Throw Back Thursday – Pemberley Ranch

Regency and Reconstruction

The Cajun Cheesehead Chronicles by Jack Caldwell

Greetings, everyone. Jack Caldwell here.

Way back in the Dark Ages—the early 2000’s—I had discovered Fan Fiction Boards while searching for a sequel to Pride and Prejudice. As I worked during the day, I read fan fiction at night. My wife likes to go to bed early, so we would discuss what I read the next morning over breakfast. I’d not only talk about the plot, but any mistakes I felt the author was making.

Let me let you in to something about me. You don’t want to watch a movie with me. I will spend the whole time filling your ear, pointing out all the plot holes, unresolved issues, and irrational actions by the characters. My wife, bless her soul, puts up with this character defect of mine—mostly.

So, this went on for several years, until in early 2004. My lovely wife one morning reached over the breakfast table, took my hand, looked deeply into my eyes, and said … Okay, big mouth, can you do any better?

So, I started writing. The result was THE THREE COLONELS, a sequel to Pride and Prejudice and Sense and Sensibility. It was so well received on the boards that I continued to write and post. I now have nine published novels, with three more (at least) on the way.

One morning in 2006, my wife and I watched a TV report of the March of the Protestant Orange Order through the Catholic neighborhoods of Belfast, commemorating the 1690 Battle of the Boyne. This annual “thumb in the eye” by the Protestants to the Catholics ticked me off.

You see, my people were Protestant immigrants from Northern Ireland to Virginia, and later Kentucky, in 1727. Once my family branch arrived in Louisiana (about 1830), they would occasionally marry Catholics. I myself was baptized Methodist, but became Roman Catholic later in life. As far as anyone in my family could remember, no one had problems with the majority Catholics here in the Bayou State.

Also, I knew people who were Reenactors—mostly Civil War Reenactors. They did this to honor the men who fought and died. The funny thing about reenactors is that while they mostly dressed as the troops from their home state, there was always those who did not. Men from Pennsylvania wore the gray of the Confederacy while Mississippians dressed in Yankee Blue. It is all done in fellowship.

I pointed out to my wife that the United States was not a prisoner of its past, like much of the rest of the world. If it was, I would have never married Barbara, for she was the child of a couple from Wisconsin and I was a Cajun. In fact, most Americans would find such an idea stupid.

Why? What makes the people in this country different? After all, the Civil War happened only 158 years ago, and it cost America 600,000 lives. My father’s family fought for the Confederacy, while my mother’s fought for the Union. I wanted to explore that. I then realized I could use the plot of Pride and Prejudice to do so. Thus, the genesis of what would be my first published novel: PEMBERLEY RANCH.

PEMBERLEY RANCH is both an exploration of Reconstruction in Texas (Georgia has already been done—it’s called Gone With the Wind) and a mystery. The setting is 1870 Central Texas, five years after the war, near a town called Rosings along the Long Branch River.

From the back cover:

 

When the smoke has cleared from the battlefields and the Civil War has finally ended, fervent Union supporter Beth Bennet reluctantly moves with her family from their home in Meryton, Ohio to the windswept plains of Rosings, Texas. Handsome, haughty Will Darcy, a Confederate officer back from the war, owns half the land around Rosings, and his even-haughtier cousin, Cate Burroughs, owns the other half.

In a town as small as Rosings, Beth and Will inevitably cross paths. But as Will becomes enchanted with the fiery Yankee, Beth won’t allow herself to warm to the man who represents the one thing she hates the most—the army that killed her only brother.

But when carpetbagger George Whitehead arrives in Rosings, all that Beth thought to be true is turned on its head, and the only man who can save her home is the one she swore she’d never trust …

 

This is like nothing you’ve ever read. This is Pride and Prejudice on steroids.

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(From Chapter 1:)

Rosings, Texas—September, 1870

A lone figure sat astride a tall, black Arabian under a single oak tree atop a ridge. It was a hot day, and in the early afternoon sun, the shade was welcomed by horse and rider alike, standing as still as a statue. He was a tall man in a white shirt with dark trousers and black boots, his unbuttoned vest flapping in the slight breeze, a tan, wide-brimmed, ten-gallon hat pulled low over his brow. Before him stretched a sea of prairie, dotted with hundreds of cattle, lowing and grazing. They were not alone; a handful of wranglers carefully moved their cowponies around the vast herd, keeping an eye out for trouble. The movement of the horses disturbed the man’s mount, and he reached down to gently stroke its neck.

“Whoa there, Caesar, rest easy,” William Darcy cooed. “We’ll just stay here under the shade for now. Enjoy the cool.” The stallion nodded his head in apparent agreement and bent to take a few nibbles of grass. The man’s attention returned to the scene before him, his bright blue eyes taking in every detail.

A flash of moving white caught his attention. He turned away from his perusal of the herd and twisted in the saddle. There! Across the ridge of hills was a rider, moving fast. Darcy narrowed his eyes in concentration. The horse was a brown-and-white paint, and none of his riders had such a horse. A stranger—on his land! Caesar began to prance in place, feeling his master’s tension through the reins.

The rider seemed to be alone, and while Darcy had left his gun belt and Colt revolver at the house, he did have a rifle holstered to his saddle. “What say we go check that out, boy?” The horse agreed, and they loped down the hill.

Darcy moved at an angle to the stranger, holding Caesar back until necessary. The intruder was at a full gallop, flying across the crest. Darcy lost sight of the paint as he reached the valley between the hills, and he allowed Caesar his head. The stallion dug in and moved quickly up the rise, and Darcy saw with confidence that he was in the proper position to cut off the paint. Caesar spotted his quarry and headed toward the other horse, waiting for direction from his master.

As they grew closer, Darcy could see that the rider and paint moved in perfect harmony. The horse was rather small, but so was the rider. A boy? Darcy thought, before noticing the wild, curly hair flying on either side of the rider’s hat. As Darcy pulled to a halt, blocking the paint’s progress, a shock of realization coursed through him. That’s no boy—that’s a girl! A girl in men’s clothing!

He pulled his hand away from his rifle, and unarmed, raised his palm in an unmistakable sign. “Hold on, miss!”

The surprised girl came to a halt a few feet away, dust swirling in the breeze. She had on a red-and-white gingham shirt and dungarees, boots firmly in the stirrups. She wore a wide-brimmed floppy hat, shading her face, but even at that distance, he could see her blazing eyes.

“What do you want?”

Her voice was lower than Darcy expected from so short a person—she could not be more than five feet two inches—but it was not unpleasant to his ears, though it was Northern and unfriendly. Darcy was not used to answering demands from anyone in the last four years, and he wasn’t going to change for some strange female.

“Who are you?” he demanded. “This is private property. Who gave you leave to ride across Pemberley?”

“Private?” It was clear he surprised her. “All this? I thought this was open range.”

“Not hardly. Everything this side of the Long Branch belongs to Pemberley Ranch.” He considered her. “You’re not from around here, are you?”

The girl raised her chin. “We are now. Our place is across the river. My father owns the farm there.”

Darcy relaxed a bit. “The old Thompson place?” She answered with a nod. “You’re one of Tom Bennet’s daughters? I was told he had a herd of them.” Almost immediately he recognized how his choice of words could be considered an insult, but it was too late.

The girl’s voice was ice cold. “Tom Bennet is indeed my father, sir, and I thank you for your kind observations about my family. Now, if you’ll pardon me.” She pulled her reins to return from whence she came, only to be halted by Darcy’s words.

“I’ll escort you back to the ford, miss, if you don’t mind.”

She looked over her shoulder at him. “I do mind. You’ve made it clear that I’m not welcomed here, and I can see myself home. Good day.” To her increased irritation, Darcy fell in beside her. “I see there was no cause for me to voice my preference!”

“The ground is uneven here, and as it’s unfamiliar to you, you might meet with misfortune.”

“So—I cannot ride my horse, is that what you mean?”

Darcy snapped back, “I truly don’t wish to offend, miss, but you’re being mighty stubborn! Your pony might fall into some gopher hole and break his leg and have to be put down. Now, I call that a tall price to pay for your pride!”

The girl said nothing, she only lowered her head. But Darcy could see the color rise on her cheek as she bit her lip. The two rode in silence for some time along the ridgeline before turning right and making their way down to the river. The trees grew more plentiful and thick next to the riverbank. Darcy tried to come up with some conversation, but the girl’s studied avoidance of his glance stilled his tongue. After a few more minutes, they reached a shallow ford across the Long Branch.

“Well, here we are—Thompson Crossing. Your daddy’s farm’s on the other side. I reckon this is how you crossed over?”

The girl’s sarcastic side reasserted itself. “It is. Thank you so much for assuring I didn’t cause Turner any injury. I am forever grateful!”

Darcy blinked. “Turner? Your horse’s name is Turner?”

A grin stole across her face. “It is, sir.”

“Strange. Most girls name their ponies Star or Brownie or Buster.”

Her grin turned into a mocking smile. “But I’m not like most girls, as I’m sure you’ve discovered.” With that, she spurred the paint across the ford, splashing water everywhere, leaving a bemused Darcy behind. He shook his head before turning Caesar back toward the Pemberley ranch house. It was only then he realized that he had neglected to introduce himself.

No harm done, he thought. It’s not likely we’ll meet up again.

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For a video introduction to PEMBERLEY RANCH, open the link below:

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Until next time, this has been the Cajun Cheesehead Chronicles.

It takes a real man to write historical romance, so let me tell you a story…

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    • Agnes on May 2, 2019 at 4:09 am
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    Thank you for revealing the origins of this book idea. Interestingly, I always supposed that it started from the P&P angle (wanting to explore P&P in a different setting that held significance for you) rather than exploring the historical situation of Reconstruction era viewing it through a P&P lense. I love the result anyway!
    P. S. Any developments on the Rosings Park front? Since you mentioned T3C… Or whatever it is you are writing now. I hope you don’t really mind nagging from readers 🙂

    1. Thanks for the comments. Yes, I do look at (most) of my stories first through a historical lens, then the entertainment lens. It’s backwards from most of the authors in this genre, but then, I’m a guy, so …

      Anyhow, on the ROSINGS PARK front, there’s good news and good news. The first draft is done, but … (you knew there was one) … my editors and cold readers thought I had written TWO great books, not one. So, I will edit the book to create ROSINGS PARK (focusing on Sir Richard Fitzwilliam and his wife, the former Anne de Bourgh) and BROTHER OF THE BRIDE (a Darcy-centric comedy). ROSINGS PARK should come out this year, along with PERSUADED TO SAIL, and look for BROTHER OF THE BRIDE in 2020.

        • Agnes on May 2, 2019 at 9:05 am
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        Well, two books instead of one should be good news (even if it means more work for you!) – especially if the added bonus of the story of Capt. Wentworth, Anne and Dr. Maturin (if my memories don’t mislead me) is coming out this year as well!

        1. You mean the mysterious MR. AIKEN ROHAN (copyright issues, you know)! Don’t worry, Frederick and Anne will be on the Laconia, too!

  1. Thank you for what lead to the writing of Pemberley Ranch. I read it when it first came out and found it very interesting how in entwined all of the characters from Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice into this novel. I really enjoyed it and have read it once again recently. A job well done Mr. Caldwell!

    1. Thank you, MaryAnn.

  2. Hey, Jack. As a native Texan and Pride and Prejudice variation fan and author, I read ‘Pemberley Ranch several years ago and enjoyed it. I think it’s time to read it again. And Congratulations! You got excellent reviews for the book as well. 🙂

    1. Thanks, Gianna. Those who read the book with an open mind enjoyed it. Those whose minds are closed by propaganda panned it as being “pro-Southern.” It was not. Kid Denny and his gang were Bushwackers from Missouri who claimed allegiance to the Confederacy, but were really terrorist criminals. In fact most of the bad guys in the book were Southerners. That the US Civil War was far more complicated than most folks are taught should come as no surprise. The point of the book was not the great division but how the US came back together far more rapidly then one would expect, given the amount of devastation and death.

      As for Texas, my brother and his wife recently moved to Dallas, joining my niece and her new husband. (But, they ain’t Cowboy fans. Geaux Saints!)

        • Agnes on May 2, 2019 at 9:15 am
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        What a stupid and baseless criticism. The point of the book was forgiveness, acceptance, judging people based on their merit as persons rather than based on their affiliations – political, ideological, religious or otherwise.

        1. It was dumb then and is dumb now. But some places–including universities–consider themselves “safe spaces” from different opinions. IMHO, this is the exact opposite of education.

    • Audrey on May 2, 2019 at 6:49 am
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    I read this when it first came out and really enjoyed it. I think it is time to read it again!

    I am looking forward to your new books!

    1. Audrey, thank you!

    • J. W. Garrett on May 2, 2019 at 8:38 am
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    Well, you have been busy. Thanks to Agnes … she used T3C in the above comments. I like that and will shamelessly use it. Jack, T3C broke my heart in places and you nearly made me cry. That was not nice. I remember when I first read Pemberley Ranch. It was during my early discovery of JAFF and I couldn’t believe the canon story could translate so well in Texas of all places. However, I thought you handled that very well. After reading your bio and research info at the beginning of this post, I now realize the significance of the religious element in that story. Well done. I have read several other works of yours, several are still ‘lost in space’ in my TBR pile and several still on my wish-list. I look forward to your next launch and wish you the best.

    1. I gotta admit, THE THREE COLONELS and CRESCENT CITY are my favorite children. That I can make you laugh, cry, and cheer means a lot. War and disasters are not nice, but that humanity–with grace–can overcome it is the story of our civilization. Thanks.

        • J. W. Garrett on May 2, 2019 at 10:52 am
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        As my grandmother would say… that will preach, brother… that will preach.

    • Debra Perrin on May 2, 2019 at 10:54 am
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    I loved Pemberley Ranch. As a Brit, I do struggle to understand more than the basics about your civil war but this book made it quite clear and I love your D& E.

    1. My work here is done. 🙂 Thanks!

    • Frances on May 2, 2019 at 5:52 pm
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    Your book sounded interesting so I went on amazon to check out the reviews. I was dismayed to find there was explicit sexual content. Why oh why do authors have to put this in a P&P story. I hope I am in the majority who like to read “clean “ stories. I would assume the others who will read M rated stories will read clean stories. But those of us who read clean stories won’t read the M rated stories. It’s a shame you will cut out a whole group of customers. Thank you.
    You could say I can just skip over the offending parts, but I don’t choose to spend my money to advance similar types of stories.

      • Debra Perrin on May 3, 2019 at 8:56 am
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      I’ve read Pemberley Ranch numerous times and don’t recall any explicit content. There are swear words, violence and sexual innuendo but noting graphic at all. Hope that helps, Frances.

      1. Thank you, Debra.

      • Agnes on May 6, 2019 at 5:46 am
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      Frances, I can see your point. In this book, however, the sexual content is one short occurrence. It’s explicit but not graphic or detailed, it’s not gratuitous as it helps the character to realize the depth of his feelings for the woman in question. One of the reasons I liked this book is its very strong and sound moral orientation, so I don’t group this book together with ones to avoid (or avoid supporting by purchasing it) based on ethical principles. Of course, it’s up to your taste and conscience.

    • Frances on May 3, 2019 at 10:24 am
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    Thanks Debra for your input. However, at least four reviews mention sexual content, so I am going by that. I honestly don’t see the necessity in that kind of story.

    1. I’m sorry those reviews put you off, Frances. For some people, a necessary five-page, non-graphic, dream sequence in a 363-page novel about acceptance, justice, grace, and reunification is too much. That’s okay. Some people like tomato soup, others split pea soup.

      I hope you will give my other novels a try, such as MR. DARCY CAME TO DINNER, THE COMPANION OF HIS FUTURE LIFE, THE PLAINS OF CHALMETTE, and THE LAST ADVENTURE OF THE SCARLET PIMPERNEL. There’s nothing to object to in those, I promise!

      Happy reading, Frances!

  3. I loved this book and it was one of the first JAFFs I bought, back when I was pregnant with my now first-grader. It’s fascinating to read the genesis of the story. Thanks for sharing!

    1. Thanks, Elizabeth!

    • Agnes on May 6, 2019 at 5:24 am
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    Oh dear. I had forgotten about copyright 🙂 Anyway, I love the historical nautical setting, and Frederick&Anne at least can be their original canon based character. I suppose you have to change the above character as well, at least not to be obviously recognizable?

    1. Aiken is a VERY different character, but I think you’ll like him!

    • Sheila L. Majczan on May 6, 2019 at 11:48 am
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    I did read and enjoy this book, as well as a number of your other books, Jack. My Great Grandfather, James Alphaeus Fuller, from Alabama, fought in the Civil War. (Not bragging – just stating a fact.) My parents took us to visit a number of battle sites in the south when we would visit our grandparents, M/M Covington in Mississippi. I also visited the Gettysburg battle site numerous times with my parents and with my children. When I worked in Texas while my husband was stationed at Ft. Hood I was called “the nicest damn Yankee she knew” by the one secretary. I found that amusing. That was back in the early 1970’s. Just telling of my own familiarity with the Civil War – not just having read of it in a history book or a novel.

    1. Thank you for telling your story. I have no doubt you’re a very nice damn Yankee! 🙂

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