Shall We Dance? An extract from Ardently

 

Shall We Dance?

It is nearly the party season, after all, but as we now well know, a dance between Mr Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet is never a simple matter. Whether in print or played out on the screen, they are always full of delicious tension, unspoken desires, much embarrassment and confusion. Don’t you just love them?

 

In this extract from my first book Ardently, Lizzy has been publicly spurned by her previous suitor, the dandified Mr Yorke and is having to endure being the centre of gossip and what’s worse-she has now been sitting down for several dances in a row! Luckily, a tall, handsome man from Derbyshire is about to enter the room.


Elizabeth was becoming low as she remained seated and considered changing her mind about Mrs Mountford’s offer to take her home, but then rescue came in the most surprising form; a familiar and now most beloved form. He walked towards her with a firm and determined tread and bowed. He took her hand from her lap, brought her to her feet and took her to the set. Not just to the set in fact, but the front of it, without saying a word.

"I am your humble servant, willing to outrage you at a moment's notice

“I am your humble servant, willing to outrage you at a moment’s notice”

“What on earth are you doing here?”

Mr Darcy’s brow furrowed. “Dancing, it would seem.”

She laughed. “I’m sorry, that was rude. I meant I did not know you were even returned to Bath.”

“I arrived just after you had collected Georgiana. I decided very much on a whim to join you.”

Their hands touched in the dance, a quick clasp. Elizabeth’s heart hammered so loudly in her chest that she was sure he would hear it. They were separated briefly by the movements and then returned. Another quick clasp was required and she wished for a thousand more of them. “You ought to be careful, Mr Darcy, I wouldn’t want to sully your impeccable reputation. I find myself the subject of gossip tonight.”

“I have heard it. Gossip is a transient, ephemeral thing, Miss Bennet. One subject may be forsaken for another quite easily. I have always tried to avoid being the object of it myself, but tonight I see the benefit of perhaps creating some. I very rarely dance. I intend to dance twice with you. The second being the supper dance. Do you think that might suffice?”

He was a dear, dear man. How had she ever thought badly of him? Elizabeth cocked her head to the side. “Hmm, I am not sure. If you wanted to keep tongues truly busy perhaps you ought help me on with my cloak and maybe kiss my hand when you bid me goodnight.”

It was brazen, forward of her. She saw his jaw twitch and feared that while he had meant to be merely gallant, she had positively flirted in return. She cursed herself, she was not good at flirting; teasing, contradicting, provoking, on the other hand, all those things she excelled at!

He was silent for a good long while before quietly replying, “gladly”.

She smiled at the floor, embarrassed. “Do you know, I once promised never to dance with you, and now I have done so, not just once, but twice!”

"I quite delighted in despising you."

“I quite delighted in despising you.”

“Did you really hate me so much?”

Her head shot up again and she gave him a grave look. “I’m afraid I did. I quite delighted in despising you. You were such a great outlet for all my general annoyances. In fact, it is very inconvenient to not be able to hate you anymore. You make yourself far too agreeable these days, Mr Darcy.”

He looked a little relieved to have her tease him again, it felt like safer, more familiar ground. “I beg your pardon, Miss Bennet. Is there a way in which I might make amends? Some way I might offend you? I am your humble servant, willing to outrage you at a moments’ notice. I could perhaps stand around silently in the corner and ignore you for a full half hour? Oh, now I regret asking you to dance, you would have much preferred it if I had slighted you.”

“You did not ask me to dance.” She pointed out.

“Did I not?” He was thoughtful for a moment. “No, I have rather dragged you up here against your will. I hope you will not take it as further proof of my ungentlemanlike behaviour, or my selfish disdain for others?”

She was sombre then, pained and saddened. “Please do not remind me of what I said back then. I have long been ashamed of those words.”

He became serious too. “You should not be! What did you say of me that I did not deserve, richly deserve? Your accusations were ill-founded, based on mistaken premises but my behaviour towards you was unpardonable. I cannot think of it without abhorrence. You can scarcely conceive how your words have tortured me all these years. The turn of your countenance I shall never forget, as you said that I could not have addressed you in any possible way that would induce you to accept me. I have long wanted the opportunity to apologise.”

“These recollections will not do at all,” she said firmly. “I should hope we have both improved a little in civility since then. You should learn a little of my philosophy, think only of the past as it gives you pleasure.”

The dance stopped. They had joined it late and so it was over quickly and Elizabeth was dismayed. He looked as if he might have said more. She wanted to say more, but all the couples had begun to move away. He took her hand to lead her back to Mrs Mountford. Elizabeth was not sure if she imagined it, but liked to think he had squeezed her fingers a little as they fell into step together. Oh how frustrating it was to be a woman in such circumstances. Why was she not allowed to lead him into a dark corner, to reach up and whisper in his ear; to tell him of how her feelings had changed since that awful day in Kent, to tell him that now, rather than his being the last man in the world she could be prevailed on to marry, he was the only man she could possibly marry.

He politely enquired after her comfort and suggested she might like some punch. She nodded in reply. As Mr Darcy left, Georgiana hurried up to her, her face shining with happiness and looking prettier than Elizabeth had ever seen her.

“How lovely to see you and my brother dancing, Elizabeth. You look so well together.”

“It was very kind of him to come to my rescue. I was feeling quite ostracised.”

“I think it was borne out of more than kindness.”

"Uou would have much preferred it if I had slighted you.”

“You would have much preferred it if I had slighted you.”

Elizabeth looked sternly at her. “Now, do not run on so, imagining things that are not likely to come to pass.” As she spoke she realised it was a warning to herself also. Mr Darcy’s words to her had been intimate, they had flirted it was true, but still she was not sure of him. They had spoken of the past, not the future. She still didn’t dare to dream, fearing the crushing disappointment that might follow.

Georgiana continued to smile at her. “I am just saying you are quite a striking couple, is all. I never saw him dance with Anne. Not once. And yet he is such a good dancer.”

“He is.” Elizabeth conceded.

“You don’t know how much pleasure it would give me to call you sister.”

“Georgiana! Enough!” Elizabeth cried, but then with a raised brow and a mischievous glint her eye, added “goodness me, if this is the response a single dance gives rise to, I hate to think what you will be like when he takes my hand for the supper dance.”

Eyes wide, Georgiana was about to break into further raptures when she was quieted sternly by Elizabeth due to the arrival of Miss Bingley.

“Eliza, my dear. How are you baring up? Frederick Yorke has asked for my hand for the next, the impudent scoundrel. I couldn’t say no of course. I wouldn’t want to sit down for the rest of the evening, but I shall not enjoy it, on your account, I assure you.” Despite these words and seemingly in direct contradiction of them, she turned around and gave Mr Yorke a teasing wave.

Mr Yorke wandered warily across the ballroom in their direction. As he reached them, Elizabeth felt the comforting, reassuring presence of Mr Darcy draw closer too, till he was beside her. One hand passed her the promised glass of punch, his other hovered with a gossamer touch over the small of her back. She felt his protection, his concern. He greeted Yorke tersely who paused in their company only long enough to give Elizabeth a brief nod, before he spirited Miss Bingley away.51wofyi1tbl1


I hope you all enjoyed it. I had fun thinking of all the different variations I’ve read these past couple of years and some of my favourite ballroom scenes, what’s yours? I can’t imagine writing a book without at least one in.

Have a lovely day and party on.

 

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    • Anji on November 15, 2016 at 3:51 am
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    I’ve heard such good things about Ardently, Caitlin, and this scene just reinforces that. You’re quite right in saying that a variation wouldn’t be complete without a ball but I’ve read so many that it’s almost impossible to single just one out. I will give a mention to one from Abigail’s book Mr. Darcy’s Noble Connections, though.

      • Caitlin Williams on November 15, 2016 at 4:49 am
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      Yes Anji, I remember that one well. It’s one of my favourite Abigail Reynolds’ books

        • KateB on November 15, 2016 at 9:28 am
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        Anji, I love Ardently as much as I love Mr. Darcy’s Noble Connections. Both are amazing stories. 🙂

    • Glynis on November 15, 2016 at 7:33 am
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    Lovely! I had this on my wish list but was a bit unsure of the events between Hunsford and their later meeting. However I loved The Coming of Age of Elizabeth Bennet and read some lovely reviews and I have now bought it and look forward to reading it especially after reading this excerpt. Thank you Caitlin.

    • Caitlin Williams on November 15, 2016 at 8:32 am
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    Thanks Glynis. I know people are sometimes unsure because it is set quite a while after the original events of P & P and because of what has happened with Darcy in the meantime, but it is largely light on angst and heavy on romance, I promise.

    • Carole in Canada on November 15, 2016 at 9:07 am
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    Oh I loved this scene…actually, I loved the whole book ‘ardently’!!!! I first bought it in e-book format but that wasn’t enough. I bought the paperback as well! Now I plan to buy the paperback format of The Coming of Age of Elizabeth Bennet! Another gem I was gifted with in e-book format!

    As Anji says, I too have read many books with such wonderful balls that it is hard to pick one…this one certainly stands out!

      • Caitlin Williams on November 15, 2016 at 11:23 am
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      Thanks Carole. I hadn’t read it myself in ages, and it was nice to revisit it. Whenever I watch the Netherfield Ball scene in the 1995 mini-series, I have to rewind it and watch it a couple of times over, Darcy and Lizzy should dance more often, I think.

    • Debbie Blackman on November 15, 2016 at 10:03 am
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    Two new variation books for me to read and love. Thank you all for mentioning them

      • Caitlin Williams on November 15, 2016 at 11:34 am
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      Thanks Debbie. Hope you get a chance to read them

    • Kathy Berlin on November 15, 2016 at 10:07 am
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    I love every word of this book and read it often. Wonderful.

      • Caitlin Williams on November 15, 2016 at 11:40 am
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      Thanks Kathy. It was a scene I really enjoyed writing – Lizzy is all ‘half agony, half hope’.

    • Theresa M on November 15, 2016 at 10:07 am
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    Ardently is one of my very favorite JAFF”S Thanks for the reminder!

      • Caitlin Williams on November 15, 2016 at 11:42 am
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      Thanks for visiting , Theresa. It was a nice little visit down memory lane for me.

  1. I’m hooked by this scene!

      • Caitlin Williams on November 15, 2016 at 11:46 am
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      Thanks for visiting, Serena. Glad you enjoyed it.

    • Mary on November 15, 2016 at 1:01 pm
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    Caitlin,it’s been a while,but I read and loved Ardently and can heartily recommend it.

    I read TCOAOEB during the Summer,and,well…..
    words fail me! It was such an emotional roller coaster of a read,the reviews are so overwhelming in their praise,and such praise is undoubtedly merited.

    If memory serves,there’s a scene in thus story where Elizabeth is asked to dance by Mr Burton.

    The heartbreaking thing however is that had she been single,she was confident that she had just met her future husband!

    This Mr Burton was the ideal partner fur Elizabeth Bennet,and she could imagine the conversations, walks, courtship request a d eventual marriage proposal.

    Alas it was but to be,as she now held the name of Mrs E.Darcy,unloved,unwanted and her dreams of having a lover,partner and friend would ever remain unfulfilled.

    Yes,such is the picture Caitlin painted in TCOAOEB!
    I absolutely adored it and can highly recommend it!

      • Caitlin Williams on November 15, 2016 at 3:22 pm
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      Ah Mary, that’s a VERY different ballroom scene isn’t it? One that took me a VERY long time to write LOL.
      Thanks for your lovely comments, and for stopping by.

  2. I so enjoyed Ardently; in fact, I believe that it’s due for a re-read!

    Thank you so much, Caitlin!! I absolutely loved this scene!

    Warmly,
    Susanne 🙂

      • Caitlin Williams on November 15, 2016 at 3:23 pm
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      Thanks Susanne.

    • Dung on November 15, 2016 at 1:31 pm
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    Love that excerpt! Brings back memories of reading this wonderful novel! Hope you have another project in the works! Thank you for your wonderful contribution to the JAFF community! Love all your books so far and can’t wait for the next one!

      • Caitlin Williams on November 15, 2016 at 3:19 pm
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      Thanks Dung, for the very kind words. Lots of projects for next year. Hopefully a good meaty book, and one novella. And keep following us here at Austen Variations – there just might be some pretty special stuff happening in 2017.

    • Lynn Bischoff on November 15, 2016 at 3:31 pm
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    I loved Ardently and your post makes me think it is time to reread it. Thank you for such a great book.

      • Caitlin Williams on November 15, 2016 at 8:37 pm
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      Thanks Lynn

    • Laurie May Aquino on November 15, 2016 at 6:52 pm
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    Awwww that’s so sweet 🙂 Now I’m even more excited to read it, it’s already in my TBR

      • Caitlin Williams on November 15, 2016 at 8:39 pm
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      I hope you get to it soon. It has a warm, fuzzy, Christmassy vibe, so a good time to read it.

  3. I recently ordered this book from amazon and look forward to enjoying it. Especially after reading this excerpt!

      • Caitlin Williams on November 16, 2016 at 10:59 am
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      Thanks Janis, hope you enjoy it

    • Sheila L. Majczan on December 11, 2016 at 9:55 pm
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    You know, you must know how much I love Ardently and I whispered to Claudine while in NYC that your Coming of Age is in consideration as my favorite book from 2016…truly. Both books deserve to be read again and again.

    • Sheila L. Majczan on December 11, 2016 at 9:55 pm
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    I can’t select a dance scene but this one was sweet to read.

  4. Hi Caitlin– After reading the above extract and all the wonderful reviews at Amazon, I am so upset that it’s not available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. I hope you/publisher will release again very soon. I am so much looking forward to reading the full story!

      • Caitlin Williams on January 1, 2021 at 11:19 am
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      Hi. Thanks for your interest. Getting Ardently back on Amazon is in my huge Todo list:) I’ll try and let everyone know when it’s back up.

      Happy new year

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