Last excerpt from my new book! — 46 Comments

  1. Holy cow, I don’t know where to begin…I’m still goggling at this plot! Ohhhh, I can’t wait to see the rest of this story!
    It’s not often that I’m at a loss for words, so I may just need to come back and comment again later.
    Just wow, Abigail. Wow!

  2. I love it, you’ve done a great job, Abigail! 😀
    Now I’m happily waiting to read about the adventures of two courageous young ladies, cuiously wondering, when and where Darcy will join them again and how Bingley will care for Jane, what will happen to Longbourn in Lizzy’s absence, and, and, and…
    Thank you for another great story to make our hearts full 🙂

  3. Wow!! Love the twist!!! No need for a bomb shelter from me just pleas to please finish as quickly as possible so we aren’t left in suspense for long!! Can’t wait to read the finished story!

  4. Best chapter so far. I have a feeling Wickham is not so easily killed off. He managed to survive quite nicely in P & P so I have no doubt he will figure out a way to weather the storm, again.

  5. Very exciting!!!!! Ah … when did you say that this book is going to be published??? I can hardly wait to read it straight through. Great little tale! Jen Red

  6. Oh my goodness, this is soooo goood! I love it! Can’t wait for the rest to be available–when do you think you will be publishing???? Arg!

  7. Nice twist. Would love to read more — if you are looking for a final proofreader, let me know. 🙂 Have you decided on a title so we know what to watch for when you publish this?

  8. Just adding my “wow” comments to the list, what a great plot twist and well done to the two readers who guessed it. Now, when are you hoping to publish this?

  9. I really like the idea of a Jane Bennett and Princess Charlotte friendship, who could not help but love Jane? I am excited to see where Elizabeth and “Georgiana” escape to, maybe use the contact in Newcastle to both cross the border? How do we leave Longbourn with so much unresolved, or rather, how do we end up back at Longbourn for resolution? Please publish soon!

  10. OH! MY!! GOD!!!! Okay. I’m hooked. So when will the complete book be published? You can’t keep us all hanging like this!! It’s just too cruel of you!!

  11. Holy WOW! Talk about a plot twist. Write, write, write; and then, publish, publish, publish. PLEASE HURRY. You have your readers hooked and hanging. Wickham dead, could be because he deserved it. I know you’ll get ODB off so that he can reunite with DOG and become ODC.

  12. Oh my goodness!!!!! You are a cruel, deceitful woman to leave us like this! I must beg you on bended knee to immediately stop what you are doing, forego eating and drinking, and finish this book forthwith. Well, I guess you can ‘refresh’ yourself as needed!

  13. Fabulous as always, Abigail! And so very unique. Make sure to keep us up-to-date as to when we can get our hands on the finished book.

  14. Oh. My. Giddy. Aunt!!! Didn’t see that coming at all. So, Abigail, if you’re not writing right now, then get to it! We NEED to know how it all works out asap.

    My lips and fingers are sealed as to the plot twist, though hubby wanted to know why I suddenly exclaimed OMG!

  15. Wow!!! I cannot wait to read the rest of this!! Do you have a publication date yet?

    This whole “alternate universe” is so fresh and works incredibly well within the confines of a P&P variation. I absolutely LOVE it!! 😀

    Thank you sooooo much for sharing this amazing story with us, Abigail!! You are so incredibly talented, and it is a joy to read your work!!

    Susanne 🙂

  16. It is nice to know that my hunch was right (thanks for personal note). I can hardly wait for the next chapter because the different directions that are possible. Will it be about Darcy, the start of the journey of Lizzie and the princess (will the “fox” give chase, more info about the rebels and their big plans or a nice interlude with Bingley and Jane to show that is still room for hope among all the worries of the world.

    So I yoin the rest and hope that you are writing fast, very very fast.

  17. WOW!!! So thrilled that I got to read all 6 chapters at once– and can not wait for the book… this is going to be a great variation!!!

  18. Abigail, any chance of a Feb 1 update on where you are on this novel?

    Alpha firmed up?
    Drug off on a plot bunny-trail type delay?
    Checking historical consistencies?
    Estimated number of chapters?
    Angst adjustment edits?
    Estimate on beta status?
    The epilogue will be how many years in the future?

    We readers love to have our share of the conversation!!!
    Happy writing!

  19. Oh my, this is amazing!! My mind is reeling! Where will they go? Who will help them? What will happen to Jane? And Darcy? And Wickham, is he really dead? Please, please don’t keep us in suspense too long and thanks so much for sharing what you have!!

  20. I will have to add another WOW here… verteld excited about where this story is going! Can’t wait to read the whole book… Can you tell is when it is published??

  21. I knew it had something to do with the princess! Ok, I didn’r know. But I thought about it. Haha I read all the chapters in one go and I have no idea how this is all going to turn out well but I am definitely down for the ride! Wow. I’d been thinking that despite everything, I dont know I could leave my family behind but for something like this you’d have to!

  22. I don’t know how I missed this chapter before, but now that I caught up – wow, wow. An explosion indeed. Is Wickham really dead? Poor Darcy, he has been shaken out of his composure by the relationship and confrontation with Elizabeth, or he would not have made mistakes – I can’t really call his action regarding Wickham a mistake (he did the morally right thing) although it might not have been the most professional “secret agent” response to the situation, as it endangered his main goal (to keep Georgiana safe). But to delay in leaving was probably a genuine mistake. How did he get accused of the murder so quickly though?
    I’m so glad to have seen at least their passionate parting kiss. I look forward to Elizabeth taking charge!

    WHEN is the book to be published? I can’t wait to see it!

    • Ditto all of the above. I started reading this when you first posted the first chapter. I lost track of it through the holidays and appealed to my author friends and readers where I might find it. Please don’t drop this story. It is so intriguing. Please keep your fans notified as to when we may see the publication of this fine story. I mean really it is so fresh and intense. I am one thristing fan waiting for the rest.

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