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Good Morning!

February is here, and with it I bring you the announcement! Last week, I had an idea for a Valentine’s novella hit me out of the blue. I dropped my other WIP and went at it, writing 30,000 words in two days. TWO DAYS!

Oh, boy, my hands hurt SO bad, but it was such a cute story and it came together really well!
The story is titled Love Unfeigned,  and takes place in January and February of 1812, after Jane goes to London to stay with the Gardiners. Here’s the blurb!

Escape to London? Elizabeth Bennet is happy to. Her mother has been unbearable ever since Elizabeth refused to marry her odious cousin. Besides which, her beloved sister Jane is in London, heartbroken, and much in need of Elizabeth’s help. Jane’s recovery from her suitor’s defection is utmost in Elizabeth’s mind, until she receives a letter filled with romantic sentiments from the only source less likely than her already-refused cousin, the aggravating, arrogant, obnoxious Mr. Darcy.

Darcy has tried to purge Elizabeth Bennet from his thoughts and heart, but her fine eyes and pert opinions haunt him even in his sleep. When a letter arrives from Elizabeth Bennet, the machinations of someone close to him come to light. Delighted at the chance to pursue inclination rather than expectation, Darcy continues the correspondence started by another.

When untold truths surface, Elizabeth must decide if she can trust the gentleman with whom she has fallen deeply in love, and Darcy must do everything he can to persuade her that he is not the same unfeeling man she despised in Hertfordshire. Love Unfeigned is a sweet, low-angst Darcy and Elizabeth novella that brings an early happily ever after for our dear couple.

 

What do you think? The story isn’t entirely epistolary, though ODC exchange letters in every chapter! I actually did a little research about Valentine’s Day in Regency England. They didn’t have boxes of chocolate (sadly) but they did do other things! Some of them are listed below.

  1. Exchanging Valentine’s Cards: People, especially the upper class, would exchange hand-made cards or written notes, often with sentimental poetry or declarations of affection. These cards were often decorated with intricate designs, and some were even embossed or had lace trimmings. However, unlike today, they were less commercial and more personal.
  2. Love Poems and Letters: A common tradition was writing and sending love poems or heartfelt letters to express affection. Some individuals, especially those in courtship or with secret admirers, would write elaborate verses or use popular romantic poetry to convey their feelings.
  3. Gifts: Small gifts, often symbolic of affection or courtship, could be exchanged. These gifts could range from flowers (especially roses), handkerchiefs, or keepsakes. The Regency era was full of subtle social codes, and a Valentine’s gift could express deeper affection or even a proposal for marriage.
  4. Ballads and Music: Songs and ballads celebrating love were also popular during this time. Some young women and men might gather to sing or listen to romantic songs, which were often part of social events like gatherings or balls.
  5. “Drawing Names” or “Valentine Drawings”: One of the more popular traditions, especially among younger people, was the practice of drawing names. Single men and women would often draw names of potential suitors, and the name they drew was considered their “Valentine.” This was sometimes a fun way to spark romantic interest, though it could also be a light-hearted and playful event.
  6. Public and Private Gatherings: While the Regency period still held to certain social codes, private gatherings, tea parties, or balls might include themes of courtship, and Valentine’s Day was a natural occasion to gather socially and express admiration.

Pretty neat, right? It wasn’t as commercialized as modern celebrations, but it was still a day for people to express romantic sentiment.

UNFORTUNATELY, I did not get the preorder up in time. I am SO sorry, so if you wanted to preorder, PLEASE forgive me! Until then, here is the FIRST chapter! I hope you enjoy it!

January 1812
Darcy House
Georgiana

Georgiana Darcy watched her brother, concern filling her heart. He had not been himself since he returned to London at the end of last November. His reserved nature, usually absent when in the privacy of their home, seemed ever present. He gazed at nothing as though deep in thought, and his lips often turned down into a decidedly unhappy expression.

If I did not know any better, I would think someone had died. Georgiana wondered if her brother’s preoccupation had something to do with her folly. Last summer, she had most unwisely attempted to elope with the son of their father’s former steward. It had not come to fruition—her brother had come to the house in Ramsgate unexpectedly, and she had felt compelled to tell him everything. 

Never had she disappointed him more, and her shame had compounded until he departed for Hertfordshire last autumn. His letters had been full of the usual tidbits about the neighborhood, and he had mentioned a few of the families more than once.

A strange idea crept into Georgiana’s mind, and she almost dismissed it out of hand. No, she thought. It is not possible. My brother? In love? The idea seemed tantalizingly close to the truth. Glancing across the room, she observed her usually unflappable brother. He sat forward with his elbows on his knees and his hands clasped beneath his chin. Fitzwilliam stared into the fire, and she thought she detected a look of pain in his expression. 

If there was one thing Georgiana could recognize, it was a broken heart. What happened in Hertfordshire? she wondered. Like any good sister, she felt it was her duty to decipher her brother’s strange mood. And so, on the following day, whilst Fitzwilliam was out, Georgiana crept into his rooms to have a look around.

The master’s chambers had changed very little since her father died. They had changed the rug—it was now green, blue, and tan instead of red and gold. Heavy drapes matched the rug, and the furniture had been reupholstered as well. Fitzwilliam’s rooms were in pristine condition—not a thing was out of place. His valet, Brisby, disliked clutter of any kind. 

Georgiana drifted to the writing desk, hoping to find an explanation amongst her brother’s letters. Carefully, she opened the writing case and leafed through the stack of letters inside. There were a few from Pemberley’s steward, and one from Lady Catherine, that had yet to be opened. She recognized Mr. Bingley’s untidy scrawl across one, and she picked it up. Unfolding the papers, she scanned the brief note.

Darcy,

I cannot help but think you are wrong. Miss Bennet surely loved me as I love her. I fear if I do not return to Hertfordshire, my heart will burst. Pray, come with me to Gentleman Jack’s tomorrow—you can beat some sense into me.

Bingley

The note was dated the day previous—Fitzwilliam had gone to Gentleman Jack’s that afternoon. Georgiana frowned. She recognized the name Bennet. Her brother had written of the family, but she did not recall the details. I shall have to investigate my letters when I am finished here, she thought. Moving Mr. Bingley’s letter aside, she continued to leaf through her brother’s letters. There was nothing in his correspondence to indicate why he might be suffering from depressed spirits. 

Her gaze drifted to a stack of unfinished missives stacked neatly on one side of the writing box. There was one to the steward and another to Richard—Colonel Fitzwilliam. Huffing in irritation, Georgiana moved to stack the papers again. A single sheet slid out from the bottom of the stack and drifted silently to the floor. Curiously, she set the stack aside and retrieved the missive and read it.

Dearest, loveliest Elizabeth,

It has been two months since I beheld your face. Never have I known such agony! Your fine eyes haunt me in my sleep, twinkling with mischief in my dreams. How I long to caress your chocolate curls, to feel their silken texture wrapped around my fingers. 

Performing my duty has never been the onerous and unwanted task it now seems. I have learned, from infancy, to take pride in my name and position. Being born to privilege comes with specific obligations, or so my mother and father taught me. Now, after so many years, I have cause to resent it all. Had I been born the son of a tradesman, or that of a minor country gentleman, I could have you. But your position in life, so decidedly beneath my own, prevents me from making you my wife. 

Many nights I have attempted to convince myself that you and I are equals—I am a gentleman, and you are a gentleman’s daughter. But alas, this is not enough to outweigh the drawbacks of offering for you. Your mother and younger sisters behave with an extreme lack of decorum. I know you understand, for I witnessed your mortification at the Netherfield Ball. Even your father could not exert himself to behave with propriety, I am sorry to say.

More than this, your connections to trade are impossible to overcome. What would my parents say if they knew I meant to offer the position of Mistress of Pemberley to one whose blood is so tainted? 

If I raised your expectations, I am very sorry. When it came time for me to leave Hertfordshire, I thought it best to depart without bidding you farewell. I could not bear the grief in your eyes as you comprehended the truth of the situation. Dearest Elizabeth, please forgive me. Please understand that if I were a lesser man, I would give myself to you in but a moment. Our respective stations, vastly different, keep us apart.

I love you,
Fitzwilliam Darcy

Never had Georgiana read something so insulting and romantic at the same time. So, her brother was in love with Miss Elizabeth Bennet. She recalled the name—he had written of her many times, admiring her ability to put Miss Bingley in her place without lobbing insults. 

What is this drivel about position? she asked. Her brother’s explanation about how marrying Mr. Wickham would lower her status rang in her mind. It was not the same in this situation. Marrying Elizabeth would raise the lady’s status to that of his own. The connections to trade could not be so easily explained away, but she thought her brother rather hypocritical. His closest friend, besides Richard, was Mr. Bingley, a man whose fortune came from his father’s success in trade. Miss Elizabeth held a greater position in society than Miss Bingley!

She would need time to think and plan. Fitzwilliam deserved happiness, and Georgiana would ensure he had it. It was the least she could do after her behavior last summer.

Drop a comment below and tell me what you think!  Will Georgiana succeed in whatever meddlesome plan she concocts? I’ll pick TWO LUCKY WINNERS to receive a copy of Love Unfeigned!

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    • Dés on February 1, 2025 at 12:45 am
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    Whoop, what a sweet thought and approach to our beloved story!
    Of COURSE, Georgiana will succeed!
    HOWEVER!
    However, I am sure it is going to be quite the bumpy and probably embarassing ride on either side for ODC.
    We’ll be sitting and watching and laughing, and pulling at our hair, shouting at the screen: “Just TALK to each other, for heaven’s sake!”
    I would love to see some very disappointed Ms Bingley moments in there. And maybe a set-down or two for the Bennet parents.
    But that may be too distracting from the lovely Valentine’s scope of the story.
    So yes, I can’t WAIT to read the rest!!!
    Oh, and hope your hand is feeling better by now.

    • Tzippy on February 1, 2025 at 12:49 am
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    The struggles Darcy expressed in his letter to Elizabeth are both moving and shocking. I can’t wait to read what Georgiana will do! This is so exciting. Looking forward to reading the story!

    • Sophia on February 1, 2025 at 3:33 am
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    It seems like the smallest Darcy has a heart for mischief and I do have a feeling that her first letter to Elizabeth will start a snowball of Valentines and romantic feelings between D&E ❤️
    Let the fun and romance begin!

    • Sabrina on February 1, 2025 at 4:17 am
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    A very interesting premise. I’m looking forward to read the book.

    • Jen on February 1, 2025 at 5:34 am
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    I had no idea that they observed Valentine’s Day (I had always thought it might be an anachronism when referenced) – interesting.
    Of course Georgiana will succeed – in stirring the pot, this is an ODC Valentine’s story 🙂
    Thank you for sharing!

  1. Ooh, I love a Georgiana who schemes (in her kindly way)! No need to enter me into the drawing, MJ. Just wanted to say congrats and wow — 30,000 words in two days! Super impressive!

    • Julie Goodman on February 1, 2025 at 6:45 am
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    She will succeed! Congrats on your new book.

    • SAF on February 1, 2025 at 8:23 am
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    Love the idea of Georgianna helping her brother. I can’t wait to read more!

      • Helyn Roberts on February 16, 2025 at 2:38 am
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      Of course Georgiana must succeed .. Lizzy Bennet is her soul sister and that’s a great find!

    • DarcyBennett on February 1, 2025 at 8:31 am
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    At first I thought Georgiana would just send the letter on but that was before she read the content of it. Definitely would need some revision. I’m sure whatever she plans is a success.

    • Jennifer Redlarczyk on February 1, 2025 at 8:59 am
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    Delightful excerpt! AND perfect for Valentines Day from what you have said. That Georgiana…. reading her brothers letters. Hmm. Should be fun.

    • Karyn on February 1, 2025 at 8:59 am
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    Wonderful! I can’t wait to see what mischief Georgiana gets up to!

    • Darcy Coggins on February 1, 2025 at 9:17 am
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    February is my favorite- Valentines, hearts, roses, sweet treats, romance, my birthday! I do a P&P movie marathon to celebrate ODC. This chapter is a welcome tease; I cannot wait for the rest! 🥰❤️👒🎩

    • Marilyn Craig on February 1, 2025 at 9:28 am
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    So nice to step away from all around me into the stories you write…thank you. Onward!

    • Rachael on February 1, 2025 at 10:55 am
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    Love it so far and can’t wait to read it! Of course Georgiana will succeed, but probably Darcy will be upset that his sweet sister is taking matters into her own hands.

    • Jennifer on February 1, 2025 at 11:02 am
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    Romantic Georgiana will fix what her brother bungles up. I love when Georgiana gets involved. I can’t wait to read the the rest and see maybe more Valentines and sweet sentiments passed along.

    • Sheila L. Majczan on February 1, 2025 at 11:05 am
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    Best of luck with this release. Thanks for a chance to win. Interesting facts about Valentine’s Day. Thanks for sharing.

    • Val W on February 1, 2025 at 11:15 am
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    A fun start! I look forward to the rest of the story. I’m going to go out on a limb and say, yes, Georgiana is going to succeed in bringing ODC together. 😉

    • Ginna on February 1, 2025 at 12:01 pm
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    Looking forward to it!

    Glad to learn that you have a new book coming up.

    • Stavis Adelle on February 1, 2025 at 1:06 pm
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    What a wonderful first chapter!!! So glad you did not resist this particular attack by a killer (plot) bunny. Can’t wait for more of the story.

    1. I’m glad I didn’t, too! I’m back to my WIP now.

    • Meg on February 1, 2025 at 2:57 pm
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    Wonderful! I look forward to reading it in its entirety. Happy Frienship/Valentine’s Day!

    1. Thanks! You too!

    • Wendy J on February 1, 2025 at 4:57 pm
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    Love Unfeigned sounds delightful. I’ll put it in my book list for purchase as soon as it becomes available on Kindle.

    1. Preorder is up now! Coming February 8th!

    • Jume on February 1, 2025 at 7:45 pm
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    I think Georgie needs to give her brother a good talking to. I can just see her refusing to let him interrupt her tirade. The poor girl will probably cry her eyes out afterward, but he deserves it!

    • Maria M on February 1, 2025 at 8:01 pm
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    This sounds so fun. Georgian taking charge to see her brother have his true love. Go Georgiana

    • Linda A. on February 1, 2025 at 8:08 pm
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    I can’t wait to see how G pulls D’s head out of his — without letting on that she read his letter to E. Congratulations on the new book.

    • Kaidi on February 1, 2025 at 8:08 pm
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    Ooooo this sounds like an interesting premise!!! I guess I’ll have to wait to see if smart little scheming Georgie (hopefully) edits that letter that Darcy was writing before it is sent!!

    • TC on February 1, 2025 at 8:14 pm
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    While I don’t love fully epistolary novels, I do love having lots of letters or notes in a book. And Georgiana will certainly succeed.

    1. It’s not fully epistolary! <3 Lots of letters, though!

    • Glory on February 1, 2025 at 10:17 pm
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    Congratulations on the new story! It will be interesting to see how it all plays out & how quick that pride gets under good regulation

    • Glynis on February 2, 2025 at 3:58 am
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    I do like the idea of Georgiana playing matchmaker. She could rewrite his letter leaving out the insults? I am assuming her ploy will eventually be successful? With maybe a set down for Miss Bingley and an apology to Bingley himself? Hmmm 🥰🥰🥰

    1. Good guess! Let me just say that Georgiana’s efforts reflect her tender years!

    • Kim P. on February 2, 2025 at 9:13 am
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    I can’t wait to read more! I love it when Georgiana interferes. I hope Col Fitzwilliam gets involved too.

    1. Me too! And our dear Col does make an appearance!

    • Miriam on February 2, 2025 at 9:23 am
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    How will Georgianna confront Darcy? I am excited to read more!

    1. She interfere in the BEST way!

    • Gwen M on February 2, 2025 at 9:42 am
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    Great start!

    1. Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest of the book!

    • Elizabeth M on February 2, 2025 at 11:25 am
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    Sounds like great fun! Is there a publication date yet?

    1. February 8th!!! I got the preorder up today!

    • Debbie B on February 2, 2025 at 1:49 pm
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    Love the excerpt and understand the issue with getting a pre-order up, but WHEN is the book going to be released??? We don’t have to wait all the way until Valentine’s Day, do we?

    1. It’s coming on Saturday!!!! The preorder is UP now!!

    • LeslieGB on February 2, 2025 at 4:43 pm
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    I loved this excerpt and look forward to finding out what Georgiana does. I’m sure she’ll come up with a plan. My heart broke for Mr. Darcy in his letter to Elizabeth. Poor man how he struggled. –Leslie

    1. He struggles so hard!

    • Lynley on February 2, 2025 at 7:23 pm
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    I love the variety of stories we get with JAFF. Short, long, angst filled, sweet, ODC, cast of thousands.
    Short sweet novellas are like the palette cleansers and I’m looking forward to this one. One of my favourite characters – sweetly sneaky Georgiana. I can’t wait to read what happens next

    1. I agree! Sometimes all I have time for is a short story!

    • Kattia C on February 2, 2025 at 8:19 pm
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    The plot of this story sounds pretty interesting!
    Thank you for sharing this excerpt!!

    I hope to read it soon!

    1. Sooner than you think! The preorder is UP and it’s releasing on Saturday!

        • Elizabeth Coble on February 4, 2025 at 11:16 pm
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        I just love variations on Austen novels! And this one sounds especially intriguing w/ Georgiana’s involvement—or would “interference” be a better term?
        I’m looking forward to this book’s release! I wish that I already had a copy!!
        E. Coble

  2. Such condescension! Why Lady Catherine herself could have coached him. He really does need a wake up call, and yet I have read many variations wherein he doesn’t change this thinking before marrying Elizabeth, and proves a shallow declaration of love doesn’t make up for lack of respect.
    Yeah for Georgiana – I think she should give the note to the COL, or at least share the contents and conspire with him.

    1. Guess what? We get a Lady Cat letter in the book, too! And it’s FULL of her condescension!

    • Kelley on February 3, 2025 at 10:05 am
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    This looks so promising. I would love to read it. I can see how Darcy might have tried writing letters before the one at Rosings. So it doesn’t seem out of character.

    1. I think he would have, too. He would have made lists of why and then tried to explain them to her, even if she never got to see them.

    • Robin G. on February 3, 2025 at 9:48 pm
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    I love this excerpt, and I look forward to reading the rest. Thank you for the giveaway. Congrats on this new upcoming release!

    • Ramona Wolf on February 3, 2025 at 10:00 pm
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    Sounds intriguing and wonderfully light-hearted. I don’t have a Kindle. Will it release in paperback format?

      • Michael on February 4, 2025 at 3:12 pm
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      Hi Ramona,

      You can always get the Kindle app on your phone or computer. I have a Kindle, but do most of my Kindle reading on my phone.

      –Michael

    • Jenny S. on February 4, 2025 at 12:58 am
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    This sounds like an enjoyable story! I would live the chance to read it! I always enjoy the stories with a different path to their HEA..

    • Cheryl on February 4, 2025 at 10:13 am
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    Oh! I love the beginning you have here. I can see the wheels spinning in Georgianna’s head. Will she rewrite the note and send it? Will she confront her brother? I cannot wait to find out! Please hurry

    • Megan M. on February 4, 2025 at 10:15 am
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    What a delightful snippet! I have a feeling that while Georgiana will try to help Darcy and Elizabeth come together, her naive efforts will cause more cause for laughter than success.

    • Laura on February 4, 2025 at 10:38 am
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    I cannot wait to get my hands on this book! What a great story line. I want to read what Georgiana gets up to, does she re write the letter without the insulting parts, or does she sit down with Darcy and tell him to go to Elizabeth? Can’t wait to read it!

    • Peg on February 4, 2025 at 10:46 am
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    Never had Georgiana read something so insulting and romantic at the same time.

    Nailed it. And certainly Georgiana can recognize a co-sufferer of a broken heart.

    Looking forward to reading it.

  3. What a wonderful beginning. I love Georgiana’s curious mind and gumption. As well as her recognizing the faults and imperfections of her brother. It’s a perfect set up for the story to unfold and I can’t wait to see how it plays out.

    • Michael on February 4, 2025 at 3:10 pm
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    I appreciated the introduction about Valentine’s Day customs in Regency times. It’s been my understanding (apart from P&P Variations) that letters were customarily exchanged between men and women and were not an automatic “compromise by letter.” So ,it’s good to see that worked out in a P&P variation.

    I thought the observation by Georgiana that Darcy had a broken heart was spot on. Experience sharpens our eyes. I laughed when Georgiana thought that she had never read something so insulting and romantic at the same time. “What is this drivel about position?” Ha!

    In any case, the writing made me wonder what was coming next. I can imagine, but I want to know!

    • F on February 4, 2025 at 5:05 pm
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    Poor besotted Fitzwilliam. Georgiana to the rescue, I hope !

    • Susan L. on February 4, 2025 at 6:02 pm
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    Well, I *LOVE* epistolary novels, so this is right up my alley. Sounds like Georgiana improves on her brother’s letter and writes the words he *should* have written. But how will Darcy feel when he receives a letter from Elizabeth? Will he have to fight off embarrassment to continue the correspondence? How do they maintain such a shocking exchange of letters between two unmarried people? So much to look forward to!

    One of my all-time favorite novels, “A Woman of Independence Means,” is an epistolary novel I recommend to everyone, and I’ve given away many copies of it, always to compliments and thanks. So M.J, please consider an epistolary novel in the future!

    • cindie snyder on February 4, 2025 at 6:34 pm
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    Sounds like a fun story!

    • Lois on February 5, 2025 at 4:03 am
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    If Georgie makes it seem that Lizzy & Darcy are corresponding with one another, won’t that become a scandal if discovered? Hmm….

    • Jean Marie Ragus on February 5, 2025 at 1:45 pm
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    Ramona,

    I don’t own a Kindle or even a tablet. On my laptop, I read all my e-books through Amazon link. So, you don’t need to have another technology to do so,

    • EV T on February 5, 2025 at 6:09 pm
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    I love seeing Georgiana with her Imp showing, she gets so little air time glad to see her making the most of it. Sounds a fun read!

    • Michelle Reames on February 6, 2025 at 5:38 am
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    Yes, this sounds amazing!

    • Fawn Jenkins on February 6, 2025 at 9:39 am
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    Of course Georgie’s plan will succeed! Darcy and Elizabeth will fall in love, marry, and live happily ever after!

    • Cimora B on February 7, 2025 at 7:24 pm
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    Great start! Of course, Georgiana will succeed, but with a few little complications along the way. ;o)

    • F on February 10, 2025 at 10:40 am
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    ooohhhh, Georgiana as Cupid! Great for Valentine’s Day. I hope I’m not too late for the drawing?

    • Michael B on February 10, 2025 at 5:57 pm
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    it’s an excellent story! I’ve already read it and reviewed it on Amazon Kindle.

    • Jan on February 11, 2025 at 4:47 pm
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    I am always a fan of Georgianna playing matchmaker and sharing her wisdom to knock some sense into her big brother! I look forward to reading the entire story.

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