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Excerpt from Drawing Mr. Darcy:

Spring, 1801

“It shall not be Jane,” Mrs. Bennet declared. “And the other girls are too young, Mr. Bennet.”

Thomas Bennet sighed, the missive from his aunt dangling between his fingers. He was not a dependable correspondent, but when Aunt Olivia’s elegant script appeared on one of his letters, he did not delay. Olivia was the youngest of his father’s six siblings and the last remaining member of that generation. Duty alone explained his unusual attentiveness, but she had further earned her claim on his heart.

The terrible summer and relentless winters of ’83 and ‘84 had been devastating; old Mr. Bennet had nearly emptied the estate’s coffers to withstand it and had died unexpectedly less than a year later. Thomas had at last cleared the remaining debts and made some small investments in sheep and new fertilizers and equipment, but it had taken a very gracious subsidy from his aunt to achieve it. She had called it a belated wedding gift and haughtily rejected his offer of repayment, softening only to ask, at first, for frequent news about the estate where she had grown up, and later, for stories about his family.

Thomas was deeply grateful for her assistance in saving Longbourn, but he had to face other hard facts if he intended to keep it solvent. His father, though a good man, had not managed the estate well during his tenure, and it had taken the better part of the last fifteen years to regain lost ground and improve its prospects. Barley and corn grew well and they had experienced some success with other grains. He was working steadily to increase Longbourn’s flock of Southdowns; to do much else was presently beyond his means. He was grateful to be in a stable financial position at last, but Thomas Bennet was tired.

“Mrs. Bennet,” he said patiently, “You of all people should see the benefit of such an arrangement.” He placed the letter on the table next to the settee and lowered himself to the seat beside her. “We have been very fortunate in our daughters, Fanny,” he told her quietly. “You have had very few troubles in childbirth, and our girls are stout and healthy.” He took her hand and covered it with both of his own. “But we must think of the future. I am older than you, and we have no heir.”

The entail. It always came up between them, silent and dark and looming. Fanny turned a crumpled face to his, and her misery tore at his heart. “You are not to blame, my dear,” he reassured her. It had been bitter, but he had come to believe that it was God’s will. It was still possible, of course, that Fanny might again fall with child, but it had been four years since Lydia was born. After a child nearly every other year for so long, he had to concede that their family might be complete.

“We must face facts.” His voice grew firm, determined. “Longbourn’s income is increasing a little every year. We can perhaps hope for two thousand pounds per annum or a bit more in the end, but it will take another few years to achieve it.” He stared straight ahead, his hands clasped together. “Jane is already eleven, and your portion is not large, certainly not sufficient to support you and five young girls in anything like the comfort we now enjoy.” Not if they were to marry within their station. “We’ve done well, Fanny, with what we were given. But it seems unlikely we will be able to put anything more aside for their dowries. Olivia is offering us a respectable fortune for each girl.” Four thousand apiece. He could never put aside such a sum. He felt a twinge of grief for Phillip and Olivia, who had saved so much money for the children who never came.

“It is not fair, Thomas,” Fanny complained. “You have worked so…”

Thomas closed his eyes, frustrated, but retained his wife’s hand as she continued to bemoan their situation. Though they had hoped, had prayed for a son, he was enamored of each of his very different daughters, and they adored their papa. Kitty and Lydia still wandered into his bookroom a few times a week, demanding he read to them. There were few things in life as lovely, Thomas believed, as a little girl’s head curled trustingly against your shoulder. Perfect acceptance. Perfect love. It was something he deeply treasured, particularly as their financial worries continued to drive him and his wife apart.

Fanny had begun to remark that there was no reason to save, as everything was to go to his cousin Collins. He had tried to reason with her. The dower house was on two acres of Bennet land, and because the house was significantly smaller, it would require fewer servants. Still, her income would be much restricted, and saving now would ease her situation then. Fanny was unwilling to give up her present pleasures for the potential of future comfort, however, and frankly, he was losing the heart to argue with her. He enjoyed his books and a bit of port from time to time and had no wish to curtail his own spending there. She had suffered alongside him for thirteen years. How could he deny her the trifles she desired when most of them were for the girls?

Thomas’ wife had never been an intellectual sort of woman, but she had been more sensible once. He had given up the notion of marrying a gentlewoman, for who would have him with his estate so distressed? Fanny was a beautiful young woman with a father who had been a successful country attorney, they got on well enough, and she came with four thousand pounds, the interest of which would be of some help to him. His first purpose, of course, was to marry, to have a son. Early in their marriage, Thomas and Fanny had stayed up late at night in their bed, making grand plans to break the entail as soon as their future son came of age, sell some of the land, invest in the rest, increase the value of the estate overall, create dowries for any girls and hand the estate over to their first-born son, perhaps a little smaller, but in excellent condition. For two hundred years, a Bennet had been master at Longbourn, and in his youthful pride, he had assumed this would always be the case. Now, Thomas thought resignedly, the line would end with him.

Parting with any of his girls would be difficult. However, Aunt Olivia had quite literally saved his inheritance by paying the estate’s largest debts and rescuing them all from genteel poverty. While he had never traveled to her husband’s estate in the north, her financial position was clearly comfortable. Olivia and her husband Phillip were growing older; he could not in good conscience deny their request for company. What she was asking was neither heartless nor unexpected–in fact his aunt clearly meant it as a kindness. They had long wished for a child and were now offering to improve the lot of all five of his. Thomas lifted his wife’s hand to his lips and gave it a gentle kiss. “Although I expect to live for many years, I would not wish to leave any of you without resources when I die.”

“It will not be Jane,” Mrs. Bennet repeated, both stubborn and plaintive. “And the other girls are too young.”

Their discussion was interrupted by raised voices in the front hall, and Thomas rose from his seat to investigate. On his way from the room he retrieved Olivia’s letter and tucked it into his jacket pocket. Fanny remained, crying softly into her handkerchief as he closed the door behind him.

As he approached the front of the house, he suppressed a chuckle. Lizzy, his second daughter, was trying to slip inside. Hill, their faithful retainer, would not allow her to pass. Thomas felt his heart lighten as he watched them dance, the dark-haired, brown-eyed girl feinting right, then left, soft taps from her sturdy little half-boots sounding on the marble mixing with the gentle swish of muslin. Hill deftly matched every step.

“Please, Mr. Hill?” she pleaded winningly. “Papa will know what he is!”

“You may neither bring that thing inside nor muddy the floors, Miss Lizzy,” Hill responded evenly. “Your mother would not like it.”

Elizabeth bit her bottom lip and considered that a moment before tilting her head to one side and saying, simply, “Pleeeease?”

Hill shook his head, nary a white hair out of place. Thomas Bennet remained still, imagining his faithful retainer valiantly suppressing a smile. He was not as practiced at such things, and as he watched his daughter, a faint smile lingered upon his lips.

“Papa!” Lizzy called eagerly as she spied him and bounced up and down on her toes. At her call, Hill moved aside, and Thomas took in the entire picture. The spring sunlight lit the doorway behind her. Elizabeth’s bonnet was missing. Her dark-chocolate ringlets shone with coppery highlights, but they were half askew. The ruffled hem of her skirt was soiled with dirty water and dripping on the floor, yet she smiled widely, revealing a small set of straight white teeth. Thomas Bennet was certain he had never seen anything more charming. She directed her eyes to her boots and then up to his own appraising gaze, a warm expression of hope on her face. It fell a little when he shook his head once, indicating she should remain where she was, but she recovered quickly.

“Look!” Elizabeth cried, “Isn’t he beautiful?” She turned an unwilling, dark, long-bodied creature over in her palm to display its orange belly, holding her hands up so he could see. “What is it?”

Thomas moved his eyes from his daughter to the wriggling amphibian. “Lissotriton vulgaris, my dear. A smooth newt. Rather common around these parts, but stunning, no?”

“A smooth newt,” Lizzy repeated, entranced with both the word and the animal. “Lissot vulgar?”

Thomas felt his smile stretch into one that matched his child’s. “Lissotriton vulgaris.” Lizzy repeated it correctly, nodding solemnly and whispering it to herself several times. One thin finger carefully stroked the orange skin before she turned him over.

“Now,” Thomas said firmly, “does a newt live in a house?”

Lizzy again lifted her wide, dark eyes to his, and this time she appeared abashed. He noticed, as he always did, her thick, black lashes and the flecks of gold illuminating her irises. She had his mother’s eyes. Lizzy’s sisters all took after their own mother, blonde and blue-eyed like the Gardiners, but apart from her Wilmot eyes, Elizabeth was a Bennet through and through.

Without another word, she slipped back outside, and Thomas knew she was returning her new friend to the exact place from which she had taken him. Despite her impetuous nature, Elizabeth was a good girl. Kind. Compassionate. He nodded at Hill, silently thanking the man for standing guard. Fanny would have given the girl a scolding out of all proportion for the crime of dripping a little water on the floor. The thought elicited a sigh. His wife was worried and unhappy, and though she loved all her girls, she had never understood Elizabeth’s exuberant curiosity. The more Lizzy’s behavior deviated from quiet Jane’s, the more critical Fanny became. Hill exited the room in search of a maid to clean the small muddy puddle on the threshold, and Thomas moved down the hall to his book room, hands clasped behind his back, head down, further considering his aunt’s request.

Fanny was correct that Mary, Catherine, and Lydia were too young to leave the family. Lydia was not yet five. Jane, close to twelve, was old enough, but most comfortable at home and in familiar surroundings; she would be miserable away from Longbourn. Though Thomas had not seen his aunt in many years, he knew enough from her letters to judge that gentle Jane, while level-headed and bright, would wilt in the presence of Olivia’s keen intelligence and sharp speech. Elizabeth was the Bennet daughter most like him. She was at once her mother’s constant target and growing into his favorite child. That posed a problem of its own. He should not have favorites among his girls. Heaven help Elizabeth should Fanny ever discover such a thing.

Lizzy was a lively sprite. She had a sense of adventure and a glib tongue to match Olivia’s, not to mention a wit that begged for the more formal education his aunt had promised. She would be ten in May. Not too young. He stood at the door to his bookroom for a moment and heard Fanny begin to fuss about the mess in the entry. Very well, he thought. Lizzy it will be.

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