond of dancing, Mr Darcy?”

Darcy did not falter. “Given an agreeable partner, I am.”

Her lips pursed, and he thrilled in delighted anticipation of being teased. “Are you certain I will be an agreeable partner? After all, we have only just been introduced. What if you come to find me exceedingly disagreeable?”

He chuckled. “I daresay I must take my chances, Miss Elizabeth. After all, nothing ventured, nothing gained, or so I have always believed. Shall we, then?” He gestured towards the lines of dancers. She nodded, taking his arm as they made their way towards the set.

The first part of their set was spent relating to Miss Elizabeth the story that had been agreed upon. She appeared to think it true, responding to him agreeably and even a bit warmly at times. When at last he had depleted his pre-arranged topics of conversation, they were silent for a moment. It was then that Elizabeth posed the first question of her own.
”Sir, I wonder if I might be so bold as to ask a question of you?”

Darcy smiled, noticing that the action was becoming less forced and more habitual. “Anything you like. I am well-pleased to answer.”

“Are you in your cousin’s confidence?”

“His confidence?”

She smiled, seeming a bit apologetic. “Do you know the particulars of my acquaintance with your cousin?”

Darcy was not sure how he should answer and thus prevaricated awkwardly. “Oh, ah, yes, he told me you were a fine lady and excellent company, and that I should seek you out at my earliest opportunity.”

“Did he?” Elizabeth asked. After a moment’s silence, she asked, “Was it recently that he said so? Since his return from Kent.”

“Oh, ahh, yes. Yes it was.”
Blast! He had thought long on safe topics of conversation and nevertheless she had him knotted up in tangles within minutes! He did not wish for this ‘cousin’ of his to put the real him in any sort of jeopardy. Did she think William Darcy was mocking her?

There were a few moments to gather his thoughts as they moved through a pattern and then, on an impulse, he said, “My cousin told me he considers you one of the handsomest women of his acquaintance.”

She glanced up at him. “Did he?”

Darcy nodded, rather too emphatically, but he felt himself on thin ice and wished to seek firmer ground. “Yes, but also he said he admired your wit to much the same extent as your beauty.”

Elizabeth looked at him rather doubtfully so he added, “He has always admired any lady who does not fear the improvement of her mind by extensive reading.”

Elizabeth tilted her head up towards him to reply to his comment. In so doing, her eyes held a momentary look of interest and warmth that was intoxicating. Her neck was exposed to him, the skin creamy and soft-looking and he noted, for not the first time, how particularly dainty and well-formed her ears were. He was distracted for a moment, envisioning himself placing a kiss onto the delicate skin where her jaw, her neck, and her ear were united.

He spoke without thinking. “I know you do not like to discuss books in a ballroom, but perhaps you will tell me of some of your favourites.”

He realised his mistake a moment too late. He had made reference to their conversation during their dance at Netherfield—a conversation of which William Darcy would have no knowledge.
 Frantically, Darcy began speaking, in an effort to overcome his error. “That is to say, I believe most ladies would not like to speak of books in a ballroom. Is that not true? After all, are not ladies’ heads generally filled with other things in a ballroom?”

“Such as what?” Elizabeth raised one eyebrow at him. “What is it you think my head is filled with, Mr Darcy? As we have only just met, I am interested to know what it is you would imagine I think of.”

He stammered like a fool, thoroughly unnerved. “I…I am sure I do not…the size of the room or the number of couples. There are many couples I see—” He glanced around him quickly to confirm it was true, noting thankfully that it was so “—but the room is by no means insufficient for it. That is to say, it is a fine room and the couples are…well, Hertfordshire has many handsome couples indeed and… and dancing is a charming amusement for young people. Do you like this dance?”

Elizabeth stared at him another long moment before lowering her eyes. Then, peeping at him through her lashes, she remarked, “So…you talk by rule then when you are dancing?”
 The conversation was too familiar to him. Had it been said before? Did she recall it?

His heart began to pound while he sought to determine whether he had revealed himself. He began to stammer another response but she saved him.
”I agree. I think it would be exceedingly odd to stand up together for half an hour without saying anything. I cannot abide someone who will not trouble himself to speak to his partner.”

“I agree,” he said, his heart still hammering madly. Then he considered what she said. There was a reproof in it—was there not? An intimation of his past arrogance. He decided to rectify it immediately.
 “At times, it is not the trouble which keeps a man from speaking during a dance. There are some times when a gentleman simply cannot speak.”

“Why is that?”

What did she know? It was impossible to tell. She appeared teasing… She was not angry and yet it was a chance to improve her opinion of him. He took a breath, hoping to avoid an additional misstep.

“Often times the lady with whom you most wish to dance is the self-same lady who is able to render you stupid and tongue-tied in her presence. So you are silent, not because you do not want to talk but because you cannot.”


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    • Marie H on November 1, 2022 at 8:21 am
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    This collection is fantastic. Congratulations to all of you! Now I’m off to post my review!

    1. Thank you Marie!!

      • Gillian Lester-George on November 1, 2022 at 9:31 pm
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      Love the idea of Darcy trying to reinvent himself!

    • Gerrit Kestermann on November 1, 2022 at 8:29 am
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    Congratulations! And I am off to read the rest of the story on my kindle, where it was delivered just this morning😀

    1. I hope you enjoy it!

    • Michelle on November 1, 2022 at 8:58 am
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    I thoroughly enjoyed it. Listening to them talking him into it was cracking me up so much I woke my husband up. He was a mite grumpy. 😉

    1. Ha! I think most of our husbands/spouses could do with a little support group or something! The worst (for me) is when I am cracking up in bed and you try to hold it in or giggle silently… I always end up with some huge loud snort-laugh that rocks the entire bed and makes him SUPER annoyed!

    • Laura Jimenez on November 1, 2022 at 9:35 am
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    This looks great! Now, I have to confess that I usually don’t read excerpts, especially if I have the book. As I gave the book in my TBR list, I read it asap. I did read the first paragraphs, enough to whet my appetite.

    Congratulations to all authors in this new book!

    1. Thank you Laura! I am just the opposite I LOVE excerpts and am constantly taking advantage of the “look inside” feature to see if I am interested in a story!

    • Mihaela on November 1, 2022 at 9:44 am
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    I have already the book on my kindle but I thought of first doing some minimal work before, around the house, for the good conscience you know…. (as it is Tousssaint today, holiday here in France)
    This excerpt did it for me: who needs domestic work?! And it is a holiday! 🙂

    Cannot wait to read ad see just WHO among the cousins had this genial suggestion – I have of course already kind of an idea …. And I do not mean the colonel! 🙂

    Thank you, Amy!
    (or not? – i mean my household wouldn’t thank you…. 😉

    1. Girl, I have had sheets in the dryer that need folding for like 3 days… I just keep fluffing haha!!
      Thank you!!

    • Carol OBrien on November 1, 2022 at 10:22 am
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    You’ve got my attention. I love the thought of giving Darcy the chance to explain himself and to remake himself!

    1. Thank you Carol! I do love a twist on the second chance trope!

    • amyz1965 on November 1, 2022 at 10:26 am
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    OMG! This is so good! I can’t wait to read it! I am dying to know if E is even a little bit persuaded that this is not in fact D himself.

    1. I hope you enjoy her reaction to it all!

    • DarcyBennett on November 1, 2022 at 10:41 am
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    Sounds wonderful. Thanks for the giveaway!

    1. Thank you!

    • Megan Brewer on November 1, 2022 at 10:42 am
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    I love a short story also! Sometimes it appears more challenging to write than a longer novel. I love this one!

    1. Thank you Megan! I love writing short stories because you get that chance to explore some zany ideas but you’re right it can also be hard to keep it all to a proper length!

    • Jennifer on November 1, 2022 at 11:31 am
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    Poor Darcy in trouble already; a little tongue tied and having to think quick on his feet! I do love a short story especially when i need my quick fix but don’t have time for a long read. This one sounds wonderful!

    1. Thanks Jennifer!

    • Anna Maria G on November 1, 2022 at 12:17 pm
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    I just got this fabulous collection on my Kindle and look forward to reading it. Your story seems to have the potential for great amusement.

    1. I surely hope so! Like our favorite heroine I dearly love a laugh!

    • Elodie on November 1, 2022 at 2:00 pm
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    All these novellas were so entertaining, Sayes was once again his usual outrageous self.

    1. Thank you Elodie!

    • Judy on November 1, 2022 at 2:02 pm
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    I love short story anthologies and have looked forward to this book coming out since I heard about it.

    1. Hope you enjoy it!

    • Gabriela Molina on November 1, 2022 at 4:39 pm
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    I find it interesting and look forward to continuing to read this story.

    1. Thank you!

    • Robin G. on November 1, 2022 at 5:26 pm
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    It looks wonderful. A bunch of short stories sounds perfect for the holiday season. Thank you for the excerpt and giveaway!

    1. Many thanks Robin!

    • TC on November 1, 2022 at 8:10 pm
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    I can’t wait to read all of these stories, but I want it mostly for yours. Thank you for the sneak peak and the chance to win.

    1. Aw thats so sweet! Thank you!

    • Linda A. on November 1, 2022 at 9:12 pm
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    Oh! I like it. Thank you for sharing!

    1. Thank you Linda!

    • Buturot on November 1, 2022 at 11:08 pm
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    That put a smile on my face. Love theexcerpt! Thank you for sharing and the give-away.

    • Des on November 1, 2022 at 11:53 pm
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    That was precious!
    I would love to see the conversation between Bingley and Darcy, as they cook up this scheme (pretty sure I just misspelled that).
    And of course I want to see how much deeper he digs hmself, OR truely recovers and manages to tell her more of his true self…

    • Betty Campbell Madden on November 2, 2022 at 1:59 am
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    The Cover is a hoot! It makes me want to look within.

    • Simone on November 2, 2022 at 2:49 am
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    I love to read about Darcy who is his own cousin to make a new beginning with E. The cover is very adapt to bring the story in focus.
    Do you know if and when the other book “Inducement to matrimony” is as audiobook available?

    • Carole in Canada on November 2, 2022 at 5:26 pm
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    Congratulations to all the authors! The collection was ‘superb’! I do love how Darcy breaks down in taking the advice of his cousins! Lots of chuckling was to be had in the reading! If the chance of winning is for outside the U.S. as well, I am not on Facebook.

    • Cyndy Henry on November 2, 2022 at 6:54 pm
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    Ooh, I want to know what Darcy did to himself so that Elizabeth doesn’t recognize him. This is intriguing, and I can’t wait to read it!

    • lesliegb on November 2, 2022 at 8:30 pm
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    I loved this conversation between Darcy and Elizabeth and want to see what happens next. I love your novels, Amy. Congratulations on your latest. –Leslie

    • SamH. on November 3, 2022 at 9:46 am
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    Its an amazing collection! Wish I could send my paperback copy to all the authors for their signatures. It would be epic!!!

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