Presenting: “It’s a Wonderful Life, Mr. Darcy”

I’m thrilled to present to you It’s a Wonderful Life, Mr. Darcy! As some of you know, I actually wrote it quite a while ago but have holding it back until we were a little closer to Christmas, since this new P&P story is told in a Christmas framework. Now it’s finally time to share it. Yippee!

From the title, you have already guessed that the basic premise is borrowed from the beloved movie (beloved my me, at least) It’s a Wonderful Life, where George Bailey, at a very low ebb in his life, is given the gift of seeing what the world would be like if he’d never been born. In this case, though, it’s Mr. Darcy who winds up in that situation. Here’s the official book blurb:

Imagine a world without Mr. Darcy. How would things have been different if he had never been born? In a moment of despair over Elizabeth’s rejection, the iconic hero of “Pride and Prejudice” wishes his life away. Now, on a tour with a surprising celestial guide, he must face up to the results. Instead of everybody being better off, as he had supposed, there have been unexpected consequences for his closest friends. Darcy realizes, too late, that his presence made a positive difference in the world, and that he really had a wonderful life. Is it all lost and gone forever?

 

This story is completely unlike anything else I’ve ever written (but then I like new writing challenges). For one thing, it’s not a novel! At 67 pages,  it’s either a long short story or a short novella.  And technically it’s fantasy, I guess – glimpses across time, ghostly visitation, parallel reality.  Or was it only a dream?

Here’s the way it begins, with Darcy himself telling the story:



It is Christmas evening – my first of many happy Christmases with Elizabeth, God willing – and we have dear friends gathered at Pemberley to share it with us. Georgiana is here, of course, and Colonel Fitzwilliam. Mr. Bingley and Jane have come, as well as the entire Gardiner family.

I glance at Elizabeth, who sits by my side, her hand tucked in mine. We exchange contented smiles, and I know I am the most fortunate of men.

It has been a full and satisfying day.

We woke to a blanket of white resting an inch or two thick on the ground – enough to delight everybody but not enough to create much inconvenience. So we were still able to safely reach Kympton to attend divine services on this holy day. Afterward, the Gardiner children played on the lawn, throwing snowballs and building what they could with the limited supply of the white stuff. Some of the adults braved the chilly air again as well, joining in the children’s play or just strolling about in the wintery scene, all of us bundled up in our warmest clothing.

Indoors, there have been games and conversation, along with good things to eat morning, noon, and night: hearty but simple fare for the most part, much of it prepared yesterday to lighten the load on the servants today. A few of them volunteered to remain on duty. But most – anybody with family in the area – have gone off for their own Christmas celebrations.

Now I can see through the drawing room windows that the sky is painted with more pink and orange hues than blues. The candles are lit, and the day is coming to a close. As I look about myself, at my comfortable home and the happy faces of my dear ones, I could wish to remain in this present moment forever.

And yet my thoughts refuse to do so. Without warning, the cheerful Christmas scene is now changed for something entirely different. Images from a much darker period suddenly appear, unbidden, before my mind’s eye. Familiar sensations, both frightening and exquisitely painful, clutch at my heart.

I resist the temptation to blink them away at once. Instead, I briefly allow the powerful recollections to wash over me again, as they so often have done since the event took place. It is good to remember, so that I never take Elizabeth and all my other blessings for granted. And so, for just a minute or two, I give myself over to reliving that wonderful, terrible time.

It happened eight months ago, in April, just after Elizabeth refused my first dismal proposal. That was a devastating blow indeed, and it must have in some manner brought on the strange episode that followed. I can conceive of no other explanation. This is the question which still lingers, however; was it real or only some kind of extraordinary dream? One could rightly call it a nightmare except for what I learnt by it. A painful event, once survived, may be counted a treasure if it proves to have been of tremendous value in the end.

The experience to which I refer certainly was – a valuable treasure, I mean. In truth, I count it a great gift, one I shall never forget. Christmas is a time of gift giving, is it not? Perhaps that is why the peculiar episode comes back to my mind again now. But if not a mere dream or even a nightmare, what shall I call it?

It was a visitation.



So there you have it, the prologue. Are you intrigued? I hope so! And you can continue the story right away by getting your very own Kindle copy for just $2.99. Then, the audiobook will be out soon too, with the incomparable Harry Frost narrating.

In case you’re wondering,  the parallels to the movie are actually very few beyond the basic premise. But I’m curious how many of you will recognize the nod to Zuzu’s petals that I tucked in. Let me know if you do!The Little Girl From "It's a Wonderful Life" Looks Incredible at 80 — Best Life

PS – I don’t have a formal blog tour planned for this one, but if anybody would like to host me for a guest post about it, just let me know!

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    • Glory on October 24, 2024 at 12:05 am
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    I can’t wait to hear Harry bring this story to life!!!

    1. Me too! Harry narrated “Fitzwilliam Darcy in His Own Words” for me and did a great job. So I was pleased to be able to get him for this project too. 🙂

    • Sabrina on October 24, 2024 at 12:28 am
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    I’m very intrigued by this premise – it sounds wonderful and will be placed right on top of my to be read pile! It only sounds much too short I’m afraid… 😉

    1. I’m delighted that you’re interested, Sabrina, and I apologize in advance if you find it too short. 🙂 However, it strikes me that it would be the perfect length to be adapted into a play or a movie! Wouldn’t that be exciting?

    • Audny on October 24, 2024 at 3:02 am
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    What a wonderful beginning of your story! I really loved it and I hope to read the rest soon! Thank you for sharing and writing this story!

    1. My pleasure, Audny! I hope you enjoy the rest just as much. 😀

        • Willett Amie on October 30, 2024 at 10:44 am
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        I’m sitting here in Florida, USA and happened upon your Story as told by “Darcy” himself. ☺️ All things P&P makes me smile.
        I’ve always wondered if anyone would take the Final Chapters of this Wonderful Story and give us a Visual of not only Lizzy & Darcy, but show us Mr. Bennet fishing, Lydia seeing that she totally made a mistake, Lady C finally coming around and on and on. Both families coming together as one during the Christmas 🎄 Season and showing us many other delicious tidbits we’ve used our imagine for.

        1. I’m at the other corner of the country: Washington State! Yay, I’m so glad you happened upon this story! I hope you will check out my other books too (several P&P, including “Fitzwilliam Darcy in His Own Words”, also told by Darcy himself), where I will fulfill at least some of your wish list and perhaps many “delicious tidbits” you haven’t even thought of. 🙂 All my books agree with canon, adding onto (with prequel, sequel, and fill-in-the-blank tales) rather than varying from it. You can read more about me and my books at my website/blog at http://www.shannonwinslow.com

    • Glynis on October 24, 2024 at 4:31 am
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    It’s nice to have the HEA first as that prevents the angst over the rest. I saw the film many years ago so can’t remember the significance of Zuzu’s petals? A lovely Christmas treat thank you.

    1. I watch “It’s a Wonderful Life” every year around Christmastime. As for starting with the HEA, it does lower the stakes and the angst (which I don’t mind either), but there really shouldn’t be any doubt that D&E will come out all right in the end. To do otherwise would be unthinkable. Haha!

    • Char on October 24, 2024 at 11:38 am
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    Congratulations Shannon!!! I have been looking forward to this book! Darcy is a prime candidate for this story line! I will read it and of course will check out the audiobook, with Harry F.! Thanks and again Congrats!

    1. Lovely! I hope you enjoy it both ways, Char!

    • J. W. Garrett on October 24, 2024 at 11:39 am
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    I loved that movie and look forward to reading this pastiche. I wish you success with this launch. Blessings.

    1. Thanks so much for your good wishes! Hope you enjoy the story as much as I did writing it. 🙂

    • Kristin on October 24, 2024 at 12:12 pm
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    It’s A Wonderful Life is beloved by me as well. I can’t wait to read this hommage, especially because you wrote it.

    1. Thank you, Kristin! I hope you find it a worthy tribute to that wonderful movie as well as to Jane Austen’s Mr. Darcy.

    • Ginna on October 24, 2024 at 7:47 pm
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    I think it sounds like a terrific premise, and I’m surprised that no one has done it before. But it seems like more could be written about it, so why so short?

    1. I don’t know, Ginna! I didn’t plan to make it short. I just told the story that I wanted to tell, and that’s how long it turned out to be. 🙂 Glad you like the premise, though!

    • PatriciaH on October 30, 2024 at 1:56 am
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    Always love a story told by Darcy!
    Congratulation on the launching!!

    1. Thanks, Patricia! If you haven’t already read it, be sure to check out my “Fitzwilliam Darcy in His Own Words.” Darcy has lots more to say there! 🙂

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