Leap into Love

Choosing a romantic scene to share was not an easy choice to make. I have my favorites, of course, but I didn’t want to drop spoilers or confuse people out of context. Ultimately, I decided to share this scene from Green Card. It was one of the first scenes I wrote for this story and helped to set the tone for the entire book.

I’m going to call it more pre-romantic than actually romantic, but I hope you enjoy it regardless.

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“Man, Harper, you are really not on your game today,” Andrew said as he scored yet another point.

“Thanks, Jamison. I hadn’t noticed,” Will bit back.

“What’s the problem? You’re usually mopping the floor with me by now.” Will glared at him across the racquetball court. “Oh, I see!” Andrew drew out the words.

“See what?” Will’s annoyance had not abated.

“You’re not getting any!”

Will stared at him with shock and anger. “What do you mean ‘not getting any’? I’m fine,” he said through a clamped jaw.

“Yeah, right! You have a thin grip on control, my friend. Admit it, you’re turning blue.”

“I am not turning blue!” he nearly shouted.

Andrew held his hands up in a gesture of surrender. “All right, all right, I’ll back off. But you know Lizzy would help you out with your little problem if you asked her. She seemed pretty open to it in the beginning. That’s why she had that clause about children put in.”

“Children?”

“Yeah. Didn’t you read the pre-nup?”

“I read the part about the financial settlements. I breezed through the rest. Chalk it up to my over-inflated trust in you.”

Andrew ignored his jab. “Lizzy insisted we add a clause about children. She said with the two of you in such close quarters and all that.” Andrew gestured with his hands as his friend studied his racket. “Actually, I’m surprised it hasn’t happened already. It’s been six months.”

Will huffed. “It’s not that simple, Andrew. I live with Liz. I can’t just stop living with her if things aren’t…”

“Sweaty? Hot and dirty? Incredibly satisfying?”

Will groaned. “Oh, come on, Jamison. You know things could be incredibly awkward afterward. And it’s not like I can just go back to my place and forget about it. It’s not five dates and it’s over. I have to see her—EVERY DAY!”

“So what are you afraid of? Not up to the challenge?” Will shot him a dirty look. “Think she’s no good? Even if it sucked, I bet you could work on it. Like you said, you live together—what better opportunity to improve your skills?”

Will gave him a cynical look.

“And I doubt she sucks.”

Will looked at him questioningly.

“Trust me man, once you go Barrett, you don’t go back.”

“You did not just say that,” Will replied.

Andrew just laughed. “Come on. Court time’s up.”

***

“Death by Chocolate Cake or the Molten Lava Brownie?”

“I’m having the tiramisu,” Jen answered her sister as they perused their menus.

The waiter stepped up to the table to take their orders.

“Tiramisu and a cappuccino,” Jen said.

“I’ll have the Death by Chocolate Cake a la mode. And can you drizzle a little hot fudge over that? And a cup of cocoa with whipped cream and chocolate shavings.”

Jen looked at her sister quizzically, but said nothing.

Liz looked at the man walking past and felt herself flush. “Wow. He’s so tall. Did you see his arms?” Liz’s eyes watched him until he turned the corner, then looked back at her sister who had an amused look on her face.

“Down girl!” Jen laughed. “You okay?”

“Yeah, I’m great. Why?”

“Oh, I don’t know. You’ve just checked out every guy who’s walked by in the last hour, including one who looked like Santa.” She leaned back when she saw the waiter approach. He quietly set down their desserts and left. “And you just ordered about two pounds of chocolate.”

“I’m just craving chocolate. It’s no big deal.” As she finished her sentence, she unknowingly turned her head to follow a man in a dark suit walking past their table in the busy restaurant.

“Uh-oh. Oh, no,” Jen said, shaking her head.

“What?”

“How long has it been?”

“Has what been?”

Jen looked at her with raised brows and don’t-mess-with-me eyes.

“All right! It’s been a while.”

“How long is a while?”

“Jeremy.”

“Jeremy!” Jen cried.

“Shhh! You don’t have to announce it to the world!”

“You mean to tell me you haven’t gotten laid since Jeremy?” Jen whispered furiously. “You broke up last February!”

“I know.”

“It’s October!”

“I know,” she said lowly through clenched teeth, leaning over the table so no one else would hear her.

“Wow. I thought you and Will agreed to sleep together? Didn’t you talk about it in the beginning?”

“Yeah, we talked about it and we agreed it was okay, but it’s kind of awkward now.”

“What do you mean awkward?”

“I mean I feel like we’re friends now.”

“And that’s a problem because…?”

“I’ve never done it with a friend!”

“It’s called friends with benefits. People do it all the time.”

“I know that. I just thought it would happen naturally, but we haven’t even gotten close. Now I’m afraid we’re too firmly established in the friend zone.”

“The zone isn’t a death sentence. It’s not like you’re related or anything. You can adapt.”

“I know that logically, but what if he doesn’t want to? I don’t want to humiliate myself.”

“Why would you think he doesn’t want to? You’re hot!”

“He hasn’t made a single move. He’s been the perfect gentleman. Unfortunately,” Liz mumbled.

“And you don’t want a big awkward mess with someone you consider a friend.”

“Exactly.”

“Weren’t you friends with Jeremy?”

“Before I dated him! Then we dated for like two months before we slept together.” Jen looked at her doubtfully. “Okay, two weeks, but still!”

“But you’re married to Will.” She leaned further across the table and whispered to her sister. “And you guys go on dates—fake dates, but dates. Doesn’t that count?”

“I don’t know.” Liz grumbled and shoved another piece of chocolate cake in her mouth.

“What about that guy before Jeremy? Mike? Mark? Mick? Weren’t you friends?”

“Matt. I really liked him. And he was practically in love with me. He almost proposed, remember?”

“Oh, yeah. Why’d you guys break up again?”

“He had that weird collection of golf-balls.”

“The ones with celebrities’ faces painted on them?”

“Yup.”

“Yeah, that’s weird.” Jen made a face and shook her head. “What about Phillip? You guys were great friends. He was always helping you with your homework.”

“Yeah, we were friends. But I still had a major crush on him, even if it did only last a month. And we never actually slept together.”

“You didn’t? But what about that time I caught him coming out of your room?”

Liz grimaced and wagged her head side to side as if she were trying to find just the right words. “Heavy make-out session.”

“Ah.” Jen nodded in understanding. “So that just leaves us with the skinny tall boy from freshman year.”

“Caleb.”

“Ah, Kosher Caleb—how could I forget?”

Liz glared at her sister and said, “I was crazy about him and we went out for over a year. I met his parents, for pete’s sake. He was my first—of course we weren’t just friends.”

“So you’re in uncharted territory. Big deal. Figure it out. It’s not like you’re not attracted to each other. Who knows? Maybe after you sleep together you’ll start to like each other.”

“Who says we’re attracted to each other?”

“Oh, come on, Lizzy! First of all, this is William we’re talking about. One of Manhattan’s top ten most eligible bachelors—or at least he was. Every woman in the western hemisphere is attracted to him. Secondly, he’s totally you’re type.”

“Is not. I don’t have a type.”

“Seriously?”

“Seriously.”

“Okay, miss I-don’t-have-a-type. Why haven’t you ever dated a guy under six feet? Or is it six two?” Liz glared at her sister as she forcefully ate another bite of cake. “You have a thing for tall guys.”

“Every woman likes tall guys. It’s primal. They look like good hunters or something.”

“Uh-huh. Keep telling yourself that if it makes you feel better. Have you ever dated a blonde? Or a red head?”

“That’s not fair! Statistically there aren’t very many red-heads. Most people have never dated one,” Liz said defensively.

“Still, it seems like a pretty steady pattern you have of tall guys with dark hair. Jeremy’s was black, and weird Matt’s was definitely dark brown.”

“Phillip was blonde. Ha!”

“Light brown.” Jen shot back.

“Dark blonde.”

“Dark blonde? Really?” Jen looked at her skeptically. “Even if there was such a thing, you just said you never really slept together and you only went out for a month.”

“So?”

“So! He doesn’t really count! Obviously your subconscious was telling you he was the wrong type for you and refused to let it get serious.”

“Oh, Jenny! You are really starting to crack me up!”

Jen left some money on the table and led her sister out the door. “Come on—I’ve got an idea.”

“Where are you taking me?”

“La Perla.” Liz looked at her with wide eyes. “Don’t worry, there’s construction on the building on the corner. I’ll let you stop and gawk on the way.”

*****

I hope you enjoyed this scene from Green Card! For my contribution to Leap into Love, I’m giving away one ebook and one audiobook from my catalog, reader’s choice. Just comment to enter! If you’ve read Green Card, I’d love to know your favorite scene. 🙂

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    • BeckyC on February 21, 2020 at 10:20 am
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    Love this story. Definitely time for a reread!

    • Mary on February 21, 2020 at 11:03 am
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    Elizabeth,
    Thank you for sharing this scene.
    I absolutely adored your book and highly recommend it.
    Have a good day!

    1. Thank you! I’m so glad you liked it!

    • Leslie on February 21, 2020 at 12:03 pm
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    Just ONE favorite scene? Hmm…the ‘Hey big spender’ scene was fun, and I loved it when Lady Matlock(?) would say “But that’s what the servants are for.” Great book!

    1. Hahaha! She was such a snob and SO fun to write!

    • Liz on February 21, 2020 at 12:52 pm
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    Looks interesting!

    • Linda A. on February 21, 2020 at 12:58 pm
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    Sounds fun! Thanks for sharing.

    • Leigh Dreyer on February 21, 2020 at 1:49 pm
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    This is one of the books that made me fall head over heels for modern JAFF! I loved the relationship between these two and stayed up half the night finishing this one. (Also, shameless plug for Ship to Shore which is a new fave)

    1. I cannot apologize for being your gateway drug! LOL If we’re meant to love something, we’ll find it eventually. 🙂

    • DarcyBennett on February 21, 2020 at 3:00 pm
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    Loved it. Thanks for the giveaway!

    • Michelle C on February 21, 2020 at 3:31 pm
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    Green Card is my favourite JAFF, and I’ve read hundreds. Would it be wrong to admit that the shower scene is one of my favourites!? Also, when she realises that he’s given her Valhalla.

    1. So not wrong!!! I love both of those, too! A friend of mine read it and when she got to the shower part, she was madly texting me. “Yes! Get in there! What are you waiting for!” LOL I couldn’t stop laughing.

      I should put that Valhalla line on a T shirt. Everyone says they love that part. 🙂

    • Marie H. on February 21, 2020 at 6:26 pm
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    This is one of my favourite moderns and the first one I ever read, so it encouraged me to seek out others. Proposals are always a favourite part of the story for me, but I also enjoyed the time spent at Valhalla. Big Spender was a hoot!

    1. I’m so glad you liked it and that you went on to try more moderns. 🙂

    • Deborah on February 21, 2020 at 8:35 pm
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    Well, you have me hooked yet again! I just grabbed an ebook of Green Card. I’m partial to historic reads, but I recently read your modern and throughly delightful “Ship to Shore” and “Swap Meet”, and enjoyed both so much! Now I’m off to meet your GC Liz and Will😊 Thanks for the chance to win another to enjoy!

      • Elizabeth Adams on February 27, 2020 at 4:10 pm
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      I hope you like Green Card as much as Ship to Shore!

        • Deborah on February 27, 2020 at 5:35 pm
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        Yes! Read it and I adored Green Card! No other word for it. Will and Lizzy on a slow burner. I didn’t want it to end…. so I read it all over again😍

    • Patricia Edmisson on February 22, 2020 at 1:57 am
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    Loved the cabin scenes. I agree with big spender and when she gets Valhalla.

      • Elizabeth Adams on February 27, 2020 at 4:11 pm
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      Yeah, the cabin was fun… 😉

    • Beatrice on February 22, 2020 at 2:13 am
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    I own four of your books & have enjoyed a number of others through Kindle Unlimited, but lines like “You’re not getting any!” put me off. I guess I’m not your target audience for that scene, although the sample “Look Inside” pages on Amazon are quite fun.
    That said, I have a Canadian non-Asian friend who married a Chinese foreign student, and even after they’d had two children together, Canadian immigration authorities would still drop by at odd times in hopes of catching them out in having faked their marriage.
    And the only baby picture of me is from my green card; I got them to cut it off & give it to me when I was naturalized.

    • Teresa on February 22, 2020 at 2:40 am
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    I haven’t read Green Card, but I loved the excerpt! I just might have to go check it out. Thank you.

      • Elizabeth Adams on February 27, 2020 at 4:12 pm
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      It’s on Kindle Unlimited. I hope you like it!

    • Glynis on February 22, 2020 at 6:19 am
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    Oh fab! Must be time for yet another reread! You know my favourite scene right? He gave me Valhalla!
    I can’t believe I haven’t got Ship to Shore yet but it is on my list. Otherwise I do have all your other wonderful books.
    Thank you for sharing this reminder 🥰

      • Elizabeth Adams on February 27, 2020 at 4:13 pm
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      I’m so glad you like it!

    • Becky on February 22, 2020 at 11:28 am
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    I love the scene of when ODC — then still in a “platonic” relationship — arrived at the cabin. The sexual tension was palpable!

      • Elizabeth Adams on February 27, 2020 at 4:13 pm
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      It was intense, wasn’t it? I got a lot of messages about that… LOL

    • Dung on February 22, 2020 at 1:36 pm
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    I love those scenes and Green Card! It’s definitely one of my favorites and re-reads!

      • Elizabeth Adams on February 27, 2020 at 4:20 pm
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      I’m so glad to hear it!

    • Michelle H on February 22, 2020 at 3:07 pm
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    My eyes went wide and I gulped at the ‘you’re not getting any’ statement. But the rest of the excerpt was interesting enough I want to read Green Card now. I just have to find out about Valhalla and the shower scene. Contemporary is not my ‘go-to’ JAFF pick, but I’ve been exposed to some great ones in the past year so I’m coming around. I don’t have a favorites scene from one of your books but whenever I see The House Guest in my library I remember the snow scene first. I must say I enjoyed your contribution to Elizabeth: Obstinate Headstrong Girl, I think I loved her introspection while touring Pemberley with the Gardiners the most. And the revelations that came to her, it wasn’t all about that letter but that got it all started of course. Thank you for your generous giveaways. I must go get Green card now.

      • Elizabeth Adams on February 27, 2020 at 4:54 pm
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      I’m glad you enjoyed the OHG story. Hopefully Green Card won’t be *too* shocking. 🙂

    • Leeza Stetson on February 22, 2020 at 6:07 pm
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    I haven’t read Green Card, but I hope to have the chance soon. Thank you!

    • Lois on February 23, 2020 at 2:54 am
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    On Equal Ground looks intriguing. I mostly enjoy the historical stories.

    • Sheila L. Majczan on February 26, 2020 at 10:40 pm
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    I read Green Card but it was so long ago and I have read so many books since then that I cannot remember the scenes. I read it in July of 2018 and it was 5 stars for me.

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