P&P: Behind the Scenes – Darcy Plots to Accidentally Meet Elizabeth on her Walks

While at Rosings, Mr. Darcy interacts with Elizabeth during calls to the Parsonage and as she and the Collins’ dine at Rosings. Not satisfied with those interactions, he desires to happen upon her as she walks the Park.

 


 Monday, 11 April 1812

Darcy peered anxiously about the edge of the orchard. Where could Elizabeth be?

As they drank tea after dinner, Elizabeth had indicated how she enjoyed the blush-coloured, fluffy blooms of the cherry blossoms each spring. Indeed, Easter would not be the same without such a spectacle she had said.

How could he forget? Her fine eyes had twinkled as she spoke, the smile upon her perfect lips conveyed her joy at the prospect, and the slight tilt of her head was flirtatious. She was so beguiling that as she described the pleasure she took in the season, he instead, entertained visions of the lady walking amongst the pink bowers of flowers found all over England at this time of year.

It had been Fitzwilliam’s boot painfully striking the toe of his shoe, which had brought him back to the conversation. He had cleared his throat and attempted to bring himself under good regulation, but his desire to make his fantasy a reality overrode his good sense. He made mention of this very grove in the hopes he could happen upon her.

After such a discussion, she had to come!

He leaned back against a wide oak near the river and folded his arms across his chest. One more peek around the trunk proved useless—she was not there.

A breeze wafted his great coat away from his body, and he pulled it back with haste. She could not know he had been waiting for her! The meeting had to be an accident since he could not arouse hopes in her that he might not fulfill, at least not yet.

He wanted to offer her marriage. But, no, he could never do such a thing. How could he forget the impropriety so often shown by her mother, her three younger sisters, and even her father. But, those relations could be ignored, could they not? He could pretend they did not exist and make the offer of his hand to Miss Elizabeth, despite her unfortunate connections.

He began to chew the nail of his thumb, but stopped for a moment to give another glance around the orchard. When not a glimpse of her was to be had, he began gnawing upon the poor, ragged fingernail once more.

Any lady with Miss Elizabeth’s penchant for walking and preference for cherry blossoms would be eager to include such a prospect on their morning jaunt, would they not? She had to come!

A shaky hand removed the pocket watch from his coat, and he opened it to check the time. It was almost half nine! When at Netherfield, Miss Elizabeth had never departed later than eight for her morning walk. He had been waiting nigh on a half hour for her to arrive!

He groaned and shoved the watch back into its rightful place. What if she did not come?

What if Mr. or Mrs. Collins detained her at the Parsonage?

What if she had merely been making polite conversation?

What if she was ill?

A sharp pain pierced the tip of his thumb, and he gave an abrupt inhale. He had to cease this biting of his fingernails! The habit was a new one—one he had adopted when Miss Elizabeth stayed at Netherfield with her sister.

London was supposed to solve his dilemma. His unfortunate thumb would heal and he would have the distance from Miss Elizabeth that he required. Yet, the ploy had been unsuccessful. He was in a worse situation than before.

His hands covered his face as he suppressed a growl. She was irresistible, and he was in a sorry state indeed!

A crack, like that of a twig breaking, broke the silence of the grove.

He removed his hands from his face, and tilted his head. Were those footsteps?

Careful not to make a sound, he turned to peer around the oak. A gasp escaped him at a glimpse of blue that moved behind the tree. He tiptoed around the trunk until she came into view. Miss Elizabeth had come!

Remaining out of her sight, he leaned upon the tree and stared as she brought down a bough to smell the blossoms. Laughter rang out like music when, upon releasing the limb, the blush-coloured petals rained upon her head.

Her smile was radiant, her hair glowed in the sunlight permeating through the trees, and her delicate hands were before her as she caught the delicate flowers in her palms. She even giggled as she lifted her bonnet from her arm and strew the petals that had fallen inside.

Reality was better than he had imagined, but he still had yet to approach her. The point of waiting for so long was not only to view her as such, but also to speak with her!

His shoulders dropped. Unless he intended to propose marriage, he could not risk meeting her again under any circumstances. To do so would raise her hopes, and he would not do her the disservice. He had to decide once and for all!

She turned her back to him, and his chance had come. He darted without a sound behind a hedgerow. After a quick tug to his topcoat, he adjusted his great coat as he stepped from behind the bushes.

Miss Elizabeth, who turned in his direction when he emerged, startled.

He approached and bowed as she curtsied. “Miss Elizabeth, how are you enjoying the grove? I do hope it meets with your expectations.”

With a start, she glanced at her surroundings and back to him. “Cherry blossoms never disappoint, Mr. Darcy. But, I must confess I have been here before. It has become a favourite haunt of mine.”

He stretched his arm before him, gesturing further into the trees. “Then, I hope you do not mind my intrusion. I have no pressing business and would be pleased to join you. The grove is particularly beautiful this year.”

She bit her lip. Was she suppressing a smile? She was certain to be pleased at his attention!

As she fell into step at his side, he held back a sigh. This was as it ought to be. This was perfection! He no other option but to beg Elizabeth to become his wife—no other woman would do!

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    • Michelle Hall on October 1, 2015 at 4:07 am
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    What a lovely lovely scene to read first thing in the morning and v funny too. Poor Mr. Darcy hiding behind a tree, he is completely besotted with Elizabeth but we know all will be well in the end…! Thank you Leslie fabulous excerpt

    1. I’m so glad the humor came through! I always worry about that. I just found the idea of Darcy waiting to ambush Elizabeth so funny. Thanks, Michele!

    • Deborah on October 1, 2015 at 6:32 am
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    Loved reading this with a cup of coffee. I had to smile at Darcy hiding behind a tree. What an infatuated puppy. The poor deluded man. We know what a shock he is in for….Thank you for such a fun missing scene.

    1. It was too much fun writing it that way! I couldn’t resist. Thanks, Deborah!

    • Carol hoyt on October 1, 2015 at 9:47 am
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    Who would have thought, biting his nails!!!! I love to read Darcy so uncertain so human!

    Boy, he really had no clue.

    Wonderfully written !!

    1. I like a human Darcy as well, and I wanted him to have some nervous habit. I’m glad you liked it. Thanks, Carol!

    • Glynis on October 1, 2015 at 11:42 am
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    Thanks Leslie. What a great post. I can just picture Darcy hiding behind a tree and biting his nails. It made me laugh and “I love to laugh”! More please. I am just re-reading A Will Of Iron. Love your books.

    1. I’m so glad you liked it! It was so vivid to me when I wrote it as well. Thanks, Glynis!

        • Glynis on October 1, 2015 at 12:28 pm
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        I don’t know how you come up with the ideas. I have read your 3 books several times especially Rain and Retribution. My next read will be Unwavering Trust again – I love Darcy’s grandma.

        1. The Earl’s Conquest is all about Grandmamma. You’ll have to check it out!

  1. Such a delightful vignette!! His poor thumb, though!! What an amazing detail that reveals so much about him. And his dithering thoughts, his shaking hands as he checks his watch, the Colonel having to kick his foot the previous evening–more details that reveal how hopelessly in love he is, whether he truly knows it or not.

    And it never crosses his mind how ungentlemanly it is to spy on a young lady as he does. All is fair, I suppose…. 😉

    A wonderful peek into the mind of Darcy–thank you!!

    Warmly,
    Susanne 🙂

    1. He wasn’t spying… just waiting. He wanted to walk with her for just a little while. 🙂 Thanks, Susanne!

    • Carol on October 1, 2015 at 5:44 pm
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    What a beautiful scene you’ve painted with words. Poor Darcy. The man has been running Pemberley and Darcy House for years, why can’t he just admit he’s smitten. Stalking is against the law now, but in their day, it was like a proposal while they were alone with each other.

    1. LOL! It was stalking just a bit I suppose, but not a malicious sort. Poor guy just wants to walk with her! Thanks, Carol!

    • Sheila L. M. on October 1, 2015 at 10:39 pm
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    That did have me smiling. I can’t get enough of this couple. I guess we all love how he is clueless as to the opinion she holds of him. But this was lovely with the blossoms falling on her head. I can just see that and it must have looked so beautiful if you love nature rather than artifice.

    1. The cherry blossoms in the spring are beautiful, and towards the end they do begin falling. There is one tree at the school here, and the children will pick the petals up off of the ground, throw them in the air, and laugh as they rain down. Thanks, Sheila!

        • Sheila L. M. on October 2, 2015 at 12:21 pm
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        Oh, that sounds so lovely. We have many cherry blossoms in spring around here and Washington, DC is famous for its cherry blossoms. The children tossing and running paints a joyful scene in my mind. Thanks.

    • sharon on October 7, 2015 at 12:50 pm
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    it was greatly done a fine most amusing and interesting scene to be added inspiring

    1. Thank you, sharon!

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