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Ellie and Brandon Part II — 12 Comments

  1. Ohhh that is what I term as a meet cute! I could totally see this happening!!! It sure feels like Ellie is out on her first date with how nervous she is but it’s so sweet!
    Please do continue this!

    • Thanks! My plan is to stop there, but I do have to wonder, what would Marianne think when she found out? Would her relationship with Willoughby work out? (Probably not). When she came back, would Brandon be conflicted and Ellie nervous/jealous? There are so many places this could go!

  2. I agree lovely if you could see a way to continue this somehow for a second date- a walk in the country or a drive to the seaside or a visit to Spain or one of the other countries Ellie mentions

  3. Love it! I think it needs one more scene. No Marianne, no input by anyone else, just a good night kiss at the door and the fireworks. Or not at the door…but you get my point. The contact that says yeah, that’s chemistry. Great piece!

  4. I loved these little snippets. So many possibilities, think these two belong togethor (not a big Marianne fan in any version) and would love to read more.

  5. Thank you–this “date” ended up being wonderful!! 😀 They’re so sweet together. Personally, I always thought that Elinor and Brandon were better suited than she with flippity-floppity Edward or Brandon with butterfly-ish Marianne.

    But that’s just me. 😉

    I loved [i]Sway[/i], btw–such a great book!!

    Thanks again!

    Warmly,
    Susanne 🙂

  6. Just catching up with the second part of this mashup and I love it! Please do write some more, even if you don’t turn it into a flull blown work. Another chapter or two (or three or four) would be lovely. The way you described the awkwardness between them is so sweet. Both were obviously trying NOT to think of it as a date, when both knew it was exactly what they wanted.

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