Hello Everybody!
It’s release day, and I’m really thrilled to present my latest book: Noblest Intentions!!
For those of you who know my work, you know I sometimes get caught up in complicated plots with intrigue [and sometimes magic]. Not always, but it’s been known to happen 😉
Well, not Noblest Intentions! I was in a very chill mood when I wrote it, and I found the writing process quite soothing, which was nice, because I can get quite intense when I’m producing a book! I’m a slow writer, and I tend to write lots of rough drafts before everything finally comes together. With Noblest Intentions, things fell into place early on, and I am really happy with the result.
It was fortunate that this was the case, since I got a flu in December and then pneumonia in January, so it’s been an uncomfortable few weeks! Luckily, I recovered just in time for the launch, which has to be a good sign!! Yay!! 😀
Excerpt from Chapter 3
Against his better judgment, Darcy climbed in. It was probably a mistake. Still, weighing the possibility of a mistake against the certainty that walking home in icy, wet clothes was downright dangerous, his choice was inescapable. Besides, at this point, the prospect of sheltering from the wind was too much for him to resist.
As soon as the door of the carriage closed, he regretted his decision.
He was acutely conscious of his appearance, stripped as he was of his gentlemanly trappings. Hatless and coatless, his wet shirt pressed close to his skin, his hair plastered to his head, he was sitting in an intimately close space with a young woman whose name he did not even know.
Should he introduce himself? He tried to work out the social niceties. It was deucedly awkward sitting in a carriage without even knowing how to address her, other than ‘madam’. What was the protocol for introducing himself to a lady whose daughter almost drowned in the river? There was no rulebook that could answer that question. It was very awkward. How could he not perform any introductions? One did not generally bring complete strangers into one’s house. It was all highly irregular.
Still, he held back. Was it wise to know her name? To know anything about her at all? It was already too much that he knew she lived on Gracechurch Street. She was a mother, a married woman. From trade. That was more than enough information. He did not want to tempt fate by discovering more.
He had never thought of his carriage as small. Yet at the moment, it felt like the walls were closing in on him. She was sitting much too close for comfort, her sodden clothes pasted to her skin and outlining her figure all too clearly. Even when he did his best not to glance in her direction, he was acutely aware of her. He had held her not very long ago, and she had been nothing like a sack of potatoes. Despite the damp smell of river surrounding them, there was still a hint of her perfume lingering. It weighed on his senses, reminding him of how she had felt in his arms.
So, did he want to know her name? The answer was a resounding no. Without a name, she would remain a stranger forever. That was how it should be. What was the point? As soon as she and her daughter were warm enough, she would return to her husband, and Darcy would never see her again. He had no intention of furthering the acquaintance. Knowing her name was asking for trouble. It was unwise. It was also entirely improper, because he ought not to pursue this preposterous fascination for someone who should not be of interest to him at all.
He looked out of the window, too weary and cold to deal with all this. His mind was growing fuzzy. He had heard that sudden exposure to cold could befuddle a man’s brain. It would certainly explain why he was having such a peculiar reaction to her.
A high-pitched set of giggles broke into his musings, and he turned to look at Margaret in surprise.
“Look at you!” she squealed gleefully, her hands pressed to her mouth.
Her mother grinned as she inspected his hair, while Georgiana was regarding him uncertainly, worried he would take offence. Truth be told, he was glad to see the little girl laughing. He hoped it was a good sign and not an indication she was suffering hallucinations.
“I fail to see what is so funny, Miss Margaret,” he said.
“You look like you have green hair,” she said, giggling even more.
He threw the mother a questioning look.
“Indeed you do,” said the young woman, her eyes dancing. “You look like a sea-creature, all dripping wet, and you have a plant stuck to your head.”
“A plant? Growing on my head? Where?” he said, putting his hand to his head, opening his eyes wide in mock horror. “Why did no one tell me I had plants growing on my head instead of hair?”
Georgina, obviously relieved to see her brother being playful, gave a small giggle of her own. Under normal circumstances, Darcy did not care to be the object of hilarity, but the child’s lips were blue with cold.
He was also shivering and no doubt bluish in color, but he was much larger and he rarely became ill. Unfortunately, he knew that many young children never made it beyond their fifth birthday. He could only hope that little Margaret was strong enough to withstand the plunge.
He reached for the offending article and tossed it onto the wooden boards in an exaggerated gesture, then shook the water from his curls like a dog. This produced the required effect. The child laughed even harder.
“I hate to point out the obvious, madam,” he said to the mother, pleased at the child’s reaction, “but you, too, are dripping wet. Which makes you a sea monster as well.”
“Me, too,” cried the child, entering into the game.
“Can I be a monster as well?” said Georgiana, joining in.
The child eyed her dubiously for a second, then gave a big smile. “Yes. We can pretend your bonnet is an oyster shell.”
The edge of his lips lifted. Just briefly, he was struck by a strange giddy feeling. Something extraordinary had happened today. Between the two of them, he and a young lady had managed to save a child!
As if sensing his thoughts, the mother turned to him. “Thank you for rescuing Margaret. You put your life at risk.”
He gave a quick nod. “I am a strong swimmer. I simply did my duty.”
“Your duty? I think you know it is more than that.” She bathed him in her smile, and he felt a strange warm feeling stir inside him. Her gaze rested on him and his pulse gave a little jolt of something. He was not quite sure what it was, but he supposed it had to be joy at what they had accomplished together.
“I am glad I was there to help,” he said. The jolt was turning into a deep shiver that had nothing to do with her, he realized. He was cold to the bone.
As if guessing his thoughts, she remarked. “We do not yet know if there will be consequences. I have heard that people who fall into freezing water on a day like today…”
As if to complete her thought, a set of shivers wracked his body. Her gaze sharpened, and he cursed inwardly. He ought to have concealed it better.
She unwrapped her blanket from around her shoulders. “Take my blanket, sir,” she said. “I am not cold.”
“You cannot expect me to be so unchivalrous as to take a blanket from a young lady.”
She shook her head. “It is your turn now. Look at me. Am I shivering? Are my lips blue?”
She did not intend anything by it, he was certain, but the temptation to examine her lips had to be avoided at all cost.
I hope you enjoyed this little excerpt. Noblest Intentions is now available on Amazon.
Please comment below. I will be giving away three e-book copies of the novel to three lucky winners!
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So excited to read this. Congratulations on your new release!!
Author
Thank you, SamH!! 🙂
Ooh, I’m very intrigued by this excerpt! Thanks for the sneak peek!
It’s good that your’re well again. And to read that Darcy has a playful side in front of a little girl. I love to read more of the story.
Author
You’re very welcome, Jo!
Great snippet, intriguing to read about a playful Darcy.
Congratulations on the new release
Author
I like a bit of a playful Darcy myself!! Thanks for stopping by, Sarah!
Congrats on the release! Looks like the start of a beautiful friendship for ODC.
Author
I like the idea of them starting with a friendship, Lois!
Sounds intriguing. Thank you for the preview!
Author
You’re very welcome, Iris!
Congratulations on your new book! Looking forward to reading it.
Author
I hope you enjoy it!
This excerpt was intriguing making me want to read more, more, more! So this must be how D&E meet. Will they introduce themselves in the carriage? Will any of them get sick from the exposure? So many questions–I guess I’ll have the read the book to get my answers! Congratulations on publishing another book.
Author
Thank you so much, jeannette!!
Sorry to hear you have been unwell and good wishes for your continued good health x
Thank you for the excerpt, the book is now in my Kindle to be read.
Was it your intent to publish it close to the original Pride & Prejudice published date 28 January 1813?! Only 1 bookclub I know of celebrated the date!
Author
I agree, it’s a strange thing that people don’t celebrate P&P’s publication. Instead, everyone is focused on JA’s birthday. Now that you mention it, I’ll have to celebrate it next year!
I’m happy to hear you have the book on your Kindle!
This was so cute! I look forward to reading the whole thing to find out what happens! I am guessing/hoping the little girl Margaret is NOT Lizzy’s daughter, I bet it’s her little cousin. And I hope Darcy finds out sooner rather than later that Elizabeth is NOT already married! Glad you survived the flu and pneumonia! I wonder if anyone in the carriage will end up with pneumonia?
Author
Awww! I’m glad you liked it, Kaidi!!
I can’t comment on what happens next, of course 😉
Thank you for your good wishes about my recovery. Hahaha! Would I really do that to my favorite characters?
A meet cute with intrigue!! Hope youre feeling better . This seems like a delightful read, personally I love when there is a playful Darcy interacting with children!
Author
Yes, I enjoyed writing this meet cute! 🙂
Nice plot! I like the proposition. I hope I get lucky!
Author
Good luck, tgruy!!
Oooo, I am all about Darcy in a wet shirt! Can’t wait to read it. Glad you are feeling better!
Author
Hahaha! A new kind of wet shirt scene! Well done for spotting it, Danielle!
Yay! Thrilled that you have a new book out! I look forward to reading it.
Author
Thank you, Ginna!!
Well, Darcy does have a great sense of humor! So glad you are feeling better and plot bunnies didn’t hijack you. Thank you for the excerpt and giveaway.
Author
You remember the plot bunnies!! Yes, I usually have to battle them a lot.
Congratulations on the release! Sounds like E&D (possibly) had a very cold and very wet meet-cute. Looking forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing.
Author
Yes, not the best beginning, at least, not physically!
I find myself turning more and more often to the shorter variations, so I appreciate this new release. Of course, as usual, the plot is enticing.
Author
Thank you so much, Betty!!
this is a very compelling excerpt, I have a feeling things are not as they seem, in true Jane Austen fashion
Author
Well, I hope there will be a surprise or two, for Darcy’s sake!
Can’t wait to read it.
I’m excited to read this one! It looks like a great adventure for Darcy and Elizabeth!
Author
It’s a bit of a different beginning, Jenny, isn’t it?
Author
Thanks, Frances!
Glad that you are recovering; the flu and pneumonia can take a long time to get over.
The excerpt presents a lot of questions. Is the “mother” Elizabeth? Is Margaret actually the offspring of the lady? What caused all three to be in icy water? Definitely one to read to discover the answers.
Author
Carol, yes, it’s been difficult but I’m on the mend, at least.
Good questions, of course!! All will be answered!
I’ve been anxiously waiting for this because it looks SO GOOD! Just added it to my Kindle Unlimited 🙂
Author
Lisa, that’s so good to hear! Thank you!
Enjoyed the excerpt and look forward to reading more.
Author
Kind of you to say so, DarcyBennett!!
I am really looking forward to reading this! Thank you for the excerpt and giveaway. Congrats and best wishes on the new release, and let’s hope the rest of 2026 is better for you!
Author
Thank you for your good wishes! I very much hope so!
That was a good snipped to keep one guessing. I can’t wait to read the book!
Author
Happy to hear it, GG!
What s great snippet! I can’t wait to read the book!
Intriguing episode!! Would love to read more. I don’t have kindle or ebook. I’m a paperback fan so when will the paperback release be available?
Author
Thanks for asking, Elizabeth! The paperback will be out early next week.
Wow, this look wonderful. At first I thought Darcy was in the carriage with Mrs. Gardiner, one of my favorite Austen characters. Then I came to realize it was Elizabeth. This is definitely going on my Amazon wish list, and I would love to win an e-book copy. Congratulations on a truly unique spin to a Darcy & Elizabeth story.
Author
Thank you so much, Susan!! 🙂
As always with your writing, I look forward to reading this JAFF. What an enticing snippet. So liked the sea monster conversation! Congrats and best wishes with the release.
Hi Monica, This is such a wonderful excerpt and I wonder where it will lead. Thanks so much for sharing the excerpt. –Leslie
Congrats on the new book