The month of love is almost over, but the scenes keep coming! I’m sharing a rather half-romantic scene. Well, it’s not actually romantic at all, except that it serves as a meet-cute for our dear couple and sets the stage for the beginning of their relationship in my newest book.
Quirky? Yes. Irritating? He can be (Darcy, I mean). Plucky? Our girl Elizabeth has plenty of that. And maybe, if you read between the lines, you will see a bit of admiration right from the beginning.
Two winners will be drawn at random from the commenters, and the lucky winners will receive an ebook before publication date (which is yet to be announced, but coming soon)!
I hope you enjoy it!
Elizabeth Bennet shifted nervously in her chair. The gentleman behind the desk had little enough to say, but the weight of his pensive glances and oddly punctuated sighs was making her hands sweat. He frowned and tapped his quill on the page before him.
She cleared her throat. “Mr Darcy, I can provide another reference if you wish. Perhaps my former neighbours, Sir William and Lady Lucas, who have known me since my infancy?”
He raised a brow. “You need this position badly.” It was not a question.
A small part of Elizabeth’s heart died. She lowered her eyes and confessed, “I do. There were five of us sisters, and only one other has found work as a governess since my father’s death. I—I know I do not have the formal education typically required, and my connections are not—”
“You are perfect,” he declared, slapping his pen down on top of her references with finality. “You begin at once.” He pushed back his chair and rose, walking around the desk and passing by without a second glance. He stopped near the door, however, and looked back to her. “Are you coming?”
She rose less gracefully than she would have liked, still a bit dazed. “Forgive me, Mr Darcy, but are we not to discuss… ah… details?”
“Do you mean your pay? Naturally.” He opened the door and spoke to the footman just outside. “Parker, will you have Mrs Dobbs prepare Miss Bennet’s room? And send Martha in with tea.”
The footman left, and Mr Darcy walked out into the hall without another word to her. Elizabeth looked hesitantly about, wondering if she ought to follow.
“Miss Bennet, you really must keep up. You will be wishing to send word of your employment to your mother, and you may use the writing desk in the blue drawing room for your purpose while your room is prepared. Have you a change of attire?”
Elizabeth looked helplessly down at her best day gown. “Most of my other clothes have been sold. If these are not suitable, I do know how to make more.”
Mr Darcy waved dismissively. “They will do for now, but I had rather wished you had something to change into, so these would not become soiled.”
She blinked. “Soiled?”
“Indeed, for the Marshalsea is not known for cleanliness. Ah, here we are. The writing desk is just there. Pens, notepaper, all in the drawer.”
“The Marshalsea! Forgive me, sir, but I thought I was to meet Miss Darcy and discover if I suited her.”
“Naturally. My sister is in Derbyshire, and we shall journey there on the morrow.”
“Then, I fail to understand…”
He bit back a sigh, as if explaining to a child. “First, your letter. Then tea, then we depart for the Marshalsea. After the ceremonials, I will have a seamstress come measure you for some new garments.”
“Sir, for what sort of post have I just been hired?” she demanded. “I answered an advertisement for a lady’s companion.”
“Indeed.”
She spread her hands. “Why am I to accompany you to a debtor’s prison?”
“Why, that is where you are to be married, of course.”
Elizabeth’s knees nearly buckled. “Married!”
“Of course, for you cannot pass as a suitably respectable companion for a young lady unless you are married or widowed or something of that nature. I certainly cannot have a single gentlewoman living under my roof without—”
“Married!”
He rolled his eyes. “Did no one explain the conditions of the position to you?”
“Only what was in the advertisement. ‘A single young lady of gentle upbringing sought as a companion.’ That is what the advert said.”
“Why, yes, that is what it said. But did no one tell you what it meant? I shall have to speak to Mrs Dobbs about this. Come, Miss Bennet, your letter. We have an appointment to keep.”
“Mr Darcy!” Elizabeth’s temper flared, and she set down her foot. “I do not mean to put a single drop of ink on paper until I have had a clear explanation of matters. I begin to think this position cannot suit.”
He pursed his lips. “Have you a long list of other options?”
Elizabeth hesitated. “I could work as a seamstress.”
Mr Darcy snorted. “With fine hands such as yours? You would be turned out within a week for working too slowly. I offer you a perfectly agreeable situation suited to a lady of gentle birth, and a better you will find nowhere.”
“In marrying a man I do not know this very afternoon?”
“No one ever said you had to live with him. You needn’t even touch him if you do not wish. In fact, I would advise you to discourage any displays of affection—that sore on his lip has become rather unsightly.”
“Who is this person to whom you would so blithely wed a complete stranger?”
He stared and crossed his arms. “You really heard nothing of this?”
“No, and I am not certain I wish to.”
“But you just asked me. Come, Miss Bennet, you must speak more plainly.”
Elizabeth clenched her teeth and closed her eyes, counting to three before she lost her temper with her prospective employer. “What I meant, sir, is that these details you take for granted are vital to my decision about accepting the position. They ought to have been disclosed before, and I am suspicious about why they were not.”
“Yes, yes, very well. The man you are to marry was my father’s ward. He has a substantial inheritance that will pass to his brother upon his death, which, I daresay, is imminent. For numerous reasons, I prefer that some other will receive his endowment, which is why I took it upon myself to secure for him a bride.”
“But I could not inherit! And surely you do not mean for me to bear this man an heir!”
“Did I not explain you needn’t touch him? Be easy on that score, for there is no prohibition against the widow inheriting. It is a modest estate—Corbett Lodge—worth a little less than two thousand per annum. It is large enough for five or six ladies and a few servants, I should say, but do not set your hopes on carriages and finery. I am afraid he spent the coffers dry before I had him thrown into debtor’s prison, but the land itself should begin to restore—”
“Forgive me, Mr Darcy,” she interrupted, “but did you say that you had this man thrown into prison?”
“Who else would have done it?” he asked reasonably. “I assure you, it was a kindness to everyone concerned.”
“I do not…” Elizabeth shook her head and started again. “I expect he must have no fond feelings for you.”
“Bernard? He despises the very air I breathe. Miss Bennet, do you mean to write your letter to your family or not?”
“I have not decided! Answer me this, sir. Why would this… this Bernard person permit you to choose a bride for him for the sole purpose of diverting his inheritance, if he hates you so much?”
Mr Darcy smiled. “Because the one person in this world Bernard Wickham detests more than myself is his younger brother George.”
Well, there you have the beginning! Watch out for the Cover Reveal, which is coming soon.
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Oh Nicole you’ve done it again. Sucked me in with a few well chosen words. You write the best haughtiest Darcy and the strongest Lizzy ever! I anxiously await more.
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He is a bit high-handed, isn’t he? Annoying as all get-out at first! Thanks for stopping by, Caroline. 🙂
Ohh, I hope you kill this Bernard Wickham in an hour following the wedding! Ohhh, and Mrs. Bennet will be the new neighbourg of Pemberley! LOL
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There goes the neighborhood! Yes, that is a funny thought, Macarena!
Wonderful! I love it! So, he truly will deny George Wickham an inheritance! I can’t wait to read this!
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(Sits behind computer screen rubbing hands gleefully) It’s fun thinking of perfectly legal ways to off characters!
Good grief. My jaw just dropped to the floor. So Darcy is going to marry her to Bernard…and then marry her himself later? If they get their HEA? Interesting excerpt from which, I gather, is a P&P vagary that is more than vaguely different than Austen’s original plot. I definitely need a copy of this story, Nicole. I think you may have knocked this one out of the park. 🙂
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In the immortal words of a new generation… it’s complicated. Yes, HEA guaranteed! And it is a bit of a wild spin, but that’s all the more fun, right? Thanks for stopping by, Gianna!
Wow! Wow! Wow! Great beginning. Terrific writing and lovely creativity here. I cannot wait for the whole story.
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Thank you, Cheryl!
Oh my!!! You did it again! I can hardly wait for this book:)
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Thanks for stopping by, Orsi!
I presume estate use to be in the Darcy family but was bequeathed to Wickham? Very interesting:))
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Tricksy, very tricksy. Not quite, but kind of. Thanks for saying hello, Marinka!
Hi Nicole
I don’t comment, I just giggle 🙂 and look forward!
Have a hilarious time
Doris
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Giggle away, Doris! I hope you get lots of snickers in this book, because it’s a bit of a romp. Enjoy!
Oh! I must read this one! So Darcy like to decide about other people’s life and no explanation. Elizabeth is being very patient and polite. I’m thrilled!
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Can’t give her a chance to back out, now can we? We have an inheritance to divert! Thanks for stopping by, Rosa.
Well, something more to wait for most impatiently!
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There are so many good stories coming out right now! Hopefully this one won’t be too much longer, Gerrit.
Another great start. Like all your books it has grabbed my attention straight away and I look forward to the story in full.
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Thank you, Claire. Hopefully you’ll have it very soon!
What I want to know is did you come up with this storyline yourself or has Jeanne been ‘thinking’ again?
Bernard Wickham? Obviously another George! If Elizabeth does go through with this I do hope Darcy is going to protect her and her sisters from George as he will no doubt be trying to get his inheritance by fair means or foul (probably the latter!)
Hopefully Bernard will expire sooner rather than later and Darcy’s sighs mean he will happily court the Merry Widow until they can marry?
Heavens! If I write much more I should be able to publish this! 😏
Can’t wait to read more!
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Can’t blame it on Jeanne this time, but she is a very enthusiastic bad influence! Bernard and George were cut from the same cloth, I’m afraid. Glynis, you really need to pull up a keyboard and take off with these ideas of yours!
Only ODC in your capable hands allows me to imagine Elizabeth as a Mrs Wickham, widow or no, and not be terrified. What a premise! And the (beyond irritating Darcy lol) exchange between the two. Can’t wait to for more!
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It’s actually a bit farcical in a way. Yes, Darcy is annoying at first! A good guy, really, but terribly high handed, and ODG won’t have it. As you can imagine… well, I’ll just finish the story and let you read it yourself!
Holy smokes what a crazy day for poor Elizabeth!
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Shows up for job interview in the morning. Married and expecting an estate by evening. Yep, a roller coaster ride!
OMG! Excellent.
Cover reveal… Yadda, yadda, yadda….
Blog tour….. Yadda, yadda, yadda….
Just publish, PLEASE!
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Soon, Sheryl! Haha, you’re cracking me up!
Well, this is different. What a new and fun alternative plot beginning for our beloved Elizabeth and Darcy. I look forward to reading this story as you flesh out the twists and turns for us!
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I hope you enjoy it, Melissa! It’s been a fun one for me, even if it did take me twice as long as I thought it would to write. 😉
Loved it, though will Bernard recover
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Not a spoiler if I say he’s a goner. No worries there, Vesper!
I don’t believe this! What a high-handed man! ‘No one explained that you need to be married to a man in debtor’s prison with the French pox (presumably) to get this position? Why do you hesitate?’ (OMG you do have a sense of the romantic… or is it the sarcastic? *smirk*)
So many potential complications. I can’t wait to read this!
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Hahaha! I can’t tell you how much fun I had writing just that first scene, Agnes. Darcy can be such a hoot at times!
Nicole you do like to put our fav characters in the situations. This should be fun!
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Girl, look who’s talking? Charter member of the Torture ODC club! Glad you enjoyed the beginning! <3
Nicole, girl, what have you done??? LOL. Can’t wait to read it!
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Ahem. If I’m not mistaken, you just told Darcy he had an incurable illness. That’s way meaner than making Elizabeth marry a guy in prison… I think. 😉 I can’t wait to read your newest story!
Yes , I enjoy it very much ! I’s quite diferent is it not ?
No publication date ? ok … and what about another chapter ?
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Yes, a bit different than anything I’ve done before, for sure Carla. I had truly hoped to be publishing it like… today. But since it’s not quite ready, you can still be looking for it very soon. I’ll keep you posted!
The first variation I ever read was one of yours (These Dreams) which I loved and immediately got hooked to the genre, so I’m not surprised this immediately caught my interest. Can’t wait to read it all!
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Oh, Marie, that is so awesome! That one was a whopper, wasn’t it? I’m glad it brought you into the genre, because we have the nicest authors and readers anywhere, don’t we? I am excited that you liked the beginning of this one!
Oooh this book is quite interesting and different!! I hope to win a copy!! Thanks you for the chance I hope to be lucky.
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Than you, Mariaf! There will be more chances to win later, too, so good luck to you!
OMG! This is certainly a twist I’ve never seen before! How cruel of you to leave us all on pins and needles while we wait for this gem!
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It won’t be too long, Aimee! I hope you can hold out. Thanks for stopping by! 😀
I was going to come back to this and read it when I had more time, but then it sucked me right in! I am beyond intrigued 🙂
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That’s Darcy for you. He is a bit of a steamroller, at least in this book! Delighted you enjoyed the first scene, Brigid. I can’t wait to see what you have cooking (hint, hint)!
YOWZA! Can hardly wait!😁
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Thanks, Martha! Soon, I promise 😉
Oh wow!! That definitely an interesting first meeting and start to ODC’s relationship!! Can’t wait to see where this story leads!!! Thanks for sharing!!
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Yeah, what a way to meet the man of your dreams, right? “Great, you’re hired. Now marry this… thing. We’ll get to know each other later.”
Ditto to all that said how they cannot wait to read this and expressed delight at another fine tale from you. Imagine that: George has a brother and now by marrying will deny George of “his rightful inheritance”. Who is George going to resent more: his brother (but he will be dead so he can’t revenge himself on him), his wife, Elizabeth (but he can always line up to try to charm her and marry her himself) or Darcy? This has drawn me in. How intriguing!
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As always, Sheila, I love hearing your thoughts! I’ll have more for you to read soon, and thank you so much for stopping by!
Thanks for the chance to win.
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Very welcome! <3
What an intriguing beginning. I am looking forward eagerly to reading the complete story. So very, very original!!!
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Thank you, Joan! It has been a lot of fun this winter. Hope you enjoy it!
Now that I’ve had overnight to think about this, is the estate to be solely Elizabeth’s? If so, wouldn’t that make her more marriageable and therefore no longer dependent upon Darcy? Of course, there is always the threat by George Wickham. Surely he’ll wind up either dead or also at Marshallsea and then dead. Will Darcy have Elizabeth sign a “pre-nip?” So many questions.
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Oh, so many, many questions, Caroline. That’s the fun of it!
Well, THAT was a doozy! I can’t wait to learn all the rest of the details surrounding that scene. I’m curious where in the story this scene occurs.
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That is right smack at the beginning, Ginna. I’ll be sharing the next scene when we do a cover reveal and launch announcement, which is… soon! I’ll keep you posted!
Wow, I cannot wait to read this! You amaze me in your thought process for such a situation between Darcy and Elizabeth.
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Darcy kind of wrote himself. I don’t even feel like I can take the credit when he starts lipping off like that!
En-garde – Parry – Lunge – Thrust
D’Artagnan, you strike again! Absolutely brilliant!
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Merci, ma Cherie!
There are so many ways this could go wrong; I rather expect you will take us down all of them. There are also so many ways for this to create the greatest happiness, and we will earn the right to see them.
Truly this is torture. You don’t even give the title, I’m mad to pre-order this instant!
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Oh, yes, it’s all going pear-shaped! Patience, Beatrice, it’s almost ready for launch. Soon, soon, soon, I promise!
Oh my lands! It has been a long, long time since I have been this intrigued by an excerpt. The paragraphs had me laughing or gasping. Goodness, I can’t imagine where this story will go. Very excited to hear more about it. Congrats on publishing another book, and from the preview, it will be a totally different variation.
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Hopefully you’ll get lots of gasps and giggles as it goes on! Just putting the lipstick and rouge on this fair Widow before she is ready to meet the world. <3
Oh snap! I need to read this!
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Hah! I hope you enjoy it, Cindy!
The plot variation sounds quite interesting! I cannot wait to see what happens next. You truly have done a good job, and I would like to be entered for the contest. Thank you so much.
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Entered! Good luck, Jen. I hope you enjoy the Widow when she flies the coop!
Ooh! I like this idea, and look forward to the book.
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Thank you, Liz! Soon, very soon. <3
Wow, I am so intrigued! Can’t wait to read this!!
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Thanks, Roseanne! I’m excited to see it wrapping up. Hope you enjoy it!
What a wonderful start , I can wait for the rest !
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Thank you, Tracey! It’s coming soon!
What a wonderful start , I can’t wait for the rest !
What a wonderful start , I can’t wait for the rest ! I love your books.
Oh my goodness! This sounds like it will be crazy good (or maybe that should be wicked good)! I want more!
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Wicked, eh? Hmm… Well, this Darcy isn’t exactly Nefarious, but he is a bit irritating. We’ll just have to see!
Nice one. And if / when the brother dies, GW can’t marry his widow as I don’t believe that was allowed. Thank you for sharing!
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Aha! Yup, there is a slight complication. Thanks for stopping by, Linda!
Interesting meet of ODC. Looking forward to reading this book upon its release.
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Thank you, Patricia!
Nicole, I believe that you have outdone yourself this time. I always thought that “These Dreams ” was your best work, but this excerpt showed a very daring Darcy! Elizabeth had to sell her clothes! Please provide background as to how the Bennet ladies became so destitute. What happened to the interest from Mrs. Bennet ‘s dowry? Are we to assume that Mr. Bennet is deceased? I would love to win a copy of this book!
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Wow, thank you, Joan! This won’t be the long tangled epic that These Dreams was, but I hope you enjoy the fun and the banter. It’s been an enjoyable ride for me!
And there it is. Oh, Nicole, congratulations on the launch of this fabulous story. Oh, I can’t wait to see the cover and participate in all the celebrations for the launch. I love this staccato style of writing at the beginning. That was so fun to read. This Darcy was quite a… well… what should I call him? He was so funny. Poor Elizabeth. Thanks for the generous giveaway and good luck to all in the drawing. Blessings, my dear.
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He is quite a character! At least he isn’t a bad actor, just a bit of an impatient fellow. This book has been a fun style to play with! Thank you, dear Jeanne for all your support. 😍
This sounds so interesting, look forward to reading this!
The excerpt was very funny. I love your writing! Although it’s pretty hard to like Darcy in this one. I hope he will soon stop being this high-handed or Elizabeth will leave as soon as she inherits this estate 😀.
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Hah! He’s a bit quirky, isn’t he? Patience is a virtue, Sabrina 😉
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Thank you, DarcyBennett!
Fascinating excerpt!
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Thank you, Lois!
I was not expecting that! I can’t wait to read more.
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Thank you, Madenna!
Wowsers, Nicole!!! I think you just blew my mind!! Nope, it’s definitely no longer where it belongs.
I don’t think I even have the words to express how amazingly dark and twisty this excerpt is!!
Can’t wait to read it in full!!!
In awe,
Susanne 🙂
Whoa. This one starts with a bang, doesn’t it? And the sore on the lip? Eeww. Now Elizabeth will have a big bull’s eye on her back. Hope Darcy has a nice long chit-chat with Georgiana before she springs ‘Mrs. Wickham’ on her, because that wouldn’t be awkward or anything, eh? Whew, this one’s gonna be hot!
Gross, right? Yes, it’s a bit of a twist on the original, that’s for sure!
Sounds like a great career move! Thanks for the enticing peek. Her courage always rises … and she doesn’t have much to lose it seems. Sold her clothes, mercy, things are bad!
Career move! That’s hilarious! She really doesn’t have much to lose. Things get tight, man.
Now this is one hard Darcy, and I am looking forward to how D & E will get to HEA
Not exactly a patient fellow, is he? And not about to let his plans go awry just because someone disagrees. Yep, he’s a fun one!
Hold on a sec, I’m just picking my jaw up off the floor after that reveal in the final paragraph! Oh my goodness, that’s a very different twist on (or is it in) the tale. Just hold on another sec; got to smack Darcy about the head for a while for being so high-handed about the whole “hiring-a-companion-but-also-making sure-George-can’t get-his-dirty-hands-on-that-estate” business. Sounds as though we’re in for something of a roller-coaster ride with this one, Nicole.
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Thanks, Anji! It’s not as angsty as it might seem but there’s some mystery 🥰
Oh my Nicole… now you got me uneasy. I dont know if I can wait longer for the next excerpt/post. Loving the start of this story.. I wonder when EB gets married can she (and the rest of the Bennets) live there right after the ceremony? Would GW challenge or try to dissolve the marriage since it is not consummated?
It made me smile how this FD did everything like this was a business transaction and he was ordering EB like an automaton;)
Curiouser and curiouser, Buturot! Rest easy, you’ll have your answers soon. Preorder is live already for The Rogue’s Widow! Surprise!
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The Random Picker has Picked! Because of all the fun we had, I chose four winners. Sabrina, Orsi, Agnes, and Beatrice, you guys are the lucky draw picks! Please send me your contact info at nclarkston35@gmail.com, or contact me on Facebook. Your gift copies are ready! And Hollis, don’t forget to get in touch with me because you won last week. <3
The Widow is almost here! I'm so excited!
Oh boy what a premise and a start to an intriguing plot! Love your writing and can’t wait to find out what happens!
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Thank you, Dung! Only another day!
Oh my goodness! What a start! Congratulations! In one sweep Elizabeth can provide a very acceptable home for her family. Take time to breathe, Elizabeth! However, she should make sure, in writing, that she will NOT have to perform wifely duties! Get a contract, Elizabeth.
Oh my gosh! That scene was amazing! I can’t wait to read more!
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