Good morning, readers!
It’s release day for Look on the Heart, a new Darcy and Elizabeth variation! This book was inspired by a reader plot bunny, so shout out to Karen Leos!
You can get the book on Amazon and KU here: https://mybook.to/LookontheHeart
Here’s the blurb:
Elizabeth Bennet’s father has raised her to value a person’s character more than their appearance. He learned the hard way that physical beauty can conceal poor behavior—an error he made in marrying his wife. Determined not to repeat Mr. Bennet’s mistake, Elizabeth resolves to judge people by more than outward appearances. When Mr. Darcy, a guest of the new resident of Netherfield Park, attends the local assembly, she is intrigued.
Mr. Darcy’s face has been the subject of gossip and ridicule all his life. A port-wine birth mark covers a considerable portion of his face and invites suspicion and cruelty from those around him. A broken nose and scar only worsen his appearance. When his friend Bingley insists that they attend an assembly the night of his arrival, Darcy is reluctant. What lady would not find it a punishment to stand up with him? When he meets Elizabeth Bennet, he is captivated at once. She sees him.
As their acquaintance deepens, Mr. Darcy finds himself in love with the country miss. But one misunderstanding threatens everything. Letting the past dictate his actions, he breaks Elizabeth’s heart. Understanding comes, and he must now seek forgiveness from the only lady who has ever loved him.
This Pride and Prejudice variation is a sweet, low-angst story where beauty is more than skin deep, and a happily ever after is assured.
WOW. In this story, Darcy has a port wine stain birthmark. It was also called a mother’s mark, a wine stain mark, and a few other names you will find in the foreword of the book. In the 1800s, people did not look favorably on such things. Here’s some of the research I found:
In 1811, birthmarks such as port-wine stains were little understood and often viewed through the lens of superstition and social prejudice. While modern medicine recognizes them as benign vascular anomalies, the Regency era lacked both the knowledge and means to treat them. Instead, they were often seen as the result of maternal impressions—emotional shocks or cravings during pregnancy—or, more darkly, as signs of sin or misfortune. In polite society, where physical perfection was prized, particularly in women, such marks could unfairly affect one’s marriage prospects or social standing. Despite this, love and character often triumphed over shallow judgment, and many bore such marks with quiet dignity.
This story seeks to honor that strength, reimagining a world where the heart sees far more than the eye.
GIVEAWAY TIME!
I’m giving away an eBook copy of Look on the Heart to one lucky reader! Comment below with your thoughts about the story for a chance to win! Winners will be picked at the end of the first week in August.
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I always love a good you have to look beyond the imperfections variation. I wonder what the caused their conflict? I didn’t see it in what I read. Can’t wait to read it! Congratulations!
Looking foward to reading it.
I love your books and look forward to this one, having such a unique premise.
I love your books and look forward to this one, especially since it has such a unique premise.
I’m really glad you chose this subject because almost all the variations focus so much on physical beauty. There are so many other aspects that can attract us to a partner. I’m eager to read your story !
I’m very intrigued to see where you take this story. Looking forward to reading it!
Congratulations on publishing a new book, and one with such an intriguing premise, too!
Congratulations. This sounds intriguing! I have a reddish birthmark on my neck. My family has always teased me about it. Some of the stories I heard about it while growing up were absurd. I look forward to reading this book!
Author
Thank you for sharing your story!
I was born with a “strawberry mark” on my chin. The x-ray department took it off…taking with it my adult tooth just above that. I lived with my baby tooth for 72 years before it fell out. So this story interests me. Thanks for a chance to win a copy.
Author
Wow, what a unique story! Thanks for sharing. One of my daughters had a slight red mark between her eyes when she was born. It’s faded a lot now.
I’ve enjoyed all of your books so far, so I know that I will enjoy this one too. It looks intriguing. I’m eager to read it.
Author
Thanks! Good luck on the giveaway!
We humans definitely judge a book by its cover. Although, I prefer my “salt of the earth” friends to those women that give you the up-and-down elevator look before smiling insincerely.
Congratulations on the new book!
Author
I 100% agree! I have my tribe and they’re amazing!
Interesting idea. In P&P, Austen plays with the idea of “handsome” since Darcy is no longer considered handsome when he shows his pride. You seem to be reversing this idea, which is fun.
Author
I hope you enjoy the story!
Interesting idea. I wonder whether Wickham will also play a role and be judged accurately.
Author
Good thoughts 😀
Very interesting premise! I wish you all the best with this story 🙂
Author
Thanks Ceri!
You continue to come up with unique variations, and I look forward to reading this one. Congrats and best wishes on the new release!
Author
Aww, thanks!! This plot idea came from a reader. You guys have the BEST bunnies!
I canʻt wait to read it! Thank you for the excerpt.
Author
I hope you love it!
Interesting premise. Thanks for the giveaway!
Author
You’re welcome!! Good luck!
I’m looking forward to reading this story.
Thank you.
Author
Thank you!
Sounds like an interesting story line.
Author
Thanks!
There is another book with this topic, called “With Face Aflame”, by A.E. Walnofer, published in 2018. It’s on my want to read list, since I, too, was born with a bilateral facial Port Wine Stain. While the issues of superstition have largely disappeared in modern society, it still makes people feel uncomfortable when they see someone afflicted with it. Scientifically, there is more known about them, but still much to learn. As for treating them, the only thing new is painful laser therapy, which often must be done hundreds of times to fade them, and they come back anyway, requiring frequent “touch ups”. I plan to read both of these books to see how sensitively the condition is treated. It’s a sensitive issue.
Author
I have never read the other one. I’ll have to check it out! And thank you for sharing your personal story. <3
I love Pride and Prejudice and cannot wait to read this variation. I have read all Jane Austen novels and loved them all.
Author
I hope you enjoy it!
Congrats on your newest book, MJ! Great premise! (No need to enter me into the giveaway; just wanted to say congrats and I’m super impressed with all you write!)
Author
Thank you! I love your books so much!
Interesting twist. I’ve really enjoyed your other books and look forward to reading this one!
Author
Thanks! I hope you enjoy it!
I have this book so no need to enter me in the giveaway. I thought it was such a sweet touching story that has a very “scared” (in more than appearance) hero
Author
Thank you so much!!!
The theme of this story touches my heart. I am intrigued that you chose to give the mark to Mr. Darcy.
I look forward to reading.
Author
It was a reader suggestion and fun to write!
I would like to read this original variation of Pride and Prejudice. I found the excerpt intriguing and want to read more.
Author
I hope you enjoy it!
I would love to own a copy of your newest book.
Author
Good luck on the giveaway!