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WIP Chapter 7 — 9 Comments

  1. I loved it! I am afraid Elizabeth is getting in deeper than she thinks, but hopefully Jane’s (quick) arrival will help. I liked how you worded Mr. Darcy’s disapproval.

  2. What Darcy should have added is that Elizabeth was more suited to him!
    I hope she doesn’t act too enamoured of Bingley and that Jane arrives soon and attracts his attention making him see that Elizabeth is not who he needs after all.

  3. ‘Tis a dangerous game you are planning to play, my lady. Bingley can easily fall in love and when you deny his affections…Bingley may run back to London and never meet Jane. When is she due home?

    This will be interesting. And when Darcy comes to realize she is perfect for him, will he deny his interest as Bingley “saw” her first?

  4. Ah, I love this and have to back track. I bet Mr. Darcy is referring to Elizabeth as unsuitable for other reasons than family connections. I like the way he left the working open. Bingley is right for Jane, but Elizabeth would grow bored since she likes to read, likes mind challenges like CHESS< AND Bingley does not care for those. This is so much fun to see Elizabeth instead of Jane going to Netherfield. I did not think she would ride a horse over there.

  5. Where is Jane when we need her? At least Elizabeth was smart in avoiding riding horseback to Netherfield.

    And Mr. Darcy’s “disapproval” was carefully worded…. If Miss Bennet is “completely unsuitable” for Mr. Bingley, perhaps she may be quite suitable for another gentleman???? 😉

    A wonderful story–I cannot wait until Friday!! Thank you for sharing it with us, Kara 😀

    Warmly,
    Susanne 🙂

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