Hello again! Soo, I’ve been hiding under the bonnet for a while, caught in a tug-of-war between two stories that want to be written: one short and happy, with pretty much all of Elizabeth’s reasons to dislike Mr Darcy cleared at the drop of a hat – and a longer one, where our favourite couple’s relationship see-saws between sweetness and angst.
Guess which of them grabbed me and wouldn’t let go. Yep, of course it’s the angst-fest! Why am I even asking? It’s an addiction. But if you prefer sweet stories to angsty ones (Hi, Glynis! 😀 ), I’ll just say that I’m not giving up on the short and happy WIP. It’s next in line and it’s coming! Just not in 2020.
Speaking of, thank goodness we’re coming up to the festive season, and about time too! Now, this post isn’t seasonal at all. (If anything, it’s summery rather than Christmassy). I just thought it would be a nice time to write a post about favourite things and wish-lists.
I have just one crazy thing on mine, but it’s completely nutty: one day – not anytime soon, this is not a Christmas wish, just a wish for one fine day – I’d absolutely love to go for an outing on a sailing ship. I don’t mean a yacht, even if that might be great fun too. What I was thinking of was a proper, ‘tall ship’ kind of thing. The sort of ship they sail on in Horatio Hornblower or Master and Commander. Lots of flapping sails, lots of rigging, the works & Yo Ho Ho! (But not the bottle of rum, that’s OK, I’m fine without it).
Yep, I know, it’s a nutty idea (don’t judge me! 😛 ). For one thing, I might get seasick and hate every second of it. The other thing is that I’m not sure how to go about organising something like that. Some years ago, it was possible to sail on the Earl of Pembroke from Charlestown in Cornwall, but (pardon the pun) that ship has well and truly sailed. The Earl of Pembroke is no longer docking in Charlestown. Last I heard, it was on its way to Rio. So I guess I’ll just have to keep looking.
How about you? Do you have crazy things on your wish-list?
And if you do, do you feel like sharing any of them?
I’d love to share a scene from one of my WIPs, but it’s very early days and anyway there’s no sailing in either one, just some speedy carriage travel. (Thanks so much for the tips, Hazel, if you’re reading this!).
So I hope you won’t mind if I’ll finish off with a romantic sailing scene from an oldie – THE JOURNEY HOME TO PEMBERLEY.
I wasn’t picturing anything awfully big there, by the way. Just to give you an idea, that craft was more like one that’s nowhere near Dorset or Cornwall: the privateer Lynx, built in Rockport, Maine as a faithful replica of the 1812 original. (This is what it looks like, and it’s gorgeous!)
So, if you fancy a spot of romantic sailing with Elizabeth and Mr Darcy, here it comes:
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THE JOURNEY HOME TO PEMBERLEY
(Excerpt from Chapter 14)
The day was bright, the waves friendly, but the double-masted schooner was not quite as big a vessel as Elizabeth had imagined it would be. Not that it made her feel unsafe. But the small deck enforced proximity – and, contrary to her expectations, Mr Darcy had chosen to be of the party.
The sails flapped and swelled, catching the wind, as she sat with Meg, Bella and their gregarious friends on the roof of the elevated hatchway that stood amidships, much like a raised dais covered with thick canvas. Beside her, the young ladies chatted, only to break off and squeal in feigned or real panic whenever the sails flapped too loudly or the vessel swayed too much. Steady on their feet and more accustomed to the trials and the delights of sailing, James Monkford and the Lyndhurst brothers took turns in offering words of reassurance in response or, at other times, they merely laughed at the girls’ missish displays, just as fancy took them.
Mr Darcy said nothing as he stood apart by the parapet, staring into the distance, hat in hand, his hair swept back by the wind.
Elizabeth stole another furtive glance at him. Was that how he had stood staring blankly into space as he had sailed to the far reaches of the Mediterranean in search of oblivion? What was on his mind just now? Was he as forcibly reminded as she of that distant morning on Winander Mere, when they sat together – ever so close, ever so happy?
Tears welled in her eyes and rolled down her cheeks, and Elizabeth shifted in her seat in an effort to conceal them – although, if Meg or Bella asked, she could easily blame the tears on the wind. But when Darcy suddenly turned towards her to look her fully in the face, she knew he would not believe the feeble excuse for a single moment.
She scrambled to her feet, desperate for privacy. But there was nowhere to go – nowhere to hide, cover her face and let the tears run freely. Through her own misguided choice, there she was, confined aboard this ship. Nowhere to run. All she could do was retreat to the bow, where she might be allowed a few moments to herself and a meagre opportunity to regain her composure. But as she tried to dash past him and make her escape, the ship lurched and swayed more forcefully than ever – lurched so violently that she was flung sideways into the parapet.
A loud chorus of cries erupted from the others, in genuine alarm this time, but Elizabeth barely heard them as Darcy’s arm shot out to catch her. She gasped in shock – not at the belated terror of having so narrowly avoided the danger of going overboard, but at the glorious and devastating closeness. Clasped to his chest, her eyes lost in his. The dark gaze enveloped her, burned into her, scorching the edges of the world, and scorching heat instantly flared from every point of contact with his hard chest – hard as a rock, and just as steady. The only steady certainty in a swaying world.
His firm hold around her waist grew even tighter – a clasp so fierce that she could hardly breathe. Yet this was not the reason why her lungs struggled to do their office. If anything, the aching constriction in her chest only grew worse when he slackened his grip and slowly released her. The fiery embrace gave way to the civil and ever so bland support of his arm under hers, and he wordlessly guided her back to the seat she had so imprudently quitted.
Meg shuffled sideways to make room for her and Bella entreated, “Goodness, Lizzy, do sit! You are shaking like a leaf. Sailing can be a very dangerous business,” she added softly, seeking to make light of the mishap that might have had such frightful consequences. She protectively wrapped her arm around Elizabeth’s shoulders and looked up at her friend’s preserver. “Thank you, Darcy! And thank goodness for your fast reflexes,” Bella said fervently and shuddered. “Heavens, I dread to think what might have happened!”
Visibly shaken, Meg nodded in agreement and reached for Elizabeth’s hand as if to keep her safely seated, while the others eagerly spoke up to offer sympathy and comfort. The babble of anxious voices nearly drowned out Elizabeth’s when she finally regained the power of speech in sufficient measure as to add her own whispered thanks for Darcy’s timely intervention.
“Think nothing of it. I am glad I could be of service,” he evenly replied, then left her to her friends’ affectionate attentions and retreated to the spot Elizabeth still coveted – at the ship’s bow, away from them all.
(© 2019 Joana Starnes)
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Thanks for reading, and I’ll leave you now with a couple of dashing and absolutely adorable gentlemen and their playful music-practice (in the priceless final scene in Master and Commander).
All the best and have a lovely festive season! And calm seas, no matter if you’re actually going sailing or not.
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I love that sailing scene and especially Darcy’s subsequent declaration during the confrontation in his book room during which he declares he nearly kissed her while on that ship in front of God and everybody!
**swoon**
I’ve never sailed, but we took a field trip in elementary school to Columbus, Ohio to see a replica of Christopher Columbus’s tall ship the Santa Maria. I thought it was cool though much smaller than I imagined! I’m sure I’d be deathly sea sick if I ever tried to sail. I suppose that what Dramamine is for!
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I’m so glad you loved that scene, Paige! LOL Maybe he should’ve kissed her on that ship. I did toy with that thought, but then came the idea of Chapter 16 and I ran with it 😀
That must have been quite something, the replica of Christopher Columbus’s ship.
Oh yes, thank goodness for Dramamine!! Take care and thanks for reading!
There are places here in the USA where you can take a short 2-3 hour cruise on a reproduction ship.
My wish list is to visit the UK.
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Sounds fabulous! That’s what I’m looking for, a 2-3 hr trip. I don’t think I could last longer, but who knows?
Thanks for stopping by to read the post, Denise, and I hope you visit the UK soon!
When I read about “favorite things” the song instantly came to mind. I read the remaining post with the tune playing inside my head. 😉
Glad to see you are writing and even happier to see it’s the angst story first! (wicked emoticon needed.)
You are an adventurer at heart! Master and Commander, huh?
I remember that scene in tJHtP and especially her “Was that how he had stood staring blankly into space as he had sailed to the far reaches of the Mediterranean in search of oblivion?”
I remember you had mentioned it in a previous passage but Mr Darcy’s journey in reality was a very dangerous one as Mediterranean at the time was filled with pirates!
Thank you for the post, the scene but also the music! 🙂
Have fun, everyone, and stay safe!
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LOL Alexandra, same here (about the ‘favourite things’ song). I wrote most of the post with it going on and on in my head 😀
Oh, yes, it had to be the angsty story first. I should’ve cut on the soul-searchng and accepted that as a given from Day 1 😉
Master and Commander indeed! I love that film!! I think I watched that almost as often as P&P. Not an ounce of romance in it (in fact I think the only scene featuring a lady is 4-5 secs long) but it’s still making me swoon. I love Paul Bettany as Dr. Stephen Maturin, and his friendship with the captain is so beautiful!
Gosh, yes, I read a book about the pirates in the Mediterranean! I think that one was set in Victorian times, but they must have swarmed all over the place in Georgian times too. Throw in some French ships and Mr Darcy could have had a party (not!).
Thank you for reading this rambling post, and stay safe too!
The Journey Home to Pemberley has so many beautiful scenes, and I love the sailing scene you shared. I am glad you are writing the angsty book first (although of course I’ll read the other one, too). You do them well.
I hope you get your chance to sail on a tall ship. I’d just like to walk on one and explore its parts. When I was about 15, my uncle took my dad and me on a 3-day sailing trip in the Pacific near his home in British Columbia, but it was a much smaller sailboat. I was fascinated by the tiny home aboard ship.
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I’m so glad you loved that scene and other ones in the book, T C!
Yep, me and an angsty book – like a moth to a flame. I love ’em! Love to write ’em, love to read ’em. Great to hear you enjoy them too!
That trip with your dad and your uncle sounds so dreamy! Thanks for your lovely wish and for stopping by to read this!
You might enjoy this site: https://sailtraininginternational.org/find-your-adventure/ which I found where they have information about boat adventures, including tall ships.
I always enjoy your stories and the tension in that particular scene is wonderful!
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That’s so kind, Madenna! Huge thanks for the link and for letting me know you enjoyed my stories. So happy to hear that!
Take care and all the best!
Oh Joana! Putting off our story again? Hmmmm! Not only that but replacing it with an angsty one? It’s lucky you’re still promising to finish the sweet one or I might just have to fall out with you! 😉
It’s almost 12 months since we toured Christmas Pemberley, goodness knows when we’ll be able to meet there again!
My impossible Christmas wish would be to see my children and their families. Alas it’s going to be at least 2022 before my daughter could even think of coming from Australia! My son is nearer but his twins are only 4 and don’t understand social distancing, they’re in school so my son is wary of passing anything to me, hopefully one of these vaccines may help.
I hope you are able to have your family close for Christmas. Take care and stay safe! (And keep writing!)
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I know, Glynis… Bad me! Badly done 🙁
But-but-but!!! There’s a ‘but’ in there somewhere: I promise that my angsty one is a different kind of angsty, with lots & LOTS of sweetness in between, so please don’t fall out with me yet 😉
It’s been so long since our trip to Pemberley. I can’t believe it’s coming up to a year. In normal times I would’ve squeezed at least one spring or summer trip. Fingers crossed for next year and for an end to all this madness.
So very sorry you can’t see your loved ones! I hope things settle down and that you’ll be able to see them soon. Thinking of you & wishing we could meet again. Take care, dear Glynis, and stay safe!
Every 2-3 years we have a tall ships festival in several of the ports on Lake Michigan. They have different ships that you can go out for rides on some just for an hour some for the whole afternoon or evening. Also you can go onboard and walk around the ships and talk to the students and sailors about them. Some of them have actually helped build the ships or restore them and they sail them across the Atlantic too not just in the great lakes. It is very interesting to here their stories and experiences. I hope to go out on cruise next time they visit!
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This sounds absolutely magical, Jennifer! I’d love to be able to take part in such a marvellous event!
I hope you get to go out on cruise next time they visit! Have a wonderful time!
I look forward to your new books, even though one might be angsty (I’m with Glynis 😉). I’ve had a sail on the Bluenose II out of Halifax, Nova Scotia about four decades ago. It was a lovely experience. I hope you have a chance to sail on a tall ship. It’s a real treat to see them all in port when they do world tours. https://bluenose.novascotia.ca/
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Hi, Marie! I’ve just told Glynis a few secs ago, in reply to her comment, that I’m planning to behave and have lots & lots of sweet moments in my next book, in between the angsty ones, so with any luck it might be the best of both worlds (kind of 😉 ). Thanks so much for saying you’ll give it a chance, even if you prefer less angst.
Thanks for sharing the Bluenose link. That trip must have been such a treat! Those ships do look wonderful in port, don’t they? That’s why I’m so keen to see them in action too 😉
All the best and thanks for reading!
Lovely post! and photos….
Although what actually did catch my attention was the fact that the non-angsty story wouldn’t come in 2020! I have to presume that the angsty one would 😉
Loved that scene… mmmm
But for few seconds I thought you would mean another, my absolutely favourite “on boat scene”: the one in Falmouth Connection…. A swoonworthy one….
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LOL Mihaela, I was worried that I didn’t word that right. Sadly not, the angsty book won’t be published this year either. It’s a long one, definitely longer than my last, so goodness knows how quickly I’ll be able to finish it. I’m sort of halfway into it, but I’ll try to cut to the chase 😀
I’m so glad you loved the Journey Home scene and that your absolute favourite was the one in The Falmouth Connection. I had a great time writing it, to be honest (not least because writing the skipper’s lines reminded me of going to a pub in Cornwall and chatting with the lovely landlord, who sounded almost like that). And also I thought it might be nice if our favourite couple (who always do the right thing) at least pretend for once to have a runaway marriage 😉
In the same vein as your wish, I would like to ride on an elephant one day, preferably in a howdah.
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I hope we both get our wish, Ginna! Best of luck and thanks for reading.
Hello, Joana… heavy sigh. I love that scene with D&E. Whew! I actually caught myself holding my breath. Whew! The music was very appropriate way to end this delightful post. Now… what would I love to do? Why visit you in England, of course. Then I would like to visit and see all the Jane Austen sites that you would suggest. Yes, that would be a trip to wish for. Blessings for the coming holidays. We are celebrating Thanksgiving tomorrow and I am thankful for all the wonderful friends I’ve met since I started reading JAFF stories. Have a great rest of the week. Stay safe and healthy during these trying times.
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I’d LOVE that, Jeanne! I so hope you could visit me in England someday, and that we get to go to all our JA and P&P happy places together! Blessings to you too, my dear friend. I’m hugely thankful for you and all my JAFF friends, and for this wonderful world where we can meet and forget for a while about the messy world out there. I hope you had a peaceful and relaxing Thanksgiving, and wishing you and your loved ones a lovely Christmas. Take care and stay safe!
Everything about this post is lovely, Joana❤️ The Lynx is gorgeous and the ships inspiring to watch. I hope you get your wish to sail on one of those beauties someday soon. My wish is to visit the UK – to see and feel all things Austen.
I remember you were saying during JAFF in June that the angst muse was winning out for your next work. I’m glad, because after your torture of ODC, the swoons that follow are legendary! (16;)
I’ll look forward to both of your books, and the backside of 2021. Have a wonderful holiday! Best hopes for all to stay safe and well.
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Thanks so much, Deborah, I’m so glad you enjoyed the post. I hope you visit the UK soon and see everything you wish to see, and maybe we get the chance to meet face to face, have a cup of coffee and chat for a while about our favourite things.
Yes, the angst muse won, and I should have known it’d be a done deal 🙂 . I’m trying to keep the shorter story going too, but only when it flows, and when the other one isn’t screaming for attendion like a badly behaved toddler 😀
Have a lovely and relaxing holiday too, and all the best!
I remember sailing once and how you had to duck if/when the captain changed the direction of the main sail…I’m sure there is a proper name for it. Read and loved this book and so looking forward to your next two books. Give me angst any day but I’ll take whatever you throw at us. Take care…stay safe.
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Goodness, yes, the thing at the bottom of the sail, the one that swipes over the deck when the ship changes direction! No idea of terminology either (that was the best I could do 😀 ) but maybe one day I’ll get to learn the proper name for it. Or I’ll just google it, that’s bound to be quicker.
Ah, Sheila, that’s music to my ears (‘Give me angst any day’). I’ll do my best 😉
Take care, look after yourself and huge thanks for reading!
I’m trying to catch up to all the posts! Oh, love the Tall ships! Our son went three years in a row on three different Tall ships for a week each time, learning the ropes so to speak! He thoroughly enjoyed. I have been on the decks of several…went to Mystic, Connecticut and when they came to Toronto and Kingston. My in-laws had a sailboat, and I loved being out on it. The word you are looking for with Sheila is the boom. You definitely wouldn’t want to be hit by that!
So glad to hear you are working on not only one, but two novels! That is so exciting! Looking forward to both. As for the excerpt…yes, absolutely swoon-worthy and heartbreaking! Loved it!
Do continue to stay safe and healthy!
Forgot to mention what I would wish for: Go to back Scotland and also due a tour of Jane Austen’s sites and locations and see the HMS Victory!