WIP Chapter 8 — 10 Comments

  1. Oh Elizabeth! You are playing with fire. Hopefully Jane will arrive soon and knock Bingley for six then Darcy can try to win Elizabeth (that’s if she realises what he meant when he was saying she and Bingley didn’t suit)

  2. She is playing a game that could have dire circumstances. Jane, hurry home!!
    Such a interesting plot! Can’t wait to read more!

  3. Thankfully Elizabeth knows her own mind about Bingley. Hopefully Bingley isn’t really in love this time. If you ask me, Elizabeth doesn’t need to do a thing to pay back Miss B and Darcy. When her mother comes to Netherfield, she will easily do the deed. Looking forward to more.

  4. Uh oh. Mrs. Bennet to arrive? Not a happy thought at all.

    I hope that Elizabeth’s plan will not go awry…and that Jane will arrive soon!!

    Thank you for this lovely chapter, Kara!! I’m so enjoying this story!!

    Susanne 🙂

  5. As everyone is eager for Jane to arrive, let me assure you that she arrives in the next chapter, along with Mr. Marshall, and… Mr. Collins! Yep! We knew he would have to show up at some point.

  6. Although I completely understand why she is doing it, there is a part of me that wishes Elizabeth not play this game. However, there is another part of me that wishes Bingley would propose to her so that she could refuse him because of his unpleasant connections (his sisters and his friend). I wonder if Darcy will feel sorry for Elizabeth if Bingley quickly transfers his affection from Elizabeth to Jane. Will there be a love triangle (or quadrangle, or pentangle) with all the various people? Will Elizabeth repent playing her foolish game with Bingley’s emotion? Will Darcy end up in a locked conservatory with Caroline (locked in by Elizabeth) and a murderous candlestick (I know — wrong game)? So many questions — so much time until next week!

    • Sounds like you should write your own book, Jan. You have so many ideas. 🙂 Not sure if next week’s post will answer any of your questions, but it will be a start.

  7. What a web Elizabeth is weaving! When Jane does arrive and Mr. Collins I wonder if Mrs. Bennet will be pushing those two together and then what happens when Bingley realizes Jane is his perfect match. We know how this will end but the mixup is interesting. Thanks for this chapter.

  8. What an unique story, never read anything remotely similar.
    Anticipating Bingley’s introduction to Jane, maybe that can help Lizzy out of the quagmire she is in 😉

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