Whoa, is it Friday already! (Perhaps even Saturday, depending where in the world you live?) I meant to post this yesterday…and forgot! So sorry!
Here’s Part 7 — or really part 6.5 — of my Elizabeth and Darcy story, set in 1939. I believe there will be one final part of the story, which I hope to post around the end of March.
If you’re interested in the earlier parts, you can find them here: Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5, Part 6.
This part begins halfway through where I left off last time. I made some changes because I didn’t really like how I ended that last part. Just one of the many reasons I ought not write serially!
Thanks for your patience and understanding as I stumble through this story. Hope you find a bit of joy in it, and feel free to leave any feedback or suggestions! Thanks, all!
On-Air (Part 6.5)
(An Elizabeth and Darcy Short Story)
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It was her turn to laugh, and he wondered what he might give to make this a regular occurrence, hurrying through Grand Central, holding her hand, hearing her laugh.
Only when they had stowed their bags and settled into their seats did he allow himself to remember George Wickham—and only then because he owed it to his sister to make certain his deductions were, in fact, correct.
“Tommy,” he said, his voice catching on the boy’s name. “Is he…is Wickham…”
“Yes,” she whispered, staring down at her hands, now balled into fists on her lap.
He leaned into her slightly, their arms touching.
“How did you figure it out?” she asked, glancing up at him. “When Wickham mentioned he had once been a postal clerk, I saw how you looked at me, as if you knew. But I don’t understand how you knew, just from that comment…”
“It wasn’t that comment alone.” He told her of the gossip Caroline Bingley had heard from the locals: that Jane Bennet had often been seen in the company of the town’s handsome young postal clerk—until the postal clerk left town and Jane had ended up pregnant.
“But there are a lot of postal clerks in the world. How did you know it was him?”
“I…I hired a private detective.”
“What?”
The word erupted from her, and at such a volume that the man sitting in front of them glanced back, eyebrows raised.
Darcy gave him a hard stare, until the man shrugged and turned back in his seat.
“Are you going to start harassing the poor passengers in front of us again?” Bennet whispered.
“Oh, so now you use your quiet voice.”
“Perhaps I was a little loud just then, but can you blame me? For God’s sake, Darcy, a detective! Have you told your sister?”
“Of course not. She’d be livid.”
“Rightly so! It’s rather high-handed of you!”
“I’m just looking out for her.”
“Isn’t she twenty-three or twenty-four?”
“In fact, she’s twenty-two.”
“Don’t you think she can look out for herself?”
“I don’t know. That’s the problem!”
“Have you even talked to her about him?”
“Of course I have. I’ve told her I don’t trust him. He came out of nowhere; we don’t know a damn thing about him!”
“You actually said that to her?”
“Well, not in so many words, but—”
“Why didn’t you start with, ‘Georgi, I care about you. Tell me about this person you care about?’”
“No one talks like that, Bennet.”
“I do!”
“Really? If your sister were dating someone you didn’t trust, you’d sit her down and say, ‘Dearest sister, tell me the inner workings of your heart?’”
Her mouth quivered, as if she wanted to laugh. “I’ll tell you this: if one of my sisters went behind my back and investigated you, I’d—”
“Me?”
Their gazes locked, and then, blushing, she glanced away.
“Why would your sisters consider me important enough to investigate?” He nudged her lightly with his shoulder. “I’m just that man you happen to hate.”
She smiled at him then—a slow, arch smile that made his breath catch. “There may be some small chance that I don’t hate you.”
Never mind all the troubles weighing him down; in that moment, he felt lighter than air.
“Besides,” she added, with a careless wave of her hand, “my sisters may have heard something about you—from Tommy.”
“Ah, from Tommy.”
“He’s fascinated with your secret life as a pirate, of course.”
Darcy grinned. “He must talk about me often, then.”
“Often? I don’t know about that. But you are rather…intriguing.”
“Is that Tommy’s word for me? Rather grown-up vocabulary for a child.”
“Well, he is a clever kid.”
“Must get it from his aunt.”
She laughed. “I don’t know where he gets it from, but—” All at once, her face fell, and her shoulders drooped. “Sometimes, when Tommy laughs, there’s this expression on his face that reminds me he’s not just Jane’s child, and in those moments, I find myself wishing…”
She sighed.
“You wish Wickham weren’t his father.”
“It’s an awful thing to think, isn’t it? It’s almost like wishing him out of existence.”
“No,” he said. “It’s possible to love Tommy for who he is, even if you do despise his father. We don’t have to be like our parents, Bennet, no matter what we’ve inherited from them.”
At least, that was what he hoped, desperately so. He loved his father—loved him for his vitality and creativity, his ambition and drive. But he had also spent so much of his life trying to be someone different. He wanted to be his own version of a Darcy.
She closed her eyes. “Oh, Darcy…I’m sorry. I should have told you much sooner what I knew about Wickham.”
“Hey,” he murmured, when she twisted away from him, leaning her forehead against the train window. “Elizabeth.”
At the sound of her name, she turned back and met his eyes.
“You were just trying to protect your family.”
“And so are you,” she said, blinking rapidly, “which is why I should have—”
“Look, Bennet, even if you had told me earlier, I still would have hired a detective.”
“Oh, naturally.” She glared at him. “I suppose you’d have needed more than just my word as evidence.”
“Ah, there you are!”
Her brow furrowed. “What do you mean?”
“I was wondering what had happened to that vexing coworker of mine—you know, the one with the propensity for taking everything I say out of context?”
She bit her lip, but it did no good: her laugh slipped free, sunlight masquerading as sound. “Who uses words like propensity and vexing these days?”
“Only pirates.”
When she laughed again, the man in front of them glanced back a second time.
“Sorry!” she said to him, biting back another laugh.
When the man was again facing front, she whispered to Darcy, “I really am a loudmouth, aren’t I?”
He couldn’t help himself; his gaze settled on her lips. “Maybe you are a loudmouth, but…I don’t think I could ever get enough of your laugh, Bennet.”
She went still and silent—a just punishment for his stupid sentimentality.
As he shifted in his seat, trying to think of some way to make this moment less awkward, she said, “Well, this is a muddle, isn’t it?”
He wasn’t sure if she meant the business with Wickham—or his feelings for her. So he said, “Yes.”
“So…this private detective. He knows about Tommy and Jane?”
“No, at least, not yet. I only hired the man a week ago, and all he’s been able to find so far is a list of Wickham’s previous addresses—including his six-month stay, five years ago, at Minuteman Lodging House in Meryton.”
“Ah. So it was the address plus Wickham’s comment about being a postal clerk…”
“Yes.”
“When are you going to tell your sister what you’ve learned?”
“I don’t know. I tried to convince her, just this morning, not to go with him on this birthday jaunt, to stay at home and celebrate with me, but…” He shook his head.
A cake, he’d told Georgi, giving her an awkward kiss on the cheek when she’d come to see him in the office. “Let’s leave PBN; we’ll go home, and I’ll bake you a cake.”
Never mind that he had never before baked a cake. The idea had just slipped out, like someone else’s memory: Elizabeth, Jane, and Tommy Bennet, hurrying home to enjoy a slice of cake baked by one of their own.
He could picture all of the Bennet sisters—though he had never met the youngest three—sitting around a table together, with Tommy on his mother’s lap as she drew in a deep breath to blow out the candles.
God, how he had wanted that moment for Georgi and himself. Maybe Georgi had wanted it too, for when he’d made the offer, she had paused, as if she might say yes. But then Wickham had bounded into the office, reminding her they had to leave for their trip to the Hamptons.
Darcy almost told her then what he’d gleaned about Wickham’s past. But this revelation, sprung on her without warning, would have sent her running to George Wickham, rather than away from him.
“Look,” he said to Bennet now. “You’re right: I probably shouldn’t have hired the detective, at least not without telling Georgi. But it’s not just my sister I’m worried about. My father has become increasingly dependent on Wickham at work, and I don’t trust—”
My father. He couldn’t bring himself to finish that sentence aloud—and not just because he hated to speak ill of the man who had raised him. Darcy had, for the first time in minutes, become aware of his own surroundings. It turned out that he and Bennet had an audience: the man sitting in front of them had now turned completely in his seat, so that he sat on his knees, his elbows digging into the top of the seat, his chin propped on his fists.
“What the hell do you think you’re doing?” Darcy demanded.
“Oh, dear,” said Bennet, with something like a sigh—or a laugh.
“So I forgot my paper, and I’m bored stiff,” said the man, grinning. “If you’re willing to provide all of this free entertainment—”
“We are not,” said Darcy, glowering.
“I should warn you”—Bennet leaned forward with a conspiratorial smile—“my friend here is known for knocking the hats off the heads of gentlemen who annoy him.”
Darcy turned his glare on her.
“Well, one of us likes to knock off hats. Either way,” she added to the man in front of them, “your headwear is in no small amount of danger, sir.”
“Here,” he said, taking the cap from his head and offering it to her. “I’d give up my hat, no problem, if it mean listening to the two of you. You’re better than one of those dramas on CBS!”
“CBS?” Darcy no longer knew if he wanted to scowl or laugh.
“I’d choose PBN, if I were you,” said Bennet.
“Ah, PBN’s all right, I guess, but CBS has better shows.”
“Well, Darcy, here’s your chance: you can find out what the average listener thinks.”
“Are you in radio?” the man asked him, eyes widening. “I’d love to get into radio!”
“You don’t have the voice for it,” muttered Darcy.
“Yeah, you’re right,” said the man, good-naturedly. “But I could work behind the scenes; I’m great with wires and antennas and… you know, those doohickeys the radio men use? Now you”—he pointed at Bennet—“you’ve got a voice for radio!”
She glanced at Darcy, her shoulders shaking with suppressed laughter.
“Listen,” said the man, reaching into a pocket and pulling out a card. “I’m just thinking—”
Darcy sighed and held out his hand. At least twice a week, someone gave him his card, hoping to “get into radio.”
But the card, it seemed, was for Bennet.
“Just in case,” said the man, winking at her, “you’re not with this guy—or you don’t want to be anymore.”
“Are you serious?” Darcy said. “Are you actually—”
The man held up his hands. “I’m just saying! When I was listening—”
“Eavesdropping.”
“—I couldn’t tell if the two of you were an item!” He waved the card at Bennet. “So, what do you say?”
Now her entire body was trembling, but she managed to keep a straight face as she said, “Thank you, but no.”
“Ah, well, a guy’s got to take his chances, you know?” He started to turn away, but then, suddenly swung back around to face her. “You sure? Because I would never hire a private detective to snoop on my sister and—”
“You’ve taken more than your fair share of chances today,” said Darcy, half rising from his seat.
“All right, all right!” The guy turned and sat down, throwing over his shoulder, “But if you change your mind—”
“She won’t,” said Darcy, “but you may: try listening to more PBN, Tuesdays, 10 pm.”
Bennet glanced at him, biting her lip—then bursting into laughter.
Only when the man exited at the next stop—giving Darcy a jaunty wave and blowing Bennet a kiss—did Darcy allow himself to laugh, as well.
“I suppose,” said Bennet, nodding toward the older woman who just had taken the seat in front of them, “we should have a more ‘train-appropriate’ conversation.”
“Such as?”
“The weather is usually safe.”
“Very warm for the second of September.”
“Indeed.”
Silence, and then, “It’s your turn to come up with a topic, Darcy.”
“Books?”
“Normally, yes—but not on a train. I can never talk of books on a train. I get motion sickness, just thinking of reading while moving at 50 miles per hour.”
“The news, then?” But as soon as he said it, he regretted it. “No, let’s not talk of the news, either.”
She made a soft sound, something between a sigh and sad little laugh. “Yes, the news is the worst topic of all. Were you at PBN yesterday when the broadcast came through? I…I didn’t see you.”
He again felt that baffling lightness, that sense that all was right in the world, when in fact, there were too many problems to count. Still, that she had looked for him…
“I was in my father’s office.”
They had been meeting with a board member and two bankers, discussing the possibilities of yet another loan. If they hadn’t heard the commotion through the closed door—the exclamations, followed by the broadcast, blaring at full volume, announcing Germany’s invasion of Poland—he might not have known for hours.
“This business in Europe will blow over,” his father had declared, when the broadcast had ended. “Now, Mr. Friedman, another cup of coffee? Or perhaps something stronger? It’s almost noon, you know!”
Darcy could not adopt his father’s optimism. Before Poland, it had been Austria, and then parts of Czechoslovakia. And it wasn’t just Europe that was crumbling: hundreds of thousands had died in Ethiopia, when the Italian army had invaded a few years earlier—and in China, millions had perished since Japan’s occupation of Manchuria in 1931.
How long could Americans pretend fascist rhetoric was mere bluster? When would it be come clear that all this talk of superiority and dominance was not, in fact, just talk? War would not remain safely tucked away on other continents—not for long.
“You sound shocked,” Bingley had said, when Darcy had telephoned him a few hours after the broadcast. His friend’s voice had crackled across the long-distance line. Static or frustration? Both, likely.
“The invasion of Poland changes everything, Bingley, even if we want to deny it. My father and his friends think we can stay out of war, but—”
“Yes, the invasion is awful, and we are going to war, sooner or later—but to be shocked about it? No, I can’t be shocked. After Kristallnacht, nothing the Nazis do should shock us.1 Then again, what do I know? I’m just one of those trouble-making Jews.”
“Bingley—”
“Sorry, Darce. I know I sound bitter, but—”
“No, I’m being a jackass. Do you…do you have any family in Europe?”
“Probably, but my father’s parents made a complete break—name change and all—when they immigrated, so I don’t really know. If my father hadn’t married into a more observant family, I doubt I’d ever have been to a synagogue.” Bingley had paused then, for so long that Darcy had feared the line had been disconnected.
Finally: “If Jane, that is, if the people here in Meryton knew I was Jewish—I don’t really advertise it, you know—well, I can’t help but wonder: would they still want me to be their doctor?”
“They’d be fools not to, Bingley.”
“But we’re all fools, in our own way. That’s the problem. We tend to live our lives as we’ve always lived them, and if someone asks us to change…Bah! Enough of this! I promise, when you come to visit this weekend, we’ll ban all talk of news and other serious matters! I won’t even bring up my practice—or how you should join it.”
“Then what the hell are we going to talk about?”
“I’ll regale you with amusing stories about some of my patients. Or, better yet, I’ll wax eloquent on the beauties of a certain angel I happen to know.”
“So that’s not serious, then?”
“Actually…it is. I know what you said last weekend, and I know you’re right. I don’t want to ruin her reputation! But, well…damn it, Darcy. Maybe you ought to give me more advice on my love life, after all!”
“You truly want my advice?”
“No, not really. I just want to talk about Jane. I’ve never met a more beautiful woman, Darcy—never. And I’m not just talking about her looks, though if we are talking about her looks, there was this moment, yesterday, when—”
“Save it, Bingley. I’m not paying long-distance to hear you carry on about your latest infatuation.”
“That’s just it: I’m not sure it is infatuation. Look, I know you’re not a romantic. You’ve never lost your head over a woman, but…”
Except he had, hadn’t he? Yesterday, when he’d made that phone call to Bingley, he’d gone days without talking to Bennet—and still, he couldn’t stop thinking about her. Now, sitting next to her on the train—arguing, bantering, talking, flirting—he didn’t want to go another minute, much less another week, without hearing her voice.
Of course, now she was silent, for he had brought up the news, and before that, they had been focused on Jane, Tommy, Georgi, and Wickham. Was there any in-between topic—one more substantial than the weather and less solemn than the problems of their families, or the world—that they could discuss? Was it possible, in these times, to be two regular people, searching for something like happiness?
Apparently not, for he asked, “Do you want to talk about it…the news from Europe, I mean?”
She sighed. “I don’t know. Can I tell you something terrible? When I’m in my apartment, I I turn off the radio as soon as a news broadcast airs—not a good position to take, as employees of a radio network, is it?”
“With so much bad news in the world, it’s almost an act of self-preservation.”
“Yes, exactly! So many countries, at war or on the verge of it! So many people out of work, or without homes or food. The worst of it is, it’s not compassion that’s making me turn away from all this—just plain old guilt. Because when I wake up in the morning and I catch sight of the drawing Tommy sent home with me last week, or when I hear Charlotte, in her dry, humorous voice, describing her horrible date from the night before, or when I’m walking to work and I see a daisy, poking its way through the crack of a sidewalk—I just feel so incredibly happy! And then I think, What right do I have to be so happy when the world is such a mess?”
“Yes.”
She smiled. “Do you spend much time, admiring daisies growing out of sidewalks?”
“Oh, all the time,” he replied, smiling back.
“All right,” she said, after they had fallen silent for another long minute, “so news is out of the question. You’ve got to come up with something else, then. We still have twenty minutes left on this train.”
“I already suggested books.”
“Well, try again!”
“Oh, fine…mountains or the ocean?”
“Do you mean, which do I prefer? Mountains, I suppose, though I’ve never been.”
“Never?”
“Well, I’ve never really been to the ocean, either, unless you count looking out at it from the Coney Island boardwalk.”
“You’ve never been to the mountains? Not even the Catskills?”
“Meryton and Manhattan, Darcy—those are my domains. What, did you think I had the time or money to take jaunts around the world, like some people I know?”
He flushed. “I didn’t mean—”
“Neither did I,” she said, tone softening. “I know you’ve not been traveling for pleasure. I heard…well, Jane told me you and Dr. Bingley used to work together overseas. I suppose you’ve been to many mountains…and a few oceans, as well?”
He sighed and said nothing.
“Oh, you are so frustrating, Darcy! You can’t start a conversation and then stop it, when it suits you.”
“Well, I wasn’t trying to talk about me. I wanted to know more about you.”
“Oh.”
“Look, I’m not good at making conversation, alright?”
“Well, at least I’ve never been bored when talking with you. Now, don’t start grinning at me like that, as if you’re proud of yourself. You just admitted you’re terrible at talking with people.”
“I didn’t say terrible. I said ‘not good.’”
“Don’t you suppose, with all your education, you ought to be able to hold a simple conversation, now and then?”
He shrugged. “So I don’t have a talent for small talk.”
“Perhaps you ought to practice.”
“That’s what I was trying to do.”
“You gave up fairly quickly. So—mountains or the ocean, Darcy?”
He smiled. “Neither. Or both. It’s a false dichotomy.”
“You don’t like making things easy, do you?”
“Well then, show me how it’s done, excellent conversationalist that you are.”
“Very well: what is the most beautiful place you’ve ever seen? Where should I go one day, when I finally have the chance to travel?”
“The Basque Mountains,” he said, without stopping to think. “I never climbed or hiked them, just saw them from the distance, but it was an incredible sight.”
“Were you…were you in Guernica?” she asked softly.
“Not when it was bombed, but afterwards, yes. There was this morning, just after dawn. I’d been up all night in the clinic, and I couldn’t sleep, so I walked around the city. Ruins and rubble, everywhere. People had lost everything and—well, it was awful. It should have been the ugliest place in the world. But there was something about the way the light and shadow played across those mountains, something about that particular shade of green…”
God, he sounded like a fool. No, there could be no in-between conversations for him.
“Despite what I said earlier,” she said quietly, “I think we’re allowed—no, we are obligated—to find joy in difficult times. Especially in difficult times.”
“And I think,” he said, forcing himself to hold her gaze, “that I have found joy.”
It would have been convenient if, in that moment, the conductor had called out, “Meryton, next stop!”—but they had to suffer through three or four minutes of silence—punctuated only by awkward glances or the occasional, uncertain laugh—before the train pulled into their station.
“Is your sister not coming to meet you today?” he asked, looking around the platform for Jane and Tommy Bennet.
“No, I told her not to bother. She came last week because I wanted to make it home in time for cake, but tonight—” She shrugged. “Well, the sun will be up for another half hour, and I prefer walking. Longbourn is only a mile from here; I’ll cut through a pasture for most of that mile, so don’t worry: I’ll be safe, unless the cows decide to attack. What about you: is Bingley coming to pick you up?”
“I was going to take a taxi.”
“You could…well, you could walk with me, if you wanted.”
He met her eyes, and she blushed, looking away.
“I mean, it’s such a nice evening, and we’ve been cooped up inside most of the day, and Netherfield is just beyond Longbourn, and—”
“Yes, Bennet,” he cut in, smiling. “I want to walk with you.”
“Your fancy shoes will be caked in mud.”
“I don’t mind. Here, give me your—”
“Hey!” She clutched her small carpet bag to her chest. “I did not ask you to walk with me so that you would carry my bag!”
“Well then”—he felt his lips curl into a slow, satisfied smile—“why did you ask me to walk with you?”
“Look at you: one moment, so awkward, so shy—”
“Shy?”
“—the next moment, the most arrogant man I’ve ever met.”
“Oh, I see: you wanted to walk with me so that you could pelt me with insults, is that it?”
“Of course.”
They rambled along without speaking, the country road giving way to the spongy grass. The pasture wasn’t particularly muddy—it hadn’t rained significantly in weeks—but they dodged enough cow dung and swatted at enough mosquitos to make the walk anything but picturesque.
Still, he couldn’t imagine anywhere else he wanted to be—not even those mountains in Spain.
“I owe you a story,” he said eventually.
“Do you? Oh.” She stopped walking suddenly. “No, Darcy, you don’t have to explain—”
“I said that if you told me about Wickham, I would tell you why I stopped—”
“But you don’t have to talk it about, not if you don’t want.”
He drew in a breath. “Usually, I don’t, but now, with you…”
She slipped her arm through his. “Tell me whatever you like, Darcy.”
“Are you ever going to call me Will?”
“Will?” She laughed. “I’m so relieved! Fitzwilliam has too many syllables.”
“It has one fewer than Elizabeth.”
“Which is why you call me Bennet, isn’t it?”
“I call you Bennet because it suits you. But then, so does Elizabeth. And Lizzy,” he added, trying out the nickname for the first time.
She smiled and made a humming sound, low in her throat, so that he almost stopped walking and kissed her, then and there.
“I’m avoiding the topic, aren’t I?”
“Like I said, you don’t have to—”
And like he’d said, he wanted to tell her. So he did, in a rambling, roundabout way that matched their steps through the pasture. He told her of his mother’s death, of his time in medical school, of his father’s disappointment, of his travels through Europe and Asia—but in no particular order, so that the stories wound together, the tangled threads of a tangled life.
“I’d planned on practicing in New York,” he told her, “so that I could be close to home, but my father was so angry with me for turning down his offer to work at PBN that he sent me a bill in the mail for the cost of my tuition at Harvard and Johns Hopkins.”
She stared up at him. “Truly?”
“Well, when you think about it, it was only fair. Most men have to pay their way through school. Anyway, after that, well—the opportunity to travel, to escape, seemed too good an opportunity to pass up. It wasn’t the best paying job, but then, I didn’t have to worry about rent or dinners, so…” He managed a bitter laugh. “So much for taking up the practice of medicine for others’ benefit.”
“You were still helping others,” she said, nudging him with her shoulder. “And it sounds like you loved…love it?”
“Yes, I do.”
“Then…why stop? Your father’s accident, I suppose, but still—”
No. Even after he’d received word of his father’s accident, he’d waited months to come home.
“What…what finally convinced you to come back?” she asked tentatively, when he had not spoken for several minutes.
They had reached a house—her house, he supposed. Longbourn was a lovely colonial, ramshackle in places, yet with enough space and character to suggest it had once been the seat of a small but prosperous estate.
“I lost a patient,” he murmured into the twilight.
“Had you never before…?”
“That’s the odd thing: I’d lost a number of patients before, and this patient…well, it was 50/50. It wasn’t my fault, or so everyone told me, but she—”
She looked like his sister. That was what he could not say aloud, not even to Elizabeth. The day before operating on the girl, he’d received a letter from Georgi, pleading for him to return home. Why had it taken a girl’s death for him to come to terms with his own selfishness?
He didn’t have to stop practicing medicine. No matter what Bingley had promised about their talks this weekend, Darcy supposed that was why his friend kept inviting him to Netherfield on the weekends: he wanted to convince Darcy to return to medicine, if not with him, in Meryton, the somewhere.
But PBN was a mess. His family was a mess. The world was a mess. Here he was, with money, and time, and talent—what was he supposed to do? What was the right way forward?
“We are torn in so many directions,” Elizabeth murmured, almost as if she’d heard his thoughts.
But no: she was staring up at the house, lost in her own thoughts. The front bay window was open, and in the darkening twilight, the light from living room outlined the form of two young women, twirling each other in circles.
“Heaven,” one of the girls sang, at the top of her voice, “I’m in heaven!”2
“And my heart beats so that I can hardly speak,” crooned the other girl, before they doubled over, laughing.
“Meet Kitty and Lydia,” said Elizabeth, smiling.
It struck him then, as he glanced between her and Longbourn, how she must have felt torn: torn between Manhattan and Meryton, between a job she loved (a job he had imperiled) and her love for her family, between all that she wanted to see in the world and all the reasons she had to remain close to home.
He wished he knew what to say: how to solve all of her problems—and how to solve a few of his problems, as well. But he didn’t, so he said instead, “Do you dance?”
“Of course.” She considered him. “Do you?”
“Of course. Anyone can dance.”
“Oh, anyone, eh?”
He looked at her, smiling up at him, and—just as the song predicted—his heart beat so that he could hardly speak. Still, he managed to say, “Do you want to find out?”
He dropped his bag; she dropped hers. He held out his hand; she took it. Fred Astaire’s voice floated across the grass, swirling between them: Dance with me/I want my arms about you/The charms about you/Will carry me through to…
“Heaven,” he murmured into her hair.
“Yes, heaven,” she whispered back, her lips against his cheek.
September 2, 1939, and the world was falling apart. It was a hell of a time to fall in love.
© 2025 Christina Morland
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Kristallnacht, or the “Night of Broken Glass,” occurred on November 9-10, 1938, when Nazi leaders, the Hitler youth, and associated supporters throughout German territories vandalized synagogues and Jewish-owned businesses, attacked and arrested tens of thousands, and murdered at least 91 Jewish people. Kristallnacht was not just an aberrant outbreak of violence but the result of long-held anti-semitic views, not to mention a series of anti-Jewish laws and hate speech instituted by the Nazi government and largely supported by (or at least tolerated by) Germans who were not Jewish.
- Kitty and Lydia are singing and dancing to “Cheek to Cheek,” written by Irving Berlin and sung by Fred Astaire in the 1935 film Top Hat. Here’s a video, if you’re interested!
Author’s Note: Many thanks to Glynis, who suggested in a comment some months ago that Darcy needed to have Wickham investigated by a private detective. Darcy, it seems, has great respect for Glynis’s understanding (and deep dislike) of Wickham!
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This is such an incredibly good story. I wish you would make it a complete book. I can’t believe there will only be one more part to it. I want to know what will happen with the war and Darcy and Lizzy. This is so good!
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Thank you so much, Rachelle! I’m so glad you’re enjoying the story, and it means a lot that you want more! Who knows what will happen…life! 🙂 I did set out to write a story set just in 1939 — mainly because I think that year is such a pivotal one in history, and I wondered what it would mean to fall in love during a time of great uncertainty (and what it would mean, as a writer and reader, to know that the protagonists would face even more uncertainty in a future they don’t know yet). Anyway, as I said — who knows! Thank you again for taking the time to read and comment!
Loved this!! ❤️❤️ I love that they admitted feelings, I love that they shared stories. I love that they both detest Wickham. I love that Elizabeth immediately turned down the other man. I’m really hoping they get together soon. I’m really hoping that Georgi comes to no harm. I’m REALLY hoping that Wickham gets his comeuppance 🤞🏻🤞🏻🤞🏻. Can’t wait for more. Thank you 💐💐
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Dear Glynis, thank you, thank you! You have the tenderest heart when it comes to our favorite characters…and a vengeful streak when it comes to Wickham! (As it should be, of course!)
Tangential question for you: do you think Wickham received his just comeuppance in Pride and Prejudice? That scene near the end of P&P, when Elizabeth sits in the copse, reading Aunt Gardiner’s letter, and Wickham comes upon her — I’ve always thought it was such an interesting scene for how “light” it appears on the surface, given all that Wickham has just done to her. Then again, there’s much happening beneath the surface, much unspoken and between the lines. Anyway, I’d love to know if you’d have given Wickham a different “ending” in P&P!
He hardly ever gets the punishment he should! But re P&P I actually think having to live with Lydia in reduced circumstances is quite a good punishment! Hopefully his new Colonel will restrict his less than savoury activities, meaning he has no chance to cheat or spend what little they have on gambling! But actually I would have had him court martialled for desertion and unbecoming conduct for an officer …….. with appropriate punishment! OK so I’m a LITTLE bloodthirsty where he’s concerned? 😱
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Hah! Well, Wickham inspires a great deal of vengeance in me, as well! (Not as much as Willoughby, interestingly enough.) When rereading P&P, I sometimes find myself wishing Elizabeth had given him a much stronger set down in their last scene together, but then I always read the scene again and realize how perfect her response is, for Austen makes clear in that scene the true nature of both characters: Elizabeth’s wit and grace versus Wickham’s smarmy wheedling. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Glynis!
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❤️ back at you, Char! Thanks for reading!
Excellent!!! I really enjoyed this story. Thank you, Christina, for your hard work!!!
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Aww, thank you, Lou! I’m grateful to you for taking the time to wade through this work in progress! I think there will be one more part, which I hope to post near the end of March. Many thanks!
Thank you for sharing with us! I am really enjoying this story.❤️
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Thanks so much for reading, SAF! So glad you’re enjoying the story!
Thank you.
At one point the narrator refers to Elizabeth as ‘Bennet’. That felt a bit odd as it’s Darcy’s way of referring to her.
(“Are you going to start harassing the poor passengers in front of us again?” Bennet whispered.)
Hello- please don’t publish this comment – it’s just meant for the author.
I have been loving this series and as I said before, having been waiting for each episode with great anticipation.
Now, I don’t really know much about these things so feel free to dismiss the following comments.
I feel like the plot is struggling to land – and I think you might feel this too because of the need to change it. I would humbly suggest that the guy on the train needs a bit of work. Unless he is needed in the final part (or even if he is), I’d reduce his part quite significantly. The second version with him turning around with his elbows on the seat is a bit flinstones/looney tunes comical – it feels out of place. Perhaps after the initial raise of eyebrows, an interaction as he passes them to get off the train at a stop prior to theirs, might fit better?
Also on a second read, the narrator uses “Bennet” for Elizabeth quite a lot, not just the once – and it really feels out of place unless Darcy has started narrating the story in third person. Isn’t the point of this name that *only* Darcy calls her by it?
Oh I wasn’t expecting it to published automatically, my others have not been.
Author
Dear Rachael,
I’m so grateful to you for taking the time to give me this very thoughtful and insightful feedback! I can absolutely see what you’re saying about the guy on the train. I admit I wrote this section in one feverish writing session — so much fun to write, not as much fun to read! 🙂 I will definitely give a thought to his role when I go back and revise the story as a whole.
This series of posts has been a great way for me to just let go and write (even though, as you noted, I have gone back and changed things because, when I return to writing each few weeks, I feel that uneasy sense that something is not quite right.) I am, in essence, a selfish creature because I’m making you — dear readers — witness me play with the story, instead of providing you a more polished piece!
Another benefit for me, as a writer of a serial story: hearing from readers like you along the way! It means a lot that you took the time to think about the plot and point of view (Bennet vs Elizabeth, etc), and I’ll definitely keep your ideas in mind when I return to the story to revise it. For the next (hopefully last) part of the story, I’m not sure I’ll be able to make any major changes, but we’ll see what happens. I do think plot is not one of my strong points — well, I have a lot of “not my strong points!”, but plot gets me every time (an embarrassing admission for a would-be author!).
I will say that one of the fun aspects of writing this story for me has been revisiting what I know about 1939 (and I could definitely be getting that wrong, too!). I think the guy on the train became almost one of those moments in a Katharine Hepburn/Cary Grant or Spencer Tracy movie. I also think I tend to swerve toward the ridiculous when I feel a scene is getting too serious. So, all of these things are important to consider as I move forward. Sorry my comment is not particularly eloquent, either — I haven’t had my tea yet this morning! 😀
Many, many thanks again, Rachael! I know you didn’t mean to publish this publicly, but I’m grateful that you did. This kind of conversation between reader and writer is very meaningful to me, and it’s one more reason why I love JAFF!
All the best,
Christina
This is the best part of the story in my opinion. You laugh, you smile, you think about the world and its conflicts (an actual topic, by the way), you witness the strength of the budding feelings of the characters to each other.
I especially love the last scene when they dance, which reminds me that regretfully I’m an awful dancer, by the way! (“All the savages can dance”: it’s not correct Mr Darcy, I can’t).
Well done, it was worth waiting!
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You’re very kind, Lisa! I’m so glad you enjoyed this part of the story, and as for dancing…hah! I love that your comment to Mr. Darcy! 😀
I’m not a good dancer, either! Have you ever tried contra dancing or English line dancing? I was introduced to this type of dancing (not dissimilar to what Regency Elizabeth and Darcy would have danced) when I lived in Western Massachusetts. I loved it because, once I learned a few steps, I could join in pretty easily. I mean, I still was more like Mr. Collins, turning this way instead of that, stepping on people’s feet, etc., but it was one of the only types of dance I’ve encountered that allowed me to join in without much skill or knowledge in advance. Not sure if you have anything like contra dancing wherever you call home, but if you ever come across it, and you feel the mood to dance strike, give it a try! It’s so much fun!
Loving this story. I’m glad they are more open now. Looking forward to more .
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Thank you so much, Jennifer! One of the best parts of writing JAFF is giving Elizabeth and Darcy a chance to be more open than they could be in the original, right? So appreciate you stopping by to read and comment!
Oh! What a lovely chapter!
In the camp of those thinking this should be at least a novella, if not full length book. So much to explore in the respective emotional journies of the characters. In addition to ODC’s journey:
Expanding the view through Georgie’s perspective and her search to feel loved, valued, and secure where her worlds, both personal and global, are chaotic;
Bingley’s Jewish connections and complexity of a mixed religion relationship when Judaism is under siege, but abandoning Judaism would make his life infinitely easier;
War time politics in small town USA – is everyone anti-facist? And what about antisemitism in rural NY? Is Meryton anywhere near Catskills/Ulster County, where many Jews summered to escape the city heat and where Jews were sponsored to run farms as part of refugee immigrant resettlement?
Normalization of Jewish lives in general fiction, much as Christian life is normalized via scenes of church, Sunday supper, Christmas and Easter…
All sorts of opportunities to expand and explore.
Author
Stavis Adelle, so many good ideas and thoughts here. I love all of your questions, especially about Bingley and small-town America. Thank you for sharing them!
Honestly, I’m not sure I’ll be able to follow through on all or even most of these ideas. I began this story as a challenge: write a story set only in 1939, when we as the readers know what’s coming, but the characters still live in a state of uncertainty. What does it mean to live and love when you don’t know what’s going to happen next? That is, of course, the story for all of us: we none of us know the future (or at least I don’t have that ability!). But there are moments in history when this challenge of being a human, living in chronological time, feels particularly stark.
I’ll keep thinking about your comments. So grateful for the thoughts, questions, and ideas. I have to ask: do you write, as well? You’ve got some great ideas here! Point me in your direction if you are writing!
Christina,
You and I have chatted in other places – AKA Adelle, LawyerMom, Eidel. I live in MA and was an attorney, but started out as English major from Queens, NYC. Classes taught me I am much better at non-fiction than fiction. So no, not currently a writer. But I did do some editing for peers, reporting/writing for school newspapers and arts reviews for school arts magazine way back in ancient history. Thank you for the compliment, tho.
Always happy to connect with you. Absolutely love your modern takes on P&P. Your grasp on personality, character, plot, and emotional journey are so wonderful!
Feel free to Email if there is ever a desire to chat, or whatever.
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Adelle, of course! I’m sorry I’m such a space cadet and didn’t connect your name with the conversations we’ve had before! Thanks so for your kind words about these stories, and yes, I’d love to chat sometime! All the best to you, Christina
Loving this story so much! I’m also in the camp hoping for a novella. I love the way you have crafted this; I’m always craving more at the end of a post and so excited when I see the next installment is published. Thank you for weaving together this moment in time and the radio storyline with the beloved characters from P&P. I’m excited to see where you take this. Is PBN going to survive? Does Elizabeth get a better time slot? Or does she get scooped up by another network? Does Georgie realize Wickham is no good before she’s hurt? Does Darcy decide to practice medicine again? I love them dancing to cheek to cheek!
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Thank you so much, Heather! I love all of your questions. I have answers to a few, but not all! 🙂
As I mentioned in a comment above, I’m definitely being selfish with this story because I’m drafting it as I go, and it’s not polished, so I need to think about the overall story arc and where this narrative is headed. I’m so grateful to you, as a reader, for coming along on this uncertain journey!
I hopped onto this bandwagon late, but I finally finished reading all the parts in the last three days in between work and sleep😂Honestly, I’ve never been much for ‘remakes’ or playing with characters from other stories, especially classics, but this short series has changed my mind! I think what you’ve done is genius! I’m 100% invested, I love the era (the early 1900s is one of my favourite story settings); I love the way the characters are believable as their original type, yet in a completely different world. I would totally read a longer work. I know you feel your writing is rough drafted, but I aspire to have my polished writing sound as good as your rough drafts one day. There may be the odd occasion where the writing doesn’t feel like a final draft, but I think you’re really good—your scenes are delightfully layered, like a flaky croissant😅
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BFrie, I don’t think there could be any better compliment than to have my writing compared to a flaky croissant! Seriously! I love that. (And now I really want to eat one.)
You’re very kind in all you’ve said about the story. I’m so glad you’re enjoying it. We’ll see if I can revise it to make it stronger — and perhaps longer, though I’m trying to practice writing shorter works these days. My last novel was over 650 pages. Since I’m no George Eliot — and since Austen managed to write masterpieces in far fewer words — I feel I should work on that skill a bit myself!
Are you a writer, as well! Do you post or publish online, or do you write for yourself (or with the goal of publishing traditionally someday)? In any case, happy writing and reading to you!
I am not really a writer no, although it was always one of my childhood dreams to become an author! I’d love to see that dream come true one day, so I guess we’ll see! I’ll have to take a look at your novels, seeing as I enjoy your style. Have a great day, and thanks for the reply!
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Wishing you all the best with your dream of becoming an author — or whatever adventure life holds for you!
Oh I love these installments…. have been checking every day to see if there’s another one! Hoping Wickham is exposed to Georgiana before it’s finished… not sure how but maybe she could overhear him saying something or… I don’t know!
Enjoying D&E’s deepening feelings for each other too.
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Thanks so much, BH! As for Wickham and Georgiana — ah, why do there have to be villains in the world? Well, I guess they are useful in fiction, at least when it comes to developing the plot. When it comes to resolving it, bah! 🙂
So glad you’re enjoying the story, and many thanks for taking the time read and comment!
I love this series! Elizabeth and Darcy are more on point than any other variation I’ve read. I look for new installments each week. This morning, I gleefully dropped everything and curled up in my favorite chair to read this. I do hope you expand this into a book. I’d love to get flashbacks into Darcy’s years as a doctor as well as Elizabeth’s time at home before Manhatten. And Jane as well. What could compel sweet Jane to go for Wickham? I need more there!
Thank you for sharing this with us!
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Sheryl, that is very high praise indeed! Thank you! I’ve certainly not felt “on point” while writing this, but I am at least grateful the story gave you a reason to curl in your favorite chair. That is perhaps the only goal a writer should aspire to when sending a story into the world!
Thanks also for your thoughts on how this story could be expanded. These are all great ideas, and while I don’t know I can, or have the ability, to follow up on them as they deserve, I will certainly keep them in mind.
Many thanks for taking time out of your busy life to read and comment here!
I love this story!! Thank you so much for sharing! Darcy and Elizabeth slowly coming to understand one another and falling for each other is so wet (love the dancing scene).
One paragraph particularly caught my attention in light of current events:
“How long could Americans pretend fascist rhetoric was mere bluster? When would it be come clear that all this talk of superiority and dominance was not, in fact, just talk? War would not remain safely tucked away on other continents—not for long.” Definitely food for thought right now. I love Darcy’s encouragement to Elizabeth of making sure to look for those little moments of beauty and happiness. Thanks again!!
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Many, many thanks, Megan! Like Darcy and Elizabeth, I believe very much in finding those little moments of beauty and happiness. Unlike Elizabeth and Darcy, I cannot dance to save my life! 🙂
When do we get the next part/chapter? I am looking forward to reading it!