Nowhere But North Release

My latest project has been live out there in the world for a little over a week now (although it seems much longer–I even had to check my calendar to be sure that was right!). While Nowhere But North does not qualify as JAFF, prevailing sentiment suggests that its source material, North and South, might have been a Victorian era homage to Jane Austen.

BBC

I expect that most readers here have had a chance to hear about the brooding, hard-working, and desperately handsome Richard Armitage John Thornton, but today I wanted to introduce you to Margaret Hale. She is a remarkably strong, intelligent, and interesting heroine, but she is at least as much Fanny Price and Elinor Dashwood as she is Elizabeth Bennet.

In order to understand Margaret, we must also examine the third main “character” of North and South, which is the Industrial Victorian era itself. This was a far different age than the Regency, and the characteristics of “admirable” behavior seem stifling and morbid by comparison. Blame the reigning monarch’s sensibilities or blame the rash of death and disease that came with industrialization, or even point the finger at changing lifestyles and philosophical beliefs. It was all these influences and more, far more than we have room to discuss here.

BBC

The end result is a heroine who will not bow to others’ whims, who is outspoken and indignant when a proper lady should not be, but who also has a tendency to “stuff” her feelings. In Gaskell’s North and South, a modern reader is ready to tear their hair out because she confesses to herself that she loves Mr Thornton, longs to tell him the truth about his misapprehensions regarding her brother, but she demurs at every possible opportunity! Why???

Simply put, it is a matter of dignity. Long-suffering was a virtue, patience and bearing up under injustice considered admirable. Gaskell’s Margaret Hale depended on eventual justice and decided upon the “noble” course… of silence.

It was not merely the age in which she lived that shaped her character. Margaret, like John Thornton, had been the only strong one in her circle. Everyone else depended upon her, and she herself has no shoulder to weep upon. That has a tendency to influence a person’s response to trial. Rather than taking a risk and reaching out, such a person just might turn inward and put up walls… unless someone manages to break them down.

I will leave you with an excerpt from Nowhere But North to get acquainted with my girl. Perhaps you might recognize some other familiar faces in this sketch of her.

BBC

28 June 1853

“Margaret, can this be real? Are we truly leaving Helstone and all we love behind? Oh, what can your father be thinking?”

BBC

Mrs Hale had not ceased trembling for a se’nnight, causing all about her to tend her with a concern which might have been better applied to their present troubles. Margaret, in particular, had felt the burden of her mother’s grief, for it was she who had most earnestly wished to be of some comfort, but her assurances which had been found the least desirable by their object.

Mrs Hale quaked now as they neared the train. The iron behemoth belched out a cloud of coal smoke and hot steam, and the press of passengers all about drove them relentlessly forward. She sought Dixon’s arm, but Dixon was occupied in demanding the services of a porter to take their smaller luggage.

“It will be well, Mamma. You know Papa has spoken with Mr Bell, and he has recommended a place for us—and he has a tenant in Milton who has pledged to help Papa.”

“But to leave Helstone! Oh, it does not bear thinking of. I see it now, though it is too late, what a haven it has always been! I never thought I should have to leave my home for an industrial city. Could we not have gone anywhere less horrid? Oh! Is the entire journey to be like this?” She shook anew as the great steam whistle cried out for passengers to board and grasped Margaret’s arm at last.

“Mamma, hold my hand,” Margaret soothed. “We will see that you are well settled and comfortable. And you know, Papa had set aside a sum for you and Dixon to take a few days at the coast while we look for a house—will that not be like a holiday? I am sure it will do you good.”

But her mother was shaking her head. “Nothing good is to be found in this, Margaret. It is all a waste. Your father has been a fool, and he has ruined us all!”

BBC

Margaret made no reply to this accusation. She could not so readily abuse her father’s object, nor fail to applaud the sense of dignity which had forced him into this decision, but there was that lingering sense of disquiet. Once having settled his choice, he did not appear satisfied with it, nor confident in his direction.

He passed by them now, his eyes on the ground rather than the door of the train, and his mouth fallen into that habitual melancholy which bespoke his reluctance to do the thing he had determined. Margaret wished to stop him there and again ask if this was truly his desire, for if it were not, might not he speak again with the bishop? Might not some other situation be found which would not require her mother to spend her later years in a noisome black hole of a city? But Mr Hale appeared no firmer in resolve than his wife and only kept up the motions out of a seeming sense of pride.

Margaret tried to smile back at her mother. “Papa has gone ahead to take our seats. We shall have our own private little box, and you can sit beside me, and we will look out on all the sights as we pass.”

At this moment, Dixon reclaimed Mrs Hale’s other arm, and Margaret’s mother pulled away her hand so that she might draw out a handkerchief. Into this article she wept as she mounted the train.

The journey north was broken into stages; they took a London hotel, but there was no visit to their Harley Street relations to comfort Mrs Hale or to mortify her husband. Margaret had gazed longingly out at their usual stop as the train rolled away north. Edith would be in Corfu by now, and her aunt on her way to Italy. She sighed and stared down at her own rose-embroidered handkerchief, held ready in her lap in case her mother had need of an extra, but Dixon had kept Mrs Hale well supplied.

At last, the engine steamed into Heston, and the family took their lodgings for the night. Mrs Hale and Dixon had a small room not far from the shore, but it did not overlook the ocean.

“Mamma, see how close it is? It is only a short walk. I daresay you could be there in less than ten minutes.”

“Oh, Margaret, how could you think of it? I cannot walk so far. Am I not at least to have the pleasure of seeing the water before I spend the rest of my life looking at smoky, dirty city?”

Margaret could say little more, but she again offered her mother her handkerchief and was refused.

BBC

Dawn of the following day found Margaret and her father already on a train bound for Milton. Their ride was short, a mere half hour, but the scenery was that of another world. Margaret leaned close to the window and stared in silent awe. Cities, she had seen, but there was something to the raw, earthy quality of Milton which rendered it somewhere between the grit and mire of a destitute farm and the dark hopelessness of a coal mine, all splattered upon tall buildings that blocked the horizon. It looked to her like… like the fourth circle of Dante’s Inferno.

“Papa—” she nudged him gently to rouse him—“we are here.” Mr Hale twitched—he had not truly found the comfort of sleep, but a pitiless daze had claimed his consciousness, in which he had no rest but a constant sense of helpless dread. He roused himself now and his gaze took in the charred buildings all round as the train drew into the station.

He did not speak, but Margaret was watching his manner, hoping to draw her courage from his resolve. She found instead a certain frailty of expression, in the slight twinge about his eyes and the nervous workings of his mouth.

Perhaps in that moment, she understood. The course he had set upon terrified him as much as herself, and though it had been his determination, it was she who must carry him to it.

BBC

“Come, Papa—” she patted his arm—“the doors are starting to open. Where shall we go first?”

He looked down to a bit of paper drawn from his pocket, worn and soft from countless perusals and re-foldings. “A hotel on New Street. There is a room reserved for us.”

“Already? Mr Bell must have sent word?”

“No, it was the Mr Thornton I spoke of. I expect we shall meet him today. Mr Bell speaks highly of him and says he will prove a valuable friend in the city.”

She smiled and took her father’s arm, rather than waiting for him to offer it. “A friend would certainly be welcome.”

BBC

Yes, any friend, if it gave her father hope. Even a… what was Mr Thornton? A cotton manufacturer, if she remembered correctly. A shabby little king in a filthy little kingdom. She wrinkled her nose as they made their way to a cab.

Christian charity aside, the figures she saw lining the streets were ragged, dismal, and grey… everywhere she looked, from the stone buildings to the drab clothing and the colourless expressions on the faces of the people, it was all one shade of coal-blackened ambivalence.

“It seems a pleasant enough city,” she lied, squeezing her father’s hand. “We ought to do well here, Papa.”


Well, don’t worry about our strong, stoic girl. She will find ample diversions and people of interest in that city to build the sort of life and love that we write about in novels, but the ride may be a bumpy one!

BBC

22 comments

Skip to comment form

    • J. W. Garrett on September 7, 2018 at 11:26 pm

    Congratulations on the launch of this wonderful story. OMG!! ‘No Such Thing as Luck’ was the first N&S fan fiction that I had ever read. I have Northern Rain and must read it. But this one really got me. I guess because I am older and remember back in the day when honor was important; a man’s handshake was his bond and his word meant something. The flashbacks in this story were amazing and I loved the chemistry between this couple. I have since [finally] seen the movie so I can picture the story with the faces of the movie characters. Man… this was so powerful. Thank you for writing this. For a brief while… I forgot all about Mr. Darcy. Now that is saying something. Blessings on the success of this work.

    1. I’ll keep your infidelity to Darcy a secret 😉.

      So touched that you were moved by this story! It was a challenging and at times very personal story for me, so it means a lot to me that you saw what I hoped would be seen. Thank you, Jeanne!

    • Mary Anderson on September 7, 2018 at 11:40 pm

    I am in the middle of reading Nowhere But North… No spoilers here – but I am dying to say some!!! I would have stayed up night after night reading it if I weren’t a teacher during the first week of school…! This novel has captured my interest, shaken my confidence in things working out, has led me to feel that sometimes I am in Milton and I am surprised to see Puget Sound and a sunny clear aired sky! I find Margaret’s emotional journey amazing and painful – as is Johns.. It is wonderful to hear some of what is going on in their heads and hearts while the never-slowing story winds down varied pathways of happy and not! Great read so far… I highly recommend it!

    1. Well, thanks for keeping the spoilers mum for now! Sorry to mess up the first week of school. 😳

      Thank you so much for your kind words about the story. I don’t think I have ever worried more over a book than this one! I hope you find peace and a good measure of optimism by the end.

    • Mary on September 8, 2018 at 2:49 am

    Nicole,

    Thank you for such an interesting and revealing excerpt. Poor Margaret! The responsibility she bears and at such a young age.

    I’m saving this book for a less hectic time as I,too,am familiar with the busy-mess of starting back to work,seeing new faces and getting back into the old routine.

    Best of luck with your book, Nicole! I trust that it will be as addictive,heart wrenching, angsty yet utterly adorable and swoon worthy as your previous gems!!

    1. Thank you, Mary! I do hope you enjoy it when you get to it!

    • Rosa on September 8, 2018 at 5:22 am

    You introduced me to the novel N&S and I loved all of yours. I’m thrilled to read this new one and see how Margaret Hale and Richard Armitage- sorry… John Thornton 😉 manage to find happiness.

    1. They do, very much so!

    • Deborah on September 8, 2018 at 6:41 am

    This was such an emotional story, with all its ups and downs and misunderstandings. It was, at times, heartwrenching but so beautiful. I loved the flashbacks. Thank you for Another emotional rollercoaster ride.

    1. You are most welcome, it was quite a ride for me as well!

    • Carole in Canada on September 8, 2018 at 9:48 am

    My heart broke for Margaret when her mother turns from her and relies so much on Dixon…but stoic she is like you said. She must be the one to carry the day for both her parents. As I read this, these faces were in my mind and picturing the heartbreak they both endured had me in tears. I ran the gamut of emotions throughout the book which goes to show the depth of your writing…complex, emotional and beautifully written. Thank you and congratulations!!

    1. That was as per canon, Mrs Hale depending so on Dixon. Yes, poor Margaret! Thank you for stopping by and sharing such kind words, Carole.

    • Martha Claycomb on September 8, 2018 at 10:23 am

    Thank you for all your hard work on this book. Loved it and loved northern rain. 👍👍

    1. Thank you, Martha! 💕

    • Shelley Hoisington on September 8, 2018 at 2:18 pm

    Well, I just watched North & South two weeks ago and I am hooked. I will definitely be checking out this story.

    1. Addicting, isn’t it?

  1. I’ve read and re-read No Such Thing as Luck several times, and I adore it more with each reading! I was just thinking that Northern Rain was due for a re-read, and then Nowhere but North pops up!! I think I’ll still re-read Northern Rain first, and save my pennies for Nowhere but North (and write a review on Goodreads and my blog, of course!).

    I’ve been a Gaskell fan for so long–since I first read Wives and Daughters over twenty years ago with an online community of homeschooling moms who discussed literature, theology, film, writing, and the various arts. But when I read it, no one had told me that it was left unfinished by Gaskell, so after reading 700+ pages, to come to an editor’s note just as the hero and heroine seemed to finally have a chance of reconciliation floored me. I was angry and frustrated for days!! I’ve since read most of Gaskell’s novels: North and South, Mary Barton, Cranford, Cousin Phyllis and I just read several of the stories in Gothic Tales last month but had to return it to the library before I could finish more than a third of the book. I’m not much of a short story person since I love burrowing into a nice, long, satisfying read, but I quite enjoyed the short stories I have read by Gaskell.

    Thanks so much, Nicole, for sharing this peek into your newest release!! Congratulations!!!

    Warmly,
    Susanne 🙂
    (How goes the homeschooling this year? It feels sooooo weird NOT to be homeschooling after 21 years….)

    1. Wives and Daughters is such a heartbreaker! Sorry you were in for a shocker on that one. She was truly a mistress of the craft!

      Thank you so much for your kind words about NSTAL and NR! They are both special books to me as well. I am so glad they have meant something to you!

      We always ramp up slowly to our school year, as we keep up some practice through the summer and we try to make the most of the good weather while it lasts. However, we start co-op classes on Monday, so that means I need to finish organizing the classes I am teaching! (And I am so grateful this book launched before the school year started!)

    • Anji on September 9, 2018 at 5:44 am

    As you know Nicole, I love this latest book of yours! Yes, there is angst and tissues (possibly also chocolate and wine!) will be needed to get through a certain part, but it’s such a good read. Quite a number of people have focussed on JohnThornton’s back story in the past, myself included, but Margaret’s tale is equally as good. Taking us right back to when she was four years old and seeing her relationship with Fred before he joined the Navy was wonderful.

    One of the things that I’ve always had a lot of sympathy for Margaret about is the fact that her father Gave her the task of telling her mother that they were leaving Helstone. That really annoyed me! He was strong enough to give up a secure living for his beliefs but couldn’t bring himself to tell his wife they were actually going. I’m not surprised that, possibly because of that Mrs. Hale turned from Margaret (as the bearer of the bad news) to seek comfort and sympathy from Dixon instead.

    1. Gaskell more than hinted at this disconnect between Margaret and her mother. I have often wondered if it was a product of Margaret spending most of her formative years in London, and Mrs Hale’s fear – rational or not –of opening herself up and then losing yet another child. Whatever it was, it made for a pretty dysfunctional family.

      Thank you so much for stopping by, Anji! I have so appreciated your support and feedback during the final stages of this book! Where would we be without great friends to share stories with? 💕

    • Agnes on September 9, 2018 at 11:07 am

    I’m so happy your new novel is out! Congratulations! I’m savoring the fact that I have such a treat to look forward (depending only on free time – than you for putting it on Kindle Unlimited!). Your excerpt illustrates so well the fact that Margaret was the only strong one in her family, that her parents only took from her and didn’t give back both in the emotional and practical sense. She did not make any of the decisions but she was the one who had to make them work and even use her emotional energy to cheer/comfort them, It is very frustrating/angsty but it’s also good to know that she finds a partner with whom she finds mutual support, a relationship of emotional give-and-take.

    1. That is an interesting observation about emotional give intake. As you pointed out, it is so important in a healthy relationship! And sometimes it is hard to believe that somebody really does want to take a little bit of what you need to dish out 😉.

      I hope you get a chance to read it soon, Agnes! Thanks for stopping by.

Comments have been disabled.