P&P:TUS Darcy Talks to Mr. Bennet

Darcy Talks to Mr. Bennet

October 7, 1812

Darcy paced the Netherfield library. The fool room was far too short and the threadbare carpet muffled what should have been a satisfying thud from his boots.

He had faced many intimidating men in his life. Men more educated them himself; men wealthier; men more powerful. None ever caused him a moment’s anxiety.

So why should an insignificant country gentlemen turn his insides into a wobbling mass of jelly?

None of those men ever had any power to deny him what he most desired.

Bennet did.How was such a man to be worked on? Intractable and capricious, reason could not be trusted. But in order to survive life with his wife and silly younger daughters, he could hardly be susceptible to sensibility, either. What was left to him?

Appeals to status, perhaps?

Threats?

Gah!

Elizabeth insisted Bennet would present no obstacles. His nature was to seek his ease and what could be easier than consigning his daughter to a life as Mistress of Pemberley?

While that might be true, Elizabeth was Mr. Bennet’s favorite child. Men could become unpredictable when their favorites were concerned.

Enough! This exercise was pointless and a waste of time.  Time he could spend much better.

He stomped out.

A gentleman should probably be seen to arrive on his horse, particularly it if were as fine an animal as his. But Netherfield’s grooms were slow on the best of days and further delay would not bode well for anyone. He would walk.

Besides the journey might soothe his haggard spirit.

Besides the journey might soothe his haggard spirit.

It did not.

The sun was too hot and somehow a burr had worked its way into his boot and lodged itself against his calf, just out of reach.

Excellent.

Longbourn rose in the distance. It was not a pretty vista. Apparently, aesthetics were not something Bennet cared about either. But then, little was attractive this time of year.

In the shadow of the house, he lifted his hat and wiped the sweat from his brow. Father should really have prepared him for this sort of conversation as he had so many others. Then again, even if he tried, could he have ever foreseen a man such as Bennet. Or, a woman like his Elizabeth?

Elizabeth.

That is why he was here. She was the only thing that could inspire such an errand or make it worthwhile. For her and her alone he would see this through. Whatever it would take.

He rapped on the door and Hill admitted him with a satisfyingly alarmed expression.

“I need to speak to Mr. Bennet.”

“Mr. Bennet, sir?”

“Did I not make myself clear?” He leveled a glare generally reserved for the impertinent of his own rank.

“Perfectly clear, sir.” She dropped a nervous curtsey and beckoned him to follow.

Rarely had that glare been so effective as to cause a servant to forget to see if the master was home to a visitor. He could not complain.

Hill peeked into the open study door. Bennet sat at his desk, open ledgers before him, a quill in his hand.

“Mr. Darcy to see you, sir.” Her voice quavered.

Bennet jumped and glowered. “Hill, I have told you…Mr. Darcy?” He removed his glasses and pushed to his feet.

Darcy stepped around Hill and took three steps into the room. “As you see, sir. I would speak with you.”

“Close the door, Hill.” Bennet came around the desk. “What business have you with Longbourn, sir?”

“Not with Longbourn, with you.”

Bennet leaned back and cocked his head. “With me? Now I am intrigued.”

“You have no idea why I have come?”

Surely, he could not be so thick.

“None at all.”

And yet he was.

“I come on a matter of some urgency, a personal matter.”

“An urgent and personal matter. You have me most intrigued, sir. What urgent, personal business could bring you to my doorstep?” Bennet folded his arms over his chest.

Darcy ground his teeth. Bennet might find this bating amusing, but at the best it was ungentlemanly. And his attempts to be dominant must stop.

“I come to discuss your daughter, Miss Elizabeth.”

The color faded from Bennet’s face, and he sagged against the edge of his desk.

Darcy schooled his features into neutrality. Now was not the time to gloat.

“My Lizzy? What has she to do with you?’

“I have made her an offer of marriage, and she has accepted.”

Bennet blinked and blinked again. “Surely that cannot be. My Lizzy? She accepted you? Impossible. That rumor was all an addlepated notion from my cousin Collins.”

“I rarely jest, sir, and never over matters so serious.”

“My Lizzy? Who you have not looked at but to find blemish?”

“I have long considered her the handsomest woman of my acquaintance.”

Bennet barked a harsh laugh. “I find that difficult to believe.”

“Disguise is my abhorrence, sir. You may ask Bingley if you wish corroboration.”

“Bingley? He is aware of your scheme?”

“I resent your implication, sir, but yes, he is aware, and perhaps your eldest daughter as well.”

Bennet raked his hair. “You are serious then?”

“Entirely.”

Bennet paced to his window and stared through the spotty glass. “My Lizzy?”

“I have a settlement in mind that I believe you and she will find quite acceptable.”

Generous in fact, but there was no need to bruise Bennet’s pride just yet.

“And she has accepted?”

“Without hesitation.”

Bennet slowly turned. “Why?”

What kind of question was that? No, it would not pay to take offense now. Elizabeth would want him to control his temper.

“Excuse me?”

“My Lizzy is a sensible girl. Why would she accept your offer?”

Because no sensible woman would refuse?

No, that was not true. She refused him once. But then, no sensible woman should have accepted that offer.

“I have not seen the need to question my good fortune, sir. You shall have to ask her that yourself.”

“I shall. You can be sure of it.” Bennet’s nostrils flared and his eyes widened.

“Have you any objections apart from the assurance of her approval?”

“I have no doubt you can provide for her adequately.”

“Have you any objections?”

“Your reputation and your connections are excellent.”

And so was his pedigree, but he was not a hound. He clenched his left hand into a tight fist.

“I insist on an answer, sir, will you refuse her permission to marry me?”

“She will be one and twenty soon enough. You could just wait—”

“She—and I—would prefer your blessing.”

That seemed to cut off Bennet’s next retort.

His shoulders slumped. “If she accepts you—truly accepts you—and I shall not force her to do that no matter what you claim—then I shall not offer any impediments.”

Not offer an impediment? That was his response? Any other man would be congratulating himself on his good fortune.

But not this quixotic gentleman. 

Still, it was enough.

“Thank you, sir. Shall I inform Miss Elizabeth, or do you prefer to do so?

“Tell Hill to send her to me. I might have a very long discussion with her.”

Darcy bowed and pushed the door open, nearly knocking Hill to the ground. Her spying would disturb him far more had he not won his point.

“Send Miss Elizabeth to her father.”

“I—I, yes, sir.” She curtsied and scurried away, nearly tripping in her haste.

Tension flowed away from him as the housekeeper disappeared.

Elizabeth would tell Bennet everything he needed to know and they would have his blessing soon enough.

In the meantime, he could see himself out.

 

 

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    • Joanne on October 7, 2024 at 1:30 am
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    Perfect, perfect, perfect. Exactly the right blend of arrogance and humbled desire. I have rarely read such a spot on characterisation for Darcy. Thank you.

    • Char on October 7, 2024 at 3:44 am
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    Thank you 😊 I love that Darcy has managed to throw Mr. B off kilter. And I love the way he declared himself.

    • Glynis on October 7, 2024 at 6:13 am
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    Anyone would think that Mr Bennet wasn’t expecting this?🤔😉. Thank goodness Elizabeth is sure of her feelings and able to convince her father!🥰🥰

    • Becky P on October 7, 2024 at 6:59 am
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    I could not help but grin the whole time I read this segment.
    I love reading Darcy’s thoughts.
    Thank you for today’s segment.

    • Victoria okonkwo on October 7, 2024 at 7:39 am
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    I’m a Jane Austen fan .I love how the exact arrogance of Mr Darcy is, in the conversation with Mr Bennet… Well portrayed.. Thank you

    • Kelley on October 7, 2024 at 11:04 am
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    Well done, but the Darcy in my head would be less harsh and judgemental and more gentle and open from the influence of Elizabeth. Not that any of us know exactly how that happened. We only have Bennet’s account as given to Elizabeth from Jane Austen. But very well written, nonetheless.

    • Tamalisa on October 8, 2024 at 2:20 pm
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    On point and thoroughly enjoyable! Thank you for taking us back to this moment with fresh insight.

    • Lena on October 10, 2024 at 10:39 am
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    I swear this scene looked different in the original book. Didn’t he ask after a dinner he was invited to? And didn’t he personally let Elizabeth know that her father wants to speak with her? I generally enjoy different points of view but I feel that if you don’t want to follow the original then perhaps you should create your own characters and your own story.

      • Jean Marie Ragus on October 14, 2024 at 2:32 pm
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      I agree. In addition, Darcy had gone through a personality evolution, he was no longer the prideful person. Personally, I think these variations should honor the original work, but add in conversations that could of happened. For example, it is entirely believable that Darcy and his sister would have talked about Elizabeth in the months before Georgiana met EB.

    • Jacqueline mitchell on October 10, 2024 at 9:27 pm
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    Love pride and prejudice

    • Hilda on October 14, 2024 at 12:33 pm
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    I agree with Lena of October 10, in Jane Austes book Darcy & Elizabeth agreed from their walk that after dinner that evening Darcy would talk to Mr Bennet & after dinner Darcy followed Mr Bennet to his library, Elizabeth was anxious when he came out, but he had a smile on his face & came over to Elizabeth @ a table where she was with Kitty & told her to go to your father, he wants to talk to you, but thank you for your thoughts on this exchange between the two intellectual minds, I am thinking that you are following the flow & thought of the 2005 P & P Movie where he could walk to Longbourn, but wonderful work nevertheless, thank you.

    • AnneLouise Feeny on October 14, 2024 at 1:45 pm
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    What a delight to have discovered you! Being a fellow Janette, I am absolutely thrilled With what you have written.
    You have captured Mr.Darcy down to his last cell!
    I am currently writing an historical fiction series that revives a folk hero from the French Revolution.
    My female protagonist is not unlike lizzie: Intelligent, freethinking, and, Despite social mores to the contrary, determined to build her own life, her way.
    Thank you again for your delicious prose

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