1814, Park Street Books, Weymouth
The sound of his voice made her stiffen with shock. She had the book she intended to purchase in her hand, and she clutched it to her bosom, panic causing her heart to race.
He asked the proprietor for a book. The History of Little Goody Two Shoes—a children’s book, what did he want with that?—but it did not signify, all she knew was that she needed to escape.
“This way, sir,” said Mr Richie, the proprietor, and Elizabeth knew an immediate escape was paramount.
Elizabeth wound around the shelf on soundless feet, quietly passing the point where Darcy might have glanced up and seen her; thankfully, he had his head down examining the book in his hands and as a result, saw nothing.
Elizabeth scarcely breathed as she crossed the open section of floor, careful to avoid the board she knew had a tendency to squeak. Belatedly, she realised she still had the book in her hand and gingerly laid it upon the counter, resolving to purchase it some other day. Darcy’s head remained in his book, his back to his fleeing wife.
For a brief moment, she ached, seeing that chestnut curl between his hat and collar, wishing he was purchasing a book for their son, wishing she could go to him and slip her hand in his arm. But a quick shake of her head dispelled that foolishness. Get out now! she ordered herself.
There was a bell on the door, but Elizabeth knew it would not jangle if she opened it slowly. Inch by excruciating inch, she pressed the door, her mind begging the bell to remain silent, until it opened just enough for her to slip through.
Then, just as a successful escape was nigh, Mr Richie turned, espying her. “Good day, Mrs Elizabeth!” he called out loudly.
Elizabeth jumped at his cry, inadvertently hitting the door, which flew the rest of the way open with a raucous jangle. She glanced over her shoulder where Darcy had looked up from the book. His gaze locked on hers immediately.
“Elizabeth!” He cried out, dropping the book to the floor with a loud crash.
As fast as she could, Elizabeth ran.
A Wilful Misunderstanding is currently available for preorder and releases October 5th! I’ll be posting chapters weekly until release day– looking forward to your comments below!
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This is very intriguing..what will happen next? I feel for ODC. I am so eager to know more of the story. I can’t wait for Oct to get here!!
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Thank you! More posting next Monday to tide you over!
This is a really interesting intro. Married but separated or something!?
Cant wait for the book to come out!
Hmm.. “Mrs” Elizabeth. That’s intriguing…
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Thanks Lois!
This is going to be most fascinating! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
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Thanks Jen!
I’m intrigued and rather apprehensive to learn what could tear them apart after they were happily married. I’m glad you will be posting some chapters to help us wait for October!
Author
The way this heat has been in my neck of the woods, I am hoping October gets here soon! Thanks Deborah!
Definitely an intriguing beginning, I’m looking forward to reading the full story.
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Thanks Sarah!
I must find out what happens!
Author
You’ll need your tissues and possibly something to hit at times!! But lots of romantic parts too!
I can feel the angst just pouring off of this excerpt! Can’t wait to read it!
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Thanks Carole! Paperbacks should go live soon — I think you prefer those?
Wonder why Elizabeth is so skittish. Definitely, draws the reader into the story.
Author
She did NOT want to be found for sure! Thanks Gayle!
Such a tease! I’m dying to read this!
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Thank you Marie!
This is probably the book I most wish I’d been able to read early on. 300,000 words don’t scare me at all.
Author
Well if the word count alone didn’t do it, the head hopping and non-sensical regency no-nos surely would have! Thank you Marie!
Can’t wait to read this book, Amy!
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Thank you Daniela! And after I know I’ve already tortured you with the first version 😉
Amy, Amy, Amy……I was afraid of this. After the way you changed A Short Period of Exquisite Felicity, I had a feeling you were going to (mangle) change my all time ever favorite story. And you have. The former prologue, having her arrive alone, forlorn, to a dark, dingy estate in Scotland Was very foreboding. Now I fear what you have done. to this story. If it ain’t broke, don’t fix it. You could have changed the title but wrote a similar storyline, after all it is your story. I have purchased A short…..etc but with the changes, I can’t bring myself to reread it. I am scared of what you have done to this story. Sigh…….
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Well you’ll probably want to take a pass on it then… sorry but its always a first draft that gets posted and when publication time comes, an author must acknowledge that 300,000 words is just simply toooooo long! Best wishes!
I read and reviewed this in its unpublished version – 5 stars.
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Thank you Sheila! I do hope its an improved story by now… that first one was ROUGH plus it really lacked on the Saye 😉 He insisted on being included this time around!
WOW! Looking forward to more!
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Thanks Kimberly!
I know and LOVE this story. I can’t wait to see the changes you’ve made. This scene was amazing. She may run… but his legs are longer and I am hoping he catches her. I hope you haven’t had to explain too often the British spelling of Wilful vs the American Willful.
I wish you much success on this launch. I can hardly wait to see it. It is already on my wish-list. Blessings, stay safe, and healthy.
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Oh yes he surely will catch her…just might take her a bit to enjoy being caught! Thank you Jeanne!
Oh my goodness! What made her run? Did he run after her? What made them part? Do they have a son? If so, does Darcy know? Is it October yet? Is it VERY angsty? Do I need to buy chocolate? Or wine? Or tissues?
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Chocolate, wine, tissues–yes, do stock up 🙂 Thank you Glynis!
She is married to Mr. Darcy, but obviously separated – Why? She wishes he was purchasing a book for her son – does he even know he has a son? Now he is chasing after her and you will most likely have him catch up with her. What will happen then? Oh, the agnst. How many more scenes like this will have us wringing our hands to read on to the next chapter/phase of their relationship? Oh, Amy, you’ve done it again. Can’t wait for next Monday let alone October!
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Thank you Linda! Yeah its a bit angsty, not gonna lie about that but also much romance to take away the sting!
I love this story and can’t wait to see it again with your updating! I believe this prologue is one of many changes. Counting the days until it is released!
Nancya
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Yes in the original it was Georgiana who found her and they were at Ramsgate…I thought it might be fun to end in Weymouth instead!
I wanted to add that I am a big fan and any changes you make will certainly make the story better! Thank you!
October?!? That’s so far away as these hot days of summer drag on and on. Can’t wait to read this one after such an interesting and disturbing beginning.
Oh, I am so looking forward to reading this. I have loved all your books.
A great story with quite a bit of angst, but the rewards are worth it! Amy is a fabulous story teller!
I’m just getting around to reading this now, I am so incredibly intrigued and also desperately nervous of the amount of wine and chocolate I will consume on reading this! I love your writing Amy, really looking forward to this one. And released just a few days before my birthday!! Huzzah for me!!
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