Dear Austen Friends,
It’s been over two years since I released a new novel…but I’m absolutely thrilled to share this Austen-inspired Christmas romance with you all! I’ve wanted to write a story with a modern Emma & Knightley for ages—there’s just something deliciously fun about an independent woman who has almost everything, except for the boy next door…a boy she doesn’t initially realize is her soul mate. 🙂 This year, I finally had a chance to script my version of their love story, set in the Midwestern winter (which I know all too well!), and featuring a cast of characters from a new small town that I loved getting to create, Crystal Corners, MN.
Here’s a little bit about the book:
THE KNIGHT BEFORE CHRISTMAS is a light, sweet contemporary holiday romance that can be enjoyed by readers of all ages.
When successful building contractor Austin Knightley returns to his hometown of Crystal Corners, Minnesota, after a decade away, he vows to avoid pampered and popular types like his old high-school crush Emma Westwood—the town’s biggest queen bee and self-appointed matchmaker—only to get swept into a community Christmas project she’s now organizing.
With nods to Jane Austen’s classic novel EMMA, this modern heroine may be a little “clueless” in the Midwest, but she’s got gifts to share and plenty to learn from the boy next door, who’s all grown up and handsomer than ever. Even when a snowstorm threatens to derail her plans, she’s determined to figure out how to set things right and save THE KNIGHT BEFORE CHRISTMAS.
The excerpt below is an exclusive—I’m only sharing it here (!!)—and it gives a little background into Emma & Austin’s relationship when they were teens. Hope you enjoy it. 😛
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Emma knew she should be tired after the industriousness of her day. That tonight would be the perfect time to just kick back, relax, eat the delicious dinner Jennings had prepared, and watch a romantic Christmas movie on TV.
And she did.
But even after the final ending credits rolled on the screen, she still felt restless.
In an attempt to combat this, she answered a handful of business emails, walked for twenty minutes on the treadmill downstairs, and enjoyed a cup of hot tea on the sofa.
However, much to her annoyance, nothing seemed to keep her mind from spinning in circles and remembering tidbits of her grade school years that she hadn’t thought about in ages. She blamed seeing Austin Knightley again for activating these old memories.
She found herself wandering into the playroom that housed her childhood library—all of those beautiful books on knights and castles and pretty princesses. The gorgeous illustrations made her sigh every time.
It made her think about something that had happened when she was in eighth grade and he, a whole year older, was a freshman in high school. They were on the bus, heading home from a long day of school, but Emma always enjoyed the bus rides. Unless she had an afterschool club to attend or a get-together planned with her girlfriends, her social life came to a screeching halt once she walked into the house. Her parents were loving but busy. They were adults, not peers, after all, and they had limited time for lengthy pre-teen discussions about cute boys or popular music or whatever movie actor had recently caught her fancy. So Emma made the most of her ride home with friends.
Austin, by contrast, never seemed to like being on the bus. He looked trapped in those vinyl seats, often pressed against the window with one of his garrulous brothers typically sitting beside him and jabbering to someone across the aisle.
There was this one day, though, when no one was sitting next to him. She’d already been seated when he walked onto the bus (junior high kids were picked up before the high schoolers) and she noticed he’d looked at her when he strode past, choosing to sit in the row directly behind her and putting his backpack next to him so he could have the whole seat to himself. It had been a dress-up day for the eighth graders, and she was wearing one of her prettiest princess gowns. Yards of royal purple—she loved it! Austin was in his usual T-shirt and jeans, but his gaze lingered on her for a long moment before he chose his seat. That he decided to sit so close was encouraging to her.
He was holding something in his hands that snagged her interest, and Emma hoped that, maybe, if she asked him about the object, it might draw him out. He looked so sweet when he smiled, but that didn’t happen frequently on the way to or from school.
So, she turned in her seat and grinned at him. He looked back at her, not exactly grinning but at least not scowling.
“What did you make?” she asked.
He considered her question for a moment before exhaling and holding up a wooden plaque with very smooth edges. It was carved with the words “The Knightley Family.” He cleared his throat. “Woodworking class project.”
“Oh, that’s really lovely!” she exclaimed and very politely asked him some interested follow-up questions about it, just like her parents had taught her to do.
His responses kept getting even shorter and more curt.
After she asked, “So, do all high schoolers take that class?” He merely shook his head and stared out the window.
She tried to be even more charming and amiable. “I think it would be fascinating to learn about—”
“It’s an elective, Emma,” he said brusquely. “Anyone can choose to take it or not. Even you.” He set the plaque down next to his backpack and pulled out a thick novel. “Thanks for your interest, but if you don’t mind, I’m gonna read now.”
So she shrugged, turned back around in her seat, and started chatting with Ben Danielson in the row ahead of her, who was also in high school but not nearly so condescending about it.
It was strange that after all these years, it still rankled that she couldn’t win Austin over…
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So, what did you think?? How long do you expect it’ll take Emma for to win over her man?
The book is live on all digital platforms:
Amazon (US) – Amazon (UK) – Amazon (CA)
Barnes & Noble – iBooks – Kobo
It’s available both digitally and in paperback! So, if you’re looking for bookish Christmas gifts… 🙂
Have a wonderful weekend, all! And for everybody celebrating Thanksgiving in the U.S. next week, I hope you have an especially happy one! I’m so grateful for each of you. Thanks for being part of our Austen community. 🙂 xox
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I want to know why Austin wasn’t more friendly when Emma was really trying?
I had a crush on my brother’s friend. I was in first year at Grammar School and he was in the fifth! I did see him again years later but we were both married by then 🤔.
I have this book on my list so will read it eventually. Thanks for sharing this excerpt.
Author
Glynis, thank you so much!! I really hope you’ll enjoy the story when you read it 🙂 .
And you ask a great question! From Austin’s point of view, it was hard for him to imagine when he was a teen that someone as chatty as Emma was being sincere in her interest. I’d also say he was afraid that anything personal he might tell her would be fodder for gossip. So, the more she asked him, the more closed off and careful he became…
I feel for Austin. He probably just thought she was being polite (and nosy) instead of really interested.
I remember thinking a couple boys in my grade school classes were cute, but I think I only ran into one of them about 6 years after high school. Amazing how time and distance can change our perception of someone.
Author
Linda, Yes!! That’s what I was thinking about with Austin as I wrote that scene! 🙂 🙂
And I completely agree — re: how time/distance can change our perceptions of people we knew when we were younger. I ran into a guy I’d had a crush on just a few years after high school ended, too, and we both had grown up a lot in those few years…but not in a way that made me wish we were together…
Thanks so much for stopping by!
I already have this book and it is a delightful holiday read. Love it!
Author
Jen, you are such a sweetheart!! <3 Thanks so much for you kind comments here and on Facebook & Twitter, too!! You've made my day so often 🙂 . *Hugs!!* xo
I’m wondering why Austin was so short with Emma when he seemed to show an interest in her. And when I was just starting high school there was an older neighbour, who attended a different school, that I had a crush on. Sadly I’ve never encountered him as an adult but it didn’t help that I moved across the country a few years later.
Author
Lynn, in regards to Austin, as a high schooler, he just wasn’t able to read Emma the way he (eventually) is able to as an adult. He’s attracted to her definitely (!!), but he can’t imagine the interest is truly mutual…
As for your comment about the guy you’d had a crush on, moves make everything more difficult, don’t they??! The boy I liked most when I was in grade school moved across the country as well, and I’ve always wondered what happened to him & where he is now. Your old neighbor is probably wondering that about you 😉 . xo
Thank you for the excerpt. I am very curious to see how they will react when they meet again. Will Emma still hold grudges and will Austin actually see Emma as someone to get to know rather than an 8th grader? Thank you for the giveaway and joyous holidays.
Author
Thanks for your lovely comments, Eva!!
It was great fun to write the scenes when Emma and Austin first begin running into each other in town as adults, LOL. They’ve both grown up a lot 🙂 . Hope you have a wonderful weekend! xo
I really enjoyed the excerpt, Marilyn. Obviously, Austin is annoyed by the teen Emma (or secretly likes her but is in denial), but I assume that their relationship will change considerably after his return to their hometown? That is, *if* Emma has matured quite a bit.
Emma is my least favorite of Austen’s novels; I can only handle Clueless and that’s it. None of the film adaptations and definitely not the novel–ugh, I just can’t stand her!! Really, really can’t stand her. But this contemporary romance may be just the “gateway drug” I need to actually form a bit of a positive reaction to Emma.
Thanks for sharing this excerpt with us!! 😀
Warmly,
Susanne 🙂
Author
Ahhh, Susanne, your comments made me smile hugely!! 😀 I’m so glad you enjoyed the excerpt & I absolutely love the idea of this story possibly being an Emma “gateway drug,” LOL!!!
For what it’s worth, it took me a really long time to start liking the original Emma as a character. I was SO mad at her, particularly because of her meanness toward poor Miss Bates, that I couldn’t get over it for…well, years 😉 . Seeing “Clueless” made me reevaluate the facets of the character and, later, I found myself wondering why Jane Austen would have written someone like Emma Woodhouse in the first place… Why would JA want to make a young woman like *her* the heroine???!
I have no definitive answers, of course, but my working theory is that, perhaps, on some level, JA may have feared that if she were in Emma’s exalted position in society, she might have been inclined to behave similarly. That JA’s confidence in the strength of her mind and recognition of her own (not always charitable) witticisms — coupled with the money, independence, and social rank that someone like Emma had — would bring out her bad side, despite her best intentions. So, maybe, writing Emma was Jane’s way of trying to work through that dichotomy within herself… But who knows, right?!
In any case, if you read my story at some point, I hope you’ll enjoy *this* Emma and her Knightley. I’d love to know you opinion on it!!
A little over a year ago, I attended the 50th reunion (yikes!) of my class which had been together from Grades 1-9. Imagine my surprise when I found myself engaged in a lively conversation with five of my former classmates (all male) each of whom I had had a crush on at one time or another! Best conversation we’d ever had, BTW,
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Regina, that is *so* cool!!! 😀 How wonderful to have had the opportunity to meet up with so many childhood classmates and get to see them and speak with them again, but as adults. That must have been a REALLY fun conversation! 😀
Thank you for posting a delightful excerpt. I definitely see hints of Emma in this refreshing updated version. I had to smile over such an uninhibited modern 8th grader unabashedly approaching this sullen upper classman while she is garishly dressed like a princess. Clever use of Austen’s name paired with Knightley, making for a very trendy but classic duo.
Author
Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments, Diane!!
I’m so pleased you enjoyed the excerpt and loved reading your impressions of the scene. xo And you’re so right about Emma being an uninhibited 8th grader & Austin being a sullen one in this version! 🙂
Enjoyed the excerpt. I’m sure she’ll win him over.
Author
Darcy – thank you!!
And yes…Emma is a persistent young lady, LOL. She’ll get him to like her 😀 .
This excerpt had me interested, Emma is on the lower end of the novels that I enjoy. I have always viewed her as a “blonde”, good intentions, but still only caring about herself, despite thinking she is doing something good for another.
Knightly has always been the best part of the novel for me. How he patiently waits for the lightbulb of realization to turn on for Emma, and not being afraid of calling her out when she is out of line.
I’m interested to see how you ah that in the modern setting.
Author
Thanks so much for your comments, Sarah!
I’ve always been a fan of JA’s Knightley, too. He’s truly a gentleman.
And thank you for your interest in the story!! I hope it’s one you’ll enjoy 🙂 .
Emma is one of my favorite Austen novels. Never enough retellings, so I’m always excited to find one.
Look forward to reading this soon.
Author
Oh, Stephanie, thank you so much!! I really hope you’ll like it when you read it 🙂 .
And I agree with there not being many Emma retellings out there. Perhaps, with the new movie adaptation coming out soon, there will be more ahead…
I like to believe that Austin was beginning to have feelings for Emma at that time but he can’t understand it like how teenagers in his age do. So one of the typical response was to lash out at her because he doesn’t know how to respond. Or he may have wanted to be alone with his thoughts but Emma kept bugging him. Can’t wait to see their interactions as adults seeing each other after a long time.
Anyway it’s a amazing cover, Marilyn. Just like your other covers are for Austen-inspired novels. Congrats too!
Author
Lúthien!! It’s always wonderful to see you here 🙂 . Many thanks for stopping by and for sharing your thoughtful comments. I’m thrilled you like the cover (!!) and truly appreciate your kind congrats! xoxo
I loved Jane Austen’s Emma, and I enjoyed this excerpt featuring her namesake.
Melinda, thank you so much! I’m thrilled you enjoyed the excerpt 😊. Thanks for taking the time to stop by!
Hey! Marilyn
Memories from when we were younger can be full of mixed feelings. How we acted as teens can be remembered as awkward and/or embarrassing. But, first love can remain smoldering even if we don’t know it is still there. All that is needed is that one positive spark to rekindle what is hopefully shared.
Pam, you expressed this sentiment so beautifully! ❤ Thank you for taking the time to visit me here & to share such a thoughtful comment! 😊
I am SO looking forward to a new version of Emma! It is my very favorite book in the Austen collection. So much so I named my middle Daughter Emma after it! I love the spunk you put into Emma and the way you show her nervousness in your writing. I also love that Knightly is slow to recognize his admiration for Emma in this version vs the book Emma where he grows up loving her and admiring her and guiding her morals or trying to, lol. Thank you for making this happen! I cannot wait to read it!
Thank you so much, Lora!!
I’m delighted you liked the excerpt and that you’re such a fan of JA’s Emma, too!!
I truly hope you’ll enjoy this novel 🙂 . xo
One of my first crush in elementary i ended up running into at staff meeting at new school i was working at last year!!
Oh, my gosh, Patricia!! How cool is that??!! 🙂 🙂
I hope you enjoyed getting to catch up with him after these years apart!
xox
I love Emma and her fanciful imagination and the imaginative words she uses! She’s a fun character with an endless layers of interpretations which includes that of an Imaginist, a wit, and a matchmaker.
Vonnie, I love your description of Emma! And I agree, she’s a fanciful & imaginative character…so much fun to modernize! 😀
Thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts!!
Love this wonderful Christmas story! I’ve read it and loved. Austin and Emma really bring out the best in each other once they take the time to know each other. Highly recommended ❤️
Author
Vee, you are so kind to take the time to visit me here & leave such a lovely comment!!
Thank you 🙂 . I’m thrilled you enjoyed Emma & Austin’s story!! xoxox
It is always a pleasure to read your books Marilyn. They are among my favourites and so entertaining x
❤️ ❤️ ❤️ Thank you, Vee!! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Wonderful excerpt. Not many Emma variations out there. Looking forward to reading!! Congratulations
Thank you so much, Becky!! I’m so pleased you enjoyed the excerpt ❤. And I appreciate the kind congrats, too! XO
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Thank you all so much for taking the time to comment on this post & make my book celebration such fun!! 😀
I just did the random drawing for the name of the winner and it’s…Stephanie Carrico!!!
Congrats, Stephanie! You win the 8 GB flash drive with the PDF copy of THE KNIGHT BEFORE CHRISTMAS!!
I’ll send you a private message on Facebook to get your mailing address 😉 .
And HAPPY DECEMBER, everyone!! Wishing each of you a wonderful month & a beautiful holiday season! xoxo