It’s day 2 of our Austen Variations advent calendar, so here is a Christmas scene from my most recent Pride & Prejudice re-imagining, A Wilful Misunderstanding. This is a scene that unfortunately got left on the virtual cutting room floor! Its a little racy so consider that your warning if you don’t like that sort of thing. Please leave a comment — I will draw from the commenters below to win their choice of a signed copy of AWM or a copy of the audiobook!
On the 26th of December 1811, at a very early hour, Mrs Elizabeth Darcy sleepily opened one eye, to look into the intent stare of her dear husband.
“Ah, you are awake!” he cried out happily.
With a slight, muffled groan, she turned over, removing herself from his stare and attempting to retreat back into the land of Nod. The Christmas festivities had exhausted her, and she had hoped for more sleep.
Under its previous mistress, Darcy’s mother, Christmas had been a time of celebration at Pemberley. A tenants’ ball would be held, or a small fair might be hosted. The house would be decorated to splendid proportions and the public rooms opened to pleasure seekers. However, as the master had married so recently, it could not be expected that such celebrations would have been renewed in this year. Nevertheless, both Elizabeth and Darcy wished to host some small event to both mark the holiday and to introduce the new Mrs Darcy to the tenants, servants, and villagers.
It had been decided that a feast would be held on the day before Christmas. It was to be a relatively simple event, but one which still required many days of work and planning between Elizabeth and Mrs Reynolds. Their efforts were well worth it; those who were dependent on the great estate were gratified and pleased to be introduced to the new Mrs Darcy, and to partake in a celebration of the holiday with her and the master. But no matter how glad she was to have arranged it, it had tired her substantially.
But her husband was determined to begin the day. He pulled her into his embrace, pressing her back to his stomach, and moving her wild profusion of curls to the side so he could begin kissing her neck.
“Mmm…want to sleep…love you… later…?”
He whispered, “I just thought you might like your present.”
“Christmas was yesterday.” Her words, spoken into her pillow, were muffled.
“True…but today is an even more important day.” Taking hold of her shoulders, he gently but insistently rolled her over to face him.
Elizabeth opened her eyes, recognising she would not be permitted more sleep. She pulled her arms out from under his grasp so that she could wind them around his waist and softly caress his back. “Why is Boxing Day so important to you, love?”
“Because it has been a month since we were engaged,” he reminded her. “Since the night of Bingley’s ball, when you consented to be mine.”
“Only a month?” She smiled up at him, her sleepiness forgotten. “It seems longer, as if I have been yours forever.”
“It has passed both quickly and slowly,” Darcy mused. “In some ways, it seems a trice since the day we met; in others, I can scarcely remember a time when I did not know you. Let us both vow that we shall always be exactly this happy.” He kissed the tip of her nose.
Smiling into his eyes, she said, “I cannot make such a vow, my dear husband, for if this month has taught me one thing, it is that no matter how I love you today, I can be assured that by tomorrow it shall have grown even more.”
His eyes went soft and warm at her words. She knew she did not tell him enough that she loved him but she hoped he never wondered. In that moment she resolved she simply must tell him more.
“Such sweet words.” He kissed her again. “That certainly deserves a present.”
She laughed as he jumped from the bed, walking quickly into his dressing room. He returned just as quickly, bearing a small, flat box. She sat up, reaching her hand towards it but he snatched it away, giving her a naughty look.
“Now, I must say I had hoped this would be a present for us both—should you wish to give me something in return.”
“To be sure! But what would you wish for?”
He leaned toward her, taking her earlobe into his mouth, and giving it a gentle suckle, before whispering, “I want you to wear it immediately and to allow me the pleasure of admiring you in it.”
“That seems little enough to ask,” she agreed, closing her eyes and leaning into his ministrations.
“To be very clear,” he said, “I wish to admire you wearing only this.”
With a gasp that became a laugh, Elizabeth opened the box, finding a delicately beautiful diamond necklace. The chain was so thin that it would appear as if the sparkling gem was suspended on her bosom by magic.
Several hours later, the Darcys were at last at breakfast, with Elizabeth still wearing her new jewels, which looked as pretty when worn with her gown as it had earlier, sans gown. Smiling at her husband, Elizabeth enquired, “What shall we do today?”
“Your wish is my command, Mrs Darcy,” he said. “A walk, read, play cards…anything your heart should desire shall be done. I am yours to command.”
“Oh I like this,” she said with a grin. Then more seriously, she said, “You spoil me, Mr Darcy.”
“It is, above all things, my favourite thing to do,” he said.
And so the day was spent in very pleasant occupation which managed to be agreeable to both Elizabeth and Darcy. They went for a long walk in the snow, and then, just when they were chilled beyond their ability to tolerate it, returned to the house to snuggle by the fire in their sitting room, where they read to each other from the books Elizabeth had given him for Christmas. They played chess before dining, after which Elizabeth played and sang for her husband until both were ready to retire.
And both wholly believed there could not have been a finer Boxing Day had by anyone in the world.
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Good Morning to Amy and All!
Lovely little bit to wake up with, thank you from a dreary, very gray, but now permanent (me, not the gray) New Hampshire. I really must RE-read the book. Sounds like a good plan.
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Dear Sher, always a pleasure when you stop by!! Happy holidays!
so sweet! I love this!
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Thank you Cindy!
A Wilful Misunderstanding kept me up late reading and crying on my Kindle! I loved it! This sweet extra scene is further evidence of how happy they were to start.
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Aw thanks Madenna! Remind me I owe you some Kleenex!!
I love how you play with the figures in your book, likewise on a chessboard. You turn with a special twist everything around. So many emotions in this book, but I miss this naughty Mr. Darcy.
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Thank you Simone!
Such a heartwarming scene and the love they share still shines strong here. If we all could retain the tender feelings we have with our partners at the beginning of the relationship/marriage before most of us allow routine and everyday life to take over and we start to take our partners for granted.
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Too true! Could not agree more Satu! Thank you!
“A Wilful Misunderstanding” is one of my favorite JAFF titles and I have read it many times in its original version. Reading this happy and contented piece is very poignant as we know the anguish that will soon befall them. Thank you for this excerpt.
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Thank you so much Lillie!
This is a wonderful scene. Perhaps it should have been left in to build our regard for Darcy, prior to plummeting it almost beyond repair. Thank you for sharing.
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It was quite a long book after all, wasn’t it? Ah well left us with some scraps to enjoy later! Thank you!
Such a shame this didn’t make the final cut! I’ve still not talked myself into reading this yet! I know I will eventually but I can’t bear the thought of Darcy and Elizabeth splitting up even if it isn’t permanent. I’m such a wuss I know.
Thank you for sharing this lovely excerpt. I could live with the whole book being like this but I suppose I’m in the minority?
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Haha! Well it might be nice sometimes, true? Thanks Glynis!
What a lovely vignette. Little did they know…sigh.
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Little did they know indeed! but it was all good in the end! Thanks Carole!
I love this scene! It does make the whole premise of the novel that much sadder, though, so I can see why it might have been cut. I always find myself torn between sweet, delightful scenes like this and heart-tugging angst, because I apparently like to torture myself.
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Thank you Aimee! And I am with you— the angst makes the sweet sweeter in my opinion!
Having read this story I know that all this happiness is not permanent…but this was a lovely gift. Thank you for sharing. Love cannot be taken for granted…one must work to keep the spark alive.
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No not permanent at this juncture…but when its all worked out I hope it was stronger than ever!
Thank you Sheila!
A lovely story Amy!!!
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Thank you Joan!
Lovely scene. Such a happy time. Little did they know…
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Thanks so much Marie!
What a wonderful surprise!!
Absolutely loved it, but I have to complain: it is too short ! 😉
And also begs the question: how many other scenes like that ended on the aforementioned floor?
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So many! It was almost 300,000 words to begin so lots got caught! Fortunately it was mostly from their time apart– and I think we all had plenty of that anyway!
Thank you!
Too bad this wasn’t included in the final cut. I like seeing a playful, and somewhat naughty Darcy–although since they were married, he really wasn’t naughty. I look forward to, and read, all of your books–one of my favorite authors…
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Aw thank you so much!!!
Intriguing! How did Elizabeth agree to be his at the Netherfield ball? What transpired to make her his so quickly and what is the willful misunderstanding if they are alrwady together? I must know more.
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Thanks Gillian!
This book is one of your best, and now I want to read it again. Thanks for the chance to win it (I read it on KU) and for this extra scene.
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Aw thank you TC!
Such a lovely scene! Makes me want to cry because I know what happens soon. Great story. Thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you Nancy!
Lucky Mrs. Darcy to receive a diamond necklace on Boxing Day! Thank you for this trashed addition and for your giveaway.
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Thanks Eva!
Time to reread A Willful Misunderstanding 😏
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🙂
Thank you!!
This was intriguing and left me wanting more!
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Thank you Elizabeth!
I really liked this little scene. I was married on Boxing day, so no problems there.
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Oh fun! How nice! Best wishes on your almost-here anniversary!
I lovely vignette. Thank you for sharing this scene. Thanks for the chance to win. Stay safe and healthy.
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Thank you Shelley and you as well!
A lovely interlude. Quiet mornings spent with the one you hold dear, is always a gift. Love scenes that stregthen the bond between D & E. ❤
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Thank you Darcy!
Now that is the way to start the day!!! Love this book! Must own it!?! Thank you ,Amy for another wonderful book.
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Many thanks Sharon!
They are so adorable together.
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Thank you DarcyBennett!
What a beautiful scene. Thank you for sharimg this scene.
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Thanks for reading Deborah!
Thank you for adding joy to our Holiday season. I really enjoyed your story! Merry Christmas.
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Thank you Elizabeth!
I’ve never read anything before that “carries on the story” and now I wish to read more. That was lovely!
What a sweet snippet. I need to read this!
What a delightful outtake! I wish I could rush out to read the book right this minute!
I’ve always loved this story. Thank you for sharing this bit. I’d love to listen to the audiobook.
That was really sweet! I love seeing Darcy treating Elizabeth so well and the two truly in the thralls of love. Thank you for posting that excerpt.
Heavy sigh… that was just lovely. Thanks for sharing a deleted scene with us. I love seeing what you intended that didn’t make it to the final cut. What fun. Blessings, stay safe, and healthy. It is getting nasty out there.
such a beautiful excerpt.
Although things go wrong for ODC, I think Lizzy was correct that their love continued to grow despite the misunderstandings and heartache. I love the many facets of Darcy in this book. I have both the audiobook and eNook but would loved a signed copy!
I enjoyed this excerpt. Thank you for the opportunity to get a copy of your newest book. It is on my TBR pile.
Oh, I loved this. Please, might I have more.
I haven’t yet made myself to reread this one, but eventually I will… unlike this sweet scene, it is more a deep and emotional than a relaxing holday read. I’ll get into that sort of mood eventually, and it’s good to know there is this book to look forward to 🙂
Cut scenes are always ambivalent. Reading it now it feels like it should be included, but I know authors and editors view it differently.
What a great little scene, just what i needed this morning.
Lovely scene, I think this Darcy is super sweet but I love his passionate side too 🙂
I love this chapter! Darcy is so sweet to his new bride, but also has a fire inside for her. Love it!!
Such a sweet, lovely scene. Thank you for the extra scene, Amy!
Oh, I love this scene, especially in light of what we know comes next. I turn back to this book a couple times a year when I want an emotionally charged read that spends as much time in the highs as the lows. Thanks for sharing this excerpt!
This vignette is so entertaining that I wish it would have been included in the book, Amy. I love the sweet and slightly racy bedroom scene. That’s a bit of reminiscence to film <i>Titanic</i>.