Up the Garden Path

This month’s theme had me thinking that garden scenes don’t feature very often in my books, and that’s probably because ornamental gardens are rather too close to the house. Not much chance for privacy, for meaningful talks (and hopefully a swoon-worthy kiss, or several) if our dear characters are strolling under Lady Catherine’s windows or Miss Bingley’s.

The woods around Rosings, Netherfield and Longbourn are a much safer bet, and so are cliff-paths overlooking the sea, or quiet spots in the park, or garden temples a long way from the house, or Mr Darcy’s private book-room.

In my latest book though, they can stroll through the garden to their hearts’ content, safe from Lady Catherine’s meddling (and, for a while at least, safe from Mr Bingley’s sisters too) because they are already married.

I was very glad, by the way, to discover that in those days the marriage service did not include anything along the lines of ‘You may kiss the bride.’ I wanted their first kiss to be at Pemberley, and also to be rather more than a brief and tame sort of thing at the end of the wedding ceremony.

 

If you haven’t read Twists of Fate yet, here’s a little peek at that garden scene:

The circular route Darcy had chosen took them down the narrow footpath that meandered through countless clumps of rhododendrons. They were descending the steep incline, step by cautious step, and he was about to let Elizabeth know that, come April, the entire hillside would burst into a riot of colour, when all of a sudden Rufus darted between them and crossed the path in wild, uncoordinated haste, tripping her as he did so.

Darcy barely had the time to spin round and catch her. He instinctively anchored his heels in the soft, damp soil, lest they gracelessly tumble down the slope together, and the terrier’s shrill barks rent the air as Rufus gave chase to some hapless woodland creature and vanished in the undergrowth.

The small dog and his quarry might as well have fallen off the edges of the world. Darcy could not spare them another thought. He stood stock-still, lost in her gaze – lost in the gloriously unexpected moment – until a strange tightness in his chest reminded him to breathe.

He did. Air rushed into his lungs, and it was intoxicating. Because they had never stood so close. Close enough for him to find the heady fragrance of her skin in the very air that he breathed.

He drank deep, letting it flood his senses, even as wisps of reason urged him to slacken his hold around her waist. They could barely make themselves heard, those wisps of reason, yet they were irksomely insistent, so he cursed them and complied.

Light-headedness set in when, for all the slackened hold, she made no move to withdraw but remained where she was, her hand on his shoulder, her shimmering eyes never veering from his. Dark brown eyes flecked with gold, a warm glow in their depths. A glow that filled his world when Darcy dipped his head and touched his lips to hers.

He could not have drawn back if his life hung in balance when a puff of air brushed his face, and her slender frame, tense with the shock of the near-fall, loosened into abandon. Closing her eyes, she kissed him back – and it was all that he could do not to give in to the fierce onslaught of desire. By dint of sheer will, he kept the kiss light. Soft. A tender caress against her lips that deepened slowly, with gentle pressure, much as it begged to flare into ravenous possession as passion surged and burst into a blaze. Resisting it was nothing short of agony – exquisite agony, too sweet to be relinquished – and it was only when he felt his self-control inexorably slipping that he forced himself to cease playing with fire and drew back a little. A very little. But it was still beyond him to let his arm drop.

Her eyes fluttered open and, to his relief, Darcy found that they had lost nothing of their glow. If anything, they seemed to have gained an impish glimmer.

“Thank goodness for squirrels, I suppose,” Elizabeth said with a breathless little chuckle, “or whatever it was that Rufus was chasing. I should not have wished him to acquaint you with his fangs just now, if he happened to mistake the matter.”

She lightly stroked his lapel as she said that, the touch burning him through her gloves and his layers of clothing. So he could not forbear brushing her lips with his again, and his smiling eyes flicked back to hers as he whispered, “Worth it.” (Twists of Fate © 2021 Joana Starnes).

 

I hope you’ll be pleased to hear that in my next book a stroll in the garden will also lead to their first kiss (or at least that’s the plan 😀 ). I would have loved to give you a sneak peek at that scene too, but it’s not written yet. Our favourite couple haven’t made it into the garden. They’re still in the music room, putting up with Miss Bingley who is trying very hard indeed to get in the way (but all she manages to do is make an utter nuisance of herself).

For now, let me share some pictures of the gardens that have inspired me:

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(Photos J Starnes)

Thanks for stopping by to walk up and down the garden path with me today! Enjoy the end of summer and see you again soon.

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    • denise on August 23, 2021 at 12:13 am
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    What a wonderful excerpt!

    1. Thanks, Denise! I’m so glad you liked it.

    • Katie Jackson on August 23, 2021 at 1:32 am
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    I love that excerpt and the beautiful photos! Thanks for sharing, Joana!

    1. I’m so glad you enjoyed them, Katie! Thanks for stopping by to have a look.

    • Diana Birchall on August 23, 2021 at 3:47 am
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    Ah, what a kiss! Thanks for the glorious slide show, too.

    1. Thanks for reading, Diana. I’m so glad you liked the post and the photos!

    • Glynis on August 23, 2021 at 4:16 am
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    Fabulous! Definitely ‘worth it’! I do wonder how Elizabeth trained Rufus to do that? 🙂
    As for your next book? Putting up with Miss Bingley in the music room is bad enough, please don’t let her find them in the garden! 🙏
    Love your photos! I hope your tree is surviving, although it must be missing you as we didn’t even get to visit it last time thanks to the constant downpour (although we did manage to visit the scones! 😉)
    Thank you for sharing this lovely scene, I do love reading this along with their night time encounter! 😉🥰🥰

    1. LOL Glynis I love that thought! Maybe she did train him 😀
      Love this thought too: ‘Putting up with Miss Bingley in the music room is bad enough, please don’t let her find them in the garden!’ Well, Miss Bingley is no walker, so she had better stay put.
      I do hope the tree is safe! The last time I checked it was roped off to protest some new planting, but it was ages ago. Could’ve been as far back as Dec 2019
      Thanks so much for all the love for this book, and I hope we get to visit the scones again!

    • Alexandra on August 23, 2021 at 8:23 am
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    Rufus is a sweetheart and–this time!– he managed to act with tact. 😉
    I’m definitely pleased to hear about your next book!
    The only downside is that it’s not written yet. Darn… (You know the remedy for this!)
    Thank you for sharing this scene and the teaser…
    (Loved the garden photos!)

    1. Thanks so much, Alexandra!
      Yep, I do know the remedy for that 😉 On it! I’ll carry my notebook wherever I go.
      I’m so glad you liked the garden photos too. Fingers crossed, the world will stop running mad soon, and maybe you can pop over and see them in person. Take care and have a good end of summer.

    • Regina on August 23, 2021 at 9:42 am
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    The slide show of gardens that have inspired you is exquisite!

    1. I’m so glad you liked the photos, Regina! Thanks for stopping by to have a look.

    • Robin G. on August 23, 2021 at 12:55 pm
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    Your pictures are glorious, and I love the one with you in a tree. I can see Elizabeth doing the same. Thank you for sharing!

    1. Thank *you*, Robin! I’m so glad you liked the pics!
      I love that tree! Hope it’s still there and in one piece. The flash flood they had in 2019 didn’t affect that part of the garden, thank goodness.
      Take care and have a good week!

    • Deborah on August 23, 2021 at 1:54 pm
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    I loved their garden walk here❤️
    The gardens in your slide are gorgeous! I went down some lovely rabbit holes looking up a few of the locations in your photos. Sigh. Within the garden at Stourhead, The Temple of Apollo structure brings the wedding night pavilion in The Journey Home to Pemberley perfectly to mind❤️ I also tried (and failed-gah!) to read the writing on your notebook at Lyme Park by our Pemberley😉. Does it contain the beginnings of a new journey, or a remembrance for one taken? I would love to get my hands on it!

    1. Thanks so much, Deborah! I’m so happy that the pics took you for a little spell down the rabbit hole, and that you were reminded of the pavilion in the Journey Home :))
      Sorry the notebook was too far away and you couldn’t read the writing! It’s an older photo (2016) and I think the notes are scenes from ‘Mr Bennet’s Dutiful Daughter. Haven’t had the chance to sit and scribble there since the winter of 2019, but fingers crossed…
      Take care, thanks for everything and I hope you’re having a sunny and peaceful end of summer!

    • Amanda Brooks on August 23, 2021 at 5:54 pm
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    Delightful, as always!

    1. Thank you, Amanda! I’m so happy you liked the post!

    • Betty Madden on August 23, 2021 at 11:38 pm
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    A very enjoyable story, once again, by Joana Starnes.

    1. Thanks so much, Betty! I’m so happy you enjoyed it!

  1. Joana, your writing is always so lovely, and so is your garden. I am envious of your green thumb. The only thing I can grow are tomatoes…not that I am complaining about tomatoes. They are delicious with a pinch of salt, or in homemade salsa. We’ve been eating a lot of that lately! Thank you for sharing such an enjoyable excerpt 🙂

    1. Thanks so much for your wonderful words about my writing, Susan! I love your books! I’m so glad you liked the photos from my rambles. I don’t know about my green thumb, I haven’t done much in my garden over the last few years, just left the perennials to do their thing and hope they’ll keep coming back. I used to grow tomatoes too, but that was a while ago. Cherry tomatoes were alright, but other varieties were a bit tasteless & not that fond of the English climate. Have a lovely time growing yours, and writing! Best of luck with your latest and lots of inspiration for the next one!

    • Luciana Campelo on August 29, 2021 at 7:56 pm
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    I am delighted and happy to have read it. Thank you for sharing.

    1. Thank *you*, Luciana! I’m so happy you liked it!

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