Chapter 1 – His Perfect Gift

Happy Friday! I’ve been busy fixing up my house as well as proofing the audiobook for Rain and Retribution, which is extremely close to being submitted for approval. In the meantime, I hope you’re ready for the holidays because I have a Christmas story I’m prepping to come out next month. I don’t have a cover yet, but I’m about to start working on it. For now, let’s just check out the first chapter 🙂 I hope you’re ready! Don’t forget to tell me what you think afterwards!

 

Chapter 1

December 16th 1811

Fitzwilliam Darcy dropped his head back into the squabs of the carriage with a sigh. The last thing he desired was to journey across town. Why had he capitulated so easily? He raised his head and levelled as stern a glare as he could muster at Richard. “I must insist you tell me where we are going.”

His cousin, who sat across from him, grinned and crossed his arms over his chest. The lout had to enjoy being insufferable. Why else would he behave so? “My but you are ill-tempered this morning. What has you in such a foul mood these days? I thought your stay with Bingley was to be a remedy, not make matters worse.” Richard tried his nerves more often than not, but Darcy refused to let on the true reason for his displeasure.

“If I am ill-tempered, why would two months in a house with Bingley’s sister improve my disposition?” When he awakened this morning, he had not expected he would be journeying to Cheapside today. At Richard’s first mention of the trip, he had refused, but his cousin, a colonel in the Regulars, was quite adept at picking and picking until Darcy relented. His cousin had not learnt the art in the army, but instead, from the years they had spent together in their youth. All Darcy had wanted was for Richard to cease his torment, which meant he now sat in a carriage bound for Cheapside, of all places.

“Are you not aware how much I dislike the balls and the dinner parties of the Season? I have endured Miss Bingley’s daily presence for months, as well as that infernal ball at Netherfield, and now your mother has insisted upon prolonging my torture by demanding my presence at her Twelfth Night fête. Then, I have been invited to a dinner party given by none other than Miss Bingley—as if I have not had enough of her cloying remarks and fawning compliments. I should think those upcoming two events alone would be enough to sour anyone’s disposition.” Darcy steered his attention to the view outside the window. What he would not give to avoid any further discourse on the subject. He needed Richard to give him quarter.

A hearty chuckle came from across the carriage. “I admit the lady is not well-liked, but the only teeth set on edge by Miss Bingley belong to you, cousin, and I daresay ’tis your own fault.”

Darcy’s head jerked back. “My fault?”

Richard shifted his sabre and relaxed further into the seat. “You are too concerned with offending Bingley to treat his sister as you would most ladies. You grit your teeth and accept her attentions when you should be as intolerable to her as you are to the others.”

He inhaled in an attempt to soothe that well of pressure building in his gut. “I may not enjoy speaking with the ladies as you do, but I am not intolerable.” Truth be told, he had only ever enjoyed speaking to one lady, Miss Elizabeth Bennet, and today, his cousin dragged him away from his library to Cheapside. Cheapside of all places! He had refused, if for no other reason than to avoid another reminder of the lady who consumed his thoughts of late. Her uncle lived in Cheapside, did he not? Was there nothing that would spare him the torment of her memory? Unfortunately, his cousin would not leave him to the solitude of his library and had pestered him. Why could Richard not leave him be?

The colonel barked out a laugh. “I beg to differ. I have known many a lady who was offended by your method of keeping them at bay.”

“I have no wish to be ensnared by any of them, so I ensure I do nothing to encourage their hopes.” With a heavy exhale, Darcy grimaced. “But I am afraid my latest endeavour to be of aid to Bingley has not helped the matter with Miss Bingley.”

His cousin lifted his eyebrows and leaned forward in his seat. “So, you have saved Bingley from himself once again? What was it this time? Another bad investment opportunity?”

Darcy shook his head. “Bingley became enamoured of a local girl while in Hertfordshire.”

“That does not sound too dire,” said Richard, dismissing it with a wave. “He is always fancying himself in love. The notion passes soon enough.”

Again, Darcy shook his head. “No, this time was different. Bingley showed a decided preference for the young lady from the first evening of their acquaintance, and by the ball, it had become evident that he had raised the expectations of the neighbourhood. They all believed him soon to propose.”

His cousin furrowed his brows. “You felt a marriage to this lady to be imprudent?”

Darcy closed his eyes. How could he forget the deplorable behaviour of Mrs. Bennet and the three youngest Bennet daughters? “The match would have been unwise. She had little fortune, no connections, and the behaviour of her family was objectionable, to say the least.”

“You must consider it a triumph to have successfully separated the two.”

“You can be certain.” Darcy fidgeted with his cuffs, adjusting them at his wrists. “My only regret is that by colluding with Miss Bingley, she seems assured I will propose. I tell you: I am at my wit’s end. She is unbearable.”

Richard stared at him, his eyes boring into Darcy. What was he about? He could not suspect anything amiss, could he? He straightened and adjusted the set of his shoulders. His cousin started to point his finger, wagging it at Darcy. “Come to think of it, you returned from Netherfield in a horrid mood.” A ludicrous, crooked grin lit his cousin’s face. “Did you make the acquaintance of a lady in Hertfordshire? Would you be pining for someone as unsuitable as Bingley’s new angel?”

He scoffed as he picked a piece of invisible fluff from the sleeve of his topcoat. Elizabeth Bennet? Unsuitable? If not for her family and connections, she would be eminently suitable. “You are ridiculous. I would never be so careless.”

His cousin sighed. “No, I suppose you would not.” Richard’s voice turned dull with the last. Would he prefer Darcy fall in love with a lady their family would never accept?

No, he needed to distract Richard before he guessed the truth of the matter. “So, what is so special about this wine and brandy merchant?”

“Father has raved of the man for a few years now, and I happened to make his acquaintance last summer. I am unsure of his sources, but he boasts of a particularly fine assortment of Port, claret, and French brandy.” Richard had dipped his chin a bit with the mention of the last two. The man was certain to be a smuggler or was in partnership with one. “My father was impressed by their selection. He has also advised me to invest in the business, which has yielded a substantial return. Since you enjoy fine spirits as well as a sound business opportunity, I thought you may wish to meet the proprietor.”

Darcy suppressed a smile at the success of his manoeuvre. “I do not see the urgency of such a matter. I have a perfectly adequate supplier on Piccadilly Street, whom I have used since my father passed.”

With a huff, Richard sat back against the squabs. “I would wager this man’s prices to be more reasonable. He also delivers to Mayfair and Belgravia, which means you should not have to return once you have set up an account. Father merely pens him a letter with what he desires, and Mr. Gardiner arranges the rest.”

They stared at each other for a few seconds until Richard shook his head. “Whether you decide to do business with him or not, I have made the introduction, thus you cannot fault me for never doing so.” He turned towards the window, seeming to watch the buildings pass. Richard rarely lost his good humour. Perhaps Darcy was a bit churlish.

A row of houses along Gracechurch Street drew Darcy’s particular interest. He had no desire to argue any further with his cousin. A maid with several children stood upon the steps of a large corner house that appeared to be well kept. Could one of these homes belong to the uncle of Elizabeth Bennet? He had never thought to study the neighbourhood in the past—not that he ventured to Cheapside often, but some of these homes were on 24-foot-wide lots and, with their detailing, could have been nestled between the homes on Mayfair without standing apart. He shook himself. He needed to stop this ridiculousness. The appearance of a house rarely corresponded to the personality of the owner. After all, Longbourn was a charming and well-tended home by all outward appearances, yet the Bennets’ coarseness in company belied any impression one may have derived from their first glimpse of the estate.

A small park ahead caught his eye. Had Miss Elizabeth ever walked and enjoyed that particular prospect? She and Miss Bennet claimed to stay with their aunt and uncle from time to time, so the idea was not out of the realm of possibility. With her love for the activity, she must have taken a ramble through the pathways during one of her visits. He could almost envision her strolling through the trees, the hem of her morning gown stained with grass and dirt—much as she had appeared upon her impromptu arrival at Netherfield to care for her sister.

They drew closer, and a young lady standing at the front gates came into focus. He blinked. Was that…? He looked again. The lady was indeed Jane Bennet. Darcy drew back from the window while she entered the park hand in hand with a small child, a servant trailing behind.

He would have to ensure Bingley remained away from Cheapside for the near future. They had struggled so to prevent his return to Hertfordshire and to conceal Miss Bennet’s presence in London; it would not do for him to happen upon her now.

“There is a handsome young lady,” said his cousin, causing Darcy to flinch. “You jerked back from the window so. Do you know her?”

With a shrug of his shoulders, Darcy donned a mask of feigned indifference. “I would imagine a tradesman’s daughter, one of good means by her gown.”

His cousin frowned then narrowed his eyes. “You appeared to have recognised her, or at least, taken interest?”

“No, I am not acquainted with her, and as for her being of interest…” His last view as they passed was that of Jane Bennet, smiling to the child at her side. “She smiles too much.”

Richard gave a great guffaw. “That has to be the most preposterous notion I have ever heard you utter. What man has not been bewitched by the smile of a beautiful woman?”

Miss Elizabeth again came to mind, and Darcy could not help one side of his lip from tugging upward. “Perhaps a pair of fine eyes may one day garner my notice.”

His cousin shook his head. “I pity you when they do. You are so accustomed to maintaining your distance, you will be at a loss as to how to win her favour.” He turned serious and held Darcy’s eye. “But, she will be a lucky woman—a lucky woman indeed.” Before Darcy could respond, Richard started. “Oh! We have arrived.”

Once the step was placed, Darcy alighted after his cousin and gave a cursory glance to his surroundings. The street in both directions was busy with carts moving their wares. The narrow pavement boasted of a number of people, entering and exiting various shops with their parcels. A milliner was to one side of the door Richard approached, a dressmaker’s establishment to the opposite. As he followed his cousin into the shop, the cool air of the room held a slight musty quality. With the exception of the front window, bottles lined the walls, even behind the counter, except where room had been made for a door.

“Colonel! I had not expected to see you today.” The man who approached wore a genial countenance, his arms outstretched in a manner that conveyed welcome.

“I have extolled the many virtues of your shop to my cousin, so I thought I would force him from his study to accompany me. He prefers to hide away in his library rather than possibly come in contact with the sun.”

Darcy lifted his eyes to the ceiling, which the man saw but laughed. “Cousin, why do you not introduce me?” he said. Regardless of whether he wanted to be there, he would not be rude.

“Fitzwilliam Darcy, may I introduce Mr. Edward Gardiner?”

“You have come at an opportune moment. I just had a new shipment in this morning,” said Mr. Gardiner once they had bowed. He lifted an eyebrow to Richard. “I have yet to open it. Would you care to join me? I am certain there is something you would enjoy in those crates.”

His cousin rubbed his hands together in a manner more fitting Bingley than a colonel. “Lead the way, my good man.”

With a smile, Mr. Gardiner motioned for them to follow him behind the counter. “What do you prefer to drink, Mr. Darcy?”

“I keep a great deal of Port in my cellar. I do stock brandy when I have the opportunity.”

Mr. Gardiner nodded. After he said a few words to a man in the office, he led them down a narrow hallway and down a set of stone stairs. The air became more stagnant and stale and tickled his nose as they ventured further. When they reached the bottom, candles lit the musty, windowless chamber where several crates stood in the middle of the stone floor. Racks also lined the high walls, all laden with bottles.

Darcy pulled an unfamiliar bottle from the rack. “Constantia wine?” he said, his eyes wide.

“Is that a favourite, Mr. Darcy?”

He shook his head. “No, I have never tasted it. Do you sell a great deal of it?”

Mr. Gardiner tipped his head one way then the other. “A bit. The Prince Regent purchases part of my stock as does the colonel’s father. The Duke of Devonshire and the Duke of Cumberland have also requested cases. I do not often receive shipments of Constantia wine[i], and it never lasts for long after it arrives.” As Darcy made to return the bottle to the shelf, Mr. Gardiner pressed the wine back towards him. “Pray, try it with my compliments.”

Darcy shook his head. “’Tis generous of you, sir, but ’tis too much.” Constantia wine had to be imported from the southernmost peninsula of Africa and was rare. The bottle Mr. Gardiner offered him was exceedingly expensive.

With a smile, the man retrieved a tool hanging upon the wall. “I sent word to those who purchase my Constantia wine shipments yesterday. Those bottles will be gone within the next few days, and at a substantial price. I am happy to provide you with a bottle to sample. Pray, take it and enjoy.”

He gaped at the costly wine. “Thank you. I shall save this for a special occasion.”

The man smiled as he pried the tops from the crates. Richard dove into the packing, pulling out bottles and handing them to Mr. Gardiner. “My father would like a couple of bottles of this,” said his cousin, holding a bottle closer to a candle.

Darcy set the wine on a table and took a bottle of the brandy his cousin offered him. “I know the seal on this one. My father used to keep a supply of this before the war.”

After a waggle of his eyebrows and a crooked grin, his cousin pulled another bottle from the straw. “How many would you like?”

How many, indeed. Darcy set the bottles he wished to purchase to one side with the Constantia wine until they had emptied the contents of the crates. Then, Mr. Gardiner tasked a boy with packing Darcy’s order as well as Richard’s before they returned to the office upstairs. Before Mr. Gardiner could close the door behind him, a feminine hand wrapped around the edge.

“Uncle, my aunt sent me to ask when you would be home for dinner.”

Wait! He knew that voice. When the door opened, Miss Elizabeth Bennet stood in the doorway. Her cheeks were a bit pink, possibly from the chill of the day, and her celestial blue pelisse brought out the same colour flecks in her eyes. Of all the places in Cheapside, Richard had to bring him to Miss Elizabeth’s uncle?

Her eyes darted to him and widened. “Mr. Darcy?”

After they bowed, his cousin stepped forward. “Miss Elizabeth, I did not know you were in town, or else I would have called upon you. As I recall, you do enjoy walking in that small park just down the street.”

Darcy swallowed the “Hah!” that threatened to burst from his chest. He had been correct about her penchant for walking.

Elizabeth dipped her chin. “I do. How good of you to remember, Colonel.” Her eyes darted back to Darcy.

“I hope you and your family are well?” Darcy asked.

“They are well. I thank you.”

Mr. Gardiner grinned and clasped his hands before him. “I had wondered if you were the Mr. Darcy who lately visited Hertfordshire. I have heard much of you from my nieces—and my sister, Mrs. Bennet.”

He tore his eyes from Miss Elizabeth, then glanced at Richard, who grinned from ear to ear. “Yes, I met the Bennets while I stayed with my friend, Bingley.”

The man’s smile faltered just a hair before Miss Elizabeth turned back to his cousin. “How is your father, Colonel? Though it has been some time, I enjoyed making his acquaintance.”

Darcy almost swayed in his spot. Elizabeth Bennet had met his uncle. She appeared to know Richard. How had he been unaware of this?

“Colonel, Mr. Darcy, we would be pleased if you would join us for dinner? While Mr. Darcy has met my oldest niece, you have yet to do so,” said Mr. Gardiner, to his cousin. The man still wore a cheerful expression. Darcy’s mouth opened and closed. Why could he not speak?

“What do you say, Darcy? Or have you promised Georgiana you would join her?”

“She is with your mother. I am certain Lady Fitzwilliam will insist she remain until this evening.” His sister never arrived home early from a day at the Fitzwilliam’s. Their aunt and uncle always insisted on her joining them for their evening meal. Today was not likely to be different.

“Excellent!” His cousin slapped him on the back. “We shall be pleased to join you, Gardiner.”

Darcy suppressed the urge to squeeze his eyes closed. He departed Hertfordshire to escape the hold Miss Elizabeth held over him, but here she was standing before him. How could he spend an entire evening in her company? Richard would notice his unease. His cousin knew him too well to be fooled by those usual devices he employed to avoid a lady’s company.

And what of Miss Bennet? Richard would also learn that he lied when they saw her at the park. This was why he hated dissembling, but how could he have known? He grimaced. What a trial this evening would be!

 

 

[i] Constantia wine is from the Constantia valley near Cape Town in South Africa’s Cape Peninsula. Developed by Dutch settlers in the late 17th century, the aromatic wine possessed an intense and lingering sweetness and was considered among the top dessert wines of the world. It was also “little produced,” which made it very expensive. So much so that it was usually purchased exclusively by the aristocracy and royalty of the world.

Sources: Fullerton, Susannah.   Contribution to Jane Austen’s Regency World Magazine.
Kelly, Pauline E.  Jane Austen Dictionary. Ink Well Publishing (2009)
Shapard, David M. (editor). The Annotated Sense and Sensibility. Anchor Books (2011)

 

 

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    • denise on September 24, 2021 at 12:29 am
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    What a wonderful excerpt!

    1. Thank you!

    • WhimsyMom on September 24, 2021 at 12:31 am
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    The new story looks great, but I am most excited about the news of the Rain and Retribution audiobook!

    1. I’m excited about the audiobook too! I’m just waiting on those last few corrections to be uploaded so I can give the clear for ACX to review it. Should be soon! Thanks, Whimsy!

    • Mary Anderson on September 24, 2021 at 12:54 am
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    What a wonderful start to a novel! I cannot wait to sample more! Thanks for sharing the beginning. I think Darcy will have a time of it and the Colonel knows a lot more than he is letting on.

    1. Darcy will certainly have an interesting time of it! Thank you, Mary!

    • Michelle David on September 24, 2021 at 1:21 am
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    Ooooh Darcy’s dug himself a hole. Should be fun watching him try to climb out of it while Richard watches in amusement.

    1. LOL! He has kind of dug himself into a hole, hasn’t he? I wonder how he’ll explain all of this away 🙂 Thanks, Michelle!

    • Tara Shelburg on September 24, 2021 at 1:23 am
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    I’m so excited to read more! I had no idea such a world of “extra Austenism” (as I have dubbed it) existed! To tell the truth, I have only discovered Jane Austen this year, much to the dismay and joy of my daughter! She discovered Ms. Austen in her teens and has been urging me off and on for at least 12 years to read at least one of her novels! I read P & P then watched the BBC 1995 version. Since then, I have seen P&P 1995 SEVERAL times and have read it once more this year; all this year! Thank you so much for sharing your unique version/spin on the story!

    1. “Extra Austenisim” is great and you’ve just touched the tip of the iceburg! There’s an entire world of “Extra Austen” out there. Welcome to the Austen Universe! 🙂

    • SamH. on September 24, 2021 at 1:25 am
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    So much fun! What a great set up for the story. Looking forward to reading the rest!

    1. Thank you!

  1. Nice excerpt, Leslie. Look forward to getting a copy when available.

    1. Thank you!

    • Lynda Case on September 24, 2021 at 3:28 am
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    This is well on its way to being brilliant. Am looking forward to the book when published.

    1. Thank you so much, Lynda!

    • Glynis on September 24, 2021 at 3:40 am
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    Oh dear! Alas Darcy admitted his advice to Bingley, I wonder if the Colonel will mention it at dinner? Or perhaps Darcy will get to know of Jane’s despair? Whatever, I do need to know what happens 😉 can’t wait, thanks for this Leslie 🥰

    1. Never fear, a lot will unfold fairly quickly. Thanks, Glynis!

    • Satu on September 24, 2021 at 3:48 am
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    Oh my! This was absolutely wonderful!!! I so hope Richard will win Jane from Bingley as I’ve never been particularly fond of that spineless fellow who allowed the poor behaviour of Miss Bingley while they were at Netherfield. I’m also so glad that you stated this would be ready next month as I can hardly wait to read this!

    1. Bingley is certainly a bit different and unique in this one. We’ll see if he’s worthy of Jane. Thanks, Satu!

    • Gerrit Kestermann on September 24, 2021 at 4:14 am
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    Well, you may regard this as a preorder… Make haste, make haste 😉

    1. I’ll be working on the cover today. It’s been put a bit on the backburner with some of the house issues. Thanks, Gerrit!

  2. Ohh Darcy’s in trouble *sing song voice*
    You definitely see this as a preorder, please hurry up! Very curious to see how Darcy will get his foot out of the mole hole he is in at present 😅🤣

    1. I’m doing the best I can! Hopefully, a preorder should be up soon 🙂 Thanks, Sophia!

    • Cyndy on September 24, 2021 at 7:01 am
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    What a good start! I always enjoy your books and I am sure this one will be great too!

    1. Thank you, Cyndy!

    • Vesper on September 24, 2021 at 8:37 am
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    I do hope that it will not be another Colonel and Jane story. I don’t think Mary should be included with her two younger sisters and mother as far as ‘deplorable behaviour’ , that poor girl suffers enough already. Darcy really is such an awful snob and hypocrite.

    1. He can be. Thanks, Vesper!

    • Martha on September 24, 2021 at 9:35 am
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    I’m excited for what’s next! Interesting beginning!

    1. Thank you, Martha!

    • Jean on September 24, 2021 at 9:36 am
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    What a wonderful start. I look forward to reading the completed story, Interesting that Richard never mentioned the knowing the Gardiners and their niece. What a surprise – whether pleasant or unpleasant remains to be seen.

    1. Richard seemed to give what was relevant at the time. Darcy doesn’t have reason to recognize the name Gardiner, so it’s all one big surprise. We’ll just have to see what happens during dinner 😉 Thanks, Jean!

    • Marie H on September 24, 2021 at 10:07 am
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    I love how the Colonel already knows the Gardiners and Elizabeth. This beginning pull pulled me right into the story. Look forward to adding this to my library. Congratulations!

    1. Thank you! Glad to have you with us!

    • Mary A Coble on September 24, 2021 at 10:26 am
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    What a wonderful start! And the perfect date for Chapter 1! I look forward to the continuation of this story as I am sure it will be as great a read as all your books. Will Richard be a rival for Elizabeth? Or will he fall for Jane? (I hope! I do love the pairings of Jane and the Colonel.)

    1. All excellent questions! But, we’ll have to wait and see. Thanks, Mary!

    • Lori Orcena on September 24, 2021 at 10:56 am
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    Can’t wait!! Shaping up to be another amazing book!!! EEKKK!!!

    1. I hope so! Thanks, Lori!

    • Sheila L. Majczan on September 24, 2021 at 11:00 am
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    I don’t like to read chapters when I then have to wait for the next. I do enjoy your stories. Good luck with this new one. Part of the problem is that I read so many I can’t remember and then have to go back and reread anyway. So I will just wait.

    1. However you want to read it! I do understand. Thanks, Sheila!

    • Gayle on September 24, 2021 at 11:23 am
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    There’s just so much going on in this small sample — great start, I look forward to reading the finished work when it is released.

    It seems Darcy is going to have to redeem himself in more ways than one as Elizabeth is not as unconnected as he believed–and the Gardiners are not the simple tradespeople he condemned them to be (though how he manages to do this when Bingley is from trade is questionable).

    1. Miss Bingley condemns the Gardiners in canon for being in Trade. It’s part of the vagaries and inconsistencies JA highlighted so well. Thanks, Gayle!

    • Robin on September 24, 2021 at 12:36 pm
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    Ooh. What a teaser. I love it! Is this a full-length novel or a novella?

    1. It is novel-length, albeit a short novel. I hope that’s okay. It was just what it turned out to be when I was done. 🙂 Thanks, Robin!

    • Carol Hoyt on September 24, 2021 at 1:35 pm
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    What a good start! The charming colonel who is known to Elizabeth and a tongue tied, hole digging (as usual) Darcy!
    It has all the makings of a great story!!

    1. Darcy has certainly dug himself into a hole. The question is how effectively will he haul himself out of that hole? Will it be a slow climb? Thanks, Carol!

    • Sarah P on September 24, 2021 at 1:51 pm
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    Great teaser. Loved that the Earl and the Colonel know Elizabeth and the Gardiners. Now Darcy can’t complain about the Bennets relatives in trade, especially when one of them presented his with a valuable bottle of wine.

    1. It’s hard to complain about them when they do business with some of the richest people in the country, not to mention furnish that Constantia wine. That was a priceless rabbit hole find there! 😉 Thanks, Sarah!

    • Patty Edmisson on September 24, 2021 at 2:39 pm
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    Darcy has stepped into it now! How will the Colonel and Bennets take his lie? What fun the Colonel has met and introduced Elizabeth to his father before Darcy even met her. Darcy is in such trouble…

    1. LOL! When isn’t Darcy in some kind of trouble? He loves to put his foot in his mouth. Thanks, Patty!

    • Meg on September 24, 2021 at 6:51 pm
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    Wonderful! I can’t wait to read it in its entirety. Thank you for this tantalizing first chapter.

    1. Thank you for stopping by and reading!

  3. This sounds intriguing. Thank you for sharing this first chapter. it does get us interested.

    1. Thanks, Donna!

    • Terri on September 24, 2021 at 9:21 pm
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    Very interesting love it when Darcy gets snookered into situations . I look forward to more thank you for the taste.

    1. More to come! Thanks, Terri!

    • Gwyn on September 24, 2021 at 9:39 pm
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    I can’t wait to see how Darcy digs himself out of this! Might he be one of the rudest you’ve every written?

    1. Is he? If he is, we’ll see how long that lasts! Thanks, Gwyn!

    • Roxane Wolff on September 25, 2021 at 1:10 am
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    Very interesting
    An intriguing beginning!

    1. Thank you, Roxane!

    • Betty Camopbell Madden on September 25, 2021 at 4:13 pm
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    Looking good, thank you!

    1. Thank you!

    • Michelle H on September 25, 2021 at 6:13 pm
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    Oh dear….I’m kinda hoping the good Colonel WILL say something about Darcy being such ‘a good friend’ etc., etc., and yet I’m also thinking ‘Oh Richard, shut up for once, would ya?’ Ha! Oooo I think this is gonna be a really good one, Leslie. No pressure or anything, but I want to read this soon soon soon!

    P.S. R&R audio (my heart is pumping faster I’m so excited,) I’m doing a happy dance!

    1. Both will be out as soon as I can manage! Thanks, Michelle!

    • Marie on September 25, 2021 at 7:30 pm
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    Very promising start. Can’t wait to read more.

    1. Awesome! Thanks, Marie!

    • Davida on September 26, 2021 at 7:18 pm
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    I have a feeling Darcy may be a heap of trouble and hope the Colonel doesn’t make it worse!

    Can’t wait to read more!

    1. Well find out soon! Thank you, Davida!

    • Beth G on September 28, 2021 at 8:29 am
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    This is so wonderful! Thanks so much. Oh, how difficult this dinner will be for Darcy.

    1. I suppose we’ll find out! 🙂 Thank you!

    • Suzan Lauder on September 28, 2021 at 11:40 pm
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    Mr. Gardiner as a wine merchant sounds fascinating. But Darcy has not changed from canon, which means he has an uphill battle to win Elizabeth no matter how nice he tries to be to her uncle. Good luck, Darcy! You’ll need it! Thanks for the chapter. This books sounds like a winner!

    1. Thank you so much, Suzan!

    • Carol S. Bowes on September 28, 2021 at 11:42 pm
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    I can hardly wait for the cover and the pre-orders! Good job!

    1. Thank you, Carol!

    • June on October 1, 2021 at 11:23 am
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    This is the type of book (when I was younger and more flexible lol) that I would pull off the shelf to read a few pages and then “find myself” sitting in the floor of bookstore with the entire novel read in one sitting!!! This takes losing yourself in a good book into a whole new category🤣🤣 Of course, when I’m sucked into a story that quickly, all I want to do is get home into my reading chair with my newest treasure, along with a cup of tea and read that wonderful story all over again! In other words, I really like this!💜💜💜 Congratulations on the great book, L. L. and thanks for sharing!

    1. What a lovely compliment! Thank you, June!

    • Jen Dowdy on October 5, 2021 at 9:43 am
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    Poor Mr Darcy! He’s got himself in a gloomy cloud, at a place that would “pollute” him and has reminders of the Hertfordshire from which he is so desperate to escape. It’s that reserve and arrogance, and yet I hope he fully melts soon! Thank you for that chapter, as I cannot wait for more.

    1. We’ll have to see how soon he melts then if he can melt Elizabeth along with him. LOL! Thanks, Jen!

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