Masks & Masquerades: A Scene from A Match Made at Matlock

Every month at JAV we have a fun theme for the blog and this month’s is Masks & Masquerades.  It made me realize I have rarely written about them so look for more of those coming up soon!

I do have one to share that features Viscount Saye preparing to propose while masked. The scene is from A Match Made at Matlock and I hope you’ll enjoy! I’ll pick someone from among the commenters to win a copy or an audiobook code, so do have your say!


It was extraordinarily vexing to Saye that Aurelia should receive the felicitations and congratulations for what promised to be an unparalleled event. The idea had been his; the dance master had agreed to come on his name; and the Yellow Escubac had been chosen by him to be the signature drink of the party. Aurelia, unimaginative bird that she was, had whinged that the guests ought to be served a more customary ratafia besides, but Saye had rejected that outright. “The moment you said customary, you lost me,” he informed her.

Then there was the matter of his costume. The time he had put into thinking of it was not inconsiderable, and the fortune it had cost him not insubstantial. But worth it? Indubitably.

He had chosen Gatto as his mask, but not the cat alone; he had a masque con gatto veneziano, two masks in one—the first, a handsome man, the second a cat, heavily bejewelled and elegantly perched atop the face of the man. It was also twice the dose of cleverness—not only was his Gatto the match to Lilly’s, but the cat wore a collar of aquamarines and diamonds that was, in truth, an engagement present. He would propose, Lilly would accept, and then she would receive her gift.

But it would be the proposal itself which would be truly outrageous. Naturally, his first inclination was to fill a room somewhere with exotic flowers, set off fireworks, have the opera singer serenade her, something with true éclat. It had been Darcy who had rather put a damper on all of that.

“I have always supposed that you hide behind your excess,” he had said. “Better to stupefy and amaze than allow some proper romantic frailty to show. Have you considered that she might appreciate being acquainted with your sensibilities?”

Darcy did say the stupidest things sometimes, and Saye had not scrupled to tell him so—but dash it all if that accursed brother of his had not got in on the act, stroking his chin like some great philosopher and opining, “’Tis rather a terrifying business, to lay oneself bare before a woman.”

But the de rigueur quip about the miniaturised flute Fitzwilliam kept in his breeches had gone unheard. Darcy was all grave and instructional, telling them all, for the thousandth iteration, “I can assure you, when Elizabeth and I went walking that October afternoon, right at the very moment I knew was my chance to offer a second—”

“Bah! Do we need to hear this again?” Saye had cried out. In truth, it had become almost physically painful to him to be subjected, once again, to the tales of Darcy’s courtship of Elizabeth.

“I am saying it required a great deal of courage, because not only did I need to bare my soul, I needed to do it with the sounds of her vehement refusal yet in my ears!”

“In this we are equal. Lilly has refused me twice.”

“Those were nothing to how Elizabeth refused me.”

“Oh? How might you have liked it if she refused you in your very own home?” Saye retorted.

“Are we truly going to compete for who was rejected the most violently?”

“I am only saying there is no more grievous insult to a man than to be cut down on the very floors his ancestors trod.”

And somehow amid various boasts, insults, dares, and exclamations over the meaning of true courage, Saye had found himself betting his cousin and brother that he would have his beloved’s hand with nothing to recommend his suit but his own flawless exposition of charming vulnerability and humble entreaty. Blast!

He supposed he might find solace in the fact that it was sure to astonish her.

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    • Linda A. on March 21, 2024 at 11:09 am
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    Oh, that’s great! “Hoist with his own petard.” Can’t wait to read it.

    1. Thanks Linda!

    • jeannette on March 21, 2024 at 11:16 am
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    I adore your writing skills and this new peek at the viscount made me chuckle. Such vulnerability and hubris poured into one intriguing human. And with Darcy and Fitzwilliam there to guide him, what could possibly go wrong? I admit, I haven’t read the book yet, but it is on my TBR list. Hopefully she will say “yes”!

    1. Aw thanks Jeannette! Hope you’ll read and enjoy it soon!

    • Elizabeth M on March 21, 2024 at 1:04 pm
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    Surprisingly, Richard had the funniest line in this excerpt. I loved the collection and have it on my Read Again list.

    1. Thank you Elizabeth!

    • Dorothy Willis on March 21, 2024 at 1:33 pm
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    I am sure you won’t like it, but here are some friendly “I would change this” opinions. I have never read anything else you have written, so I am coming with completely unbiased eyes.

    I would change, “thinking of it” to “planning it.” Surely he was doing more than just thinking.

    I would change, “fortune it had cost him” to simply “cost,” and “not insubstantial” to “substantial.”

    I would omit, “It was also twice the dose of cleverness—.

    I would change, “Better to stupefy,” to “You think it better to stupefy”.

    I would change, “acquainted with your sensibilities?” to “acquainted with your true self?”

    Was, “’Tis rather a terrifying business, to lay oneself bare before a woman.” intended as a joke? It creates a hilarious mental picture.

    In the next paragraph I would omit both uses of “all.” I would use “time” instead of “iteration.”

    I suppose the idea of him being cut down where his ancestors trod is intended to be funny. It definitely is.

    1. Thanks for your opinions Dorothy but I probably should have clarified– this book was published two years ago, so we’re past the editing stage!

    • Glory on March 21, 2024 at 3:02 pm
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    I am so glad that Saye is a regular character. I think he is my favorite non-canon character and he brings so much to each story that he is in.

    • Char on March 22, 2024 at 12:18 pm
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    I love Saye!! Thanks Amy!

    • Deborah on March 23, 2024 at 11:54 am
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    A Match made at Matlock is a marvelous collaboration! Can we anticipate another from you all?! Darcy, Colonel F and Saye together in this are sweet, comic gold! Masks optional!😊

  1. Saye is such a delightful character! And I love that Darcy is speaking with both wisdom and a touch of arrogance. I’m glad his success with Elizabeth hasn’t changed him too much! Thanks, Amy!

    • Sheila L. Majczan on March 25, 2024 at 4:30 pm
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    I did read and review this story. Enjoyed it!

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