Persuasion 200: Impromptu Ball at Uppercross – Jane Odiwe

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The party at the Great House was sometimes increased by other company. The neighbourhood was not large, but the Musgroves were visited by every body, and had more dinner parties, and more callers, more visitors by invitation and by chance, than any other family. They were more completely popular. The girls were wild for dancing; and the evenings ended, occasionally, in an unpremeditated little ball. From Chapter Six.



windowAnne soon settled into the differing ways of the Uppercross houses, and though she managed for the most part to appease both parties, there were times when she felt she needed to draw on all her reserves of diplomacy and skills of negotiation. When the two houses came together, there were often hints of frustration and little niggles between the two parties, but with Anne to smooth ruffled nerves along the way, these small disputes were soon settled and quickly resolved.

The Musgroves at the Great House were social creatures, and were very popular in the neighbourhood, generous with invitations to friends and family alike. Anne had not been staying long when some of the Musgroves’ cousins were invited to dinner. The Hayters were a family of neighbouring farmers, unpolished and unrefined by the Musgroves’ standards, respectable but not wealthy, yet were always sure of a warm welcome at Uppercross.

The entire family, Mr and Mrs Hayter, and their six children arrived for a noisy party one evening, having walked the two miles from home. Charles, the eldest, was just beginning to look about for a wife, and seemed to have made up his mind already, Anne thought, as she noticed his preference for Henrietta’s company. He chose to follow her to the table, and though Louisa engaged him just as much with her high-spirited conversation, sitting on his other side, Anne observed his expression seemed more receptive and his gaze lingered longer when upon the countenance of his elder and prettier cousin. Henrietta had taken particular care with her hair and dress, this evening. She wore a high-waisted gown of delicate blue with a wide ribbon tied as a sash, and more silk threaded through her curls. Henry passed her a plate of oyster patties, and when she raised her slender arms to take one, Anne noticed he could hardly take his eyes from her.

‘Mr Hayter has the curacy of Winthrop now, Miss Anne,’ said Mrs Musgrove, speaking of her sister’s eldest child.

Anne looked up to see Charles Hayter looking slightly uncomfortable at being the main topic of conversation, and when his mother spoke up, she felt rather sorry for him as she launched into the sort of indulgent praise only a besotted mother can bestow.

‘My Charles has come home from university where he was an excellent scholar, Miss Elliot,’ said Mrs Hayter, ‘and now he is established as a fine clergyman and gentleman. He has not a residence of his own just yet, and must remain at home for the time being, but we have high hopes for his advancement.’

‘Congratulations, Mr Hayter,’ Anne replied. ‘I wish you much success in your chosen profession.’

Charles looked up and smiled. Anne was always very kind to him.

‘It is a pity that Dr Shirley cannot help you,’ said Mr Musgrove, raising a glass of wine, ‘though I suppose he must retire one day, and then perhaps you’ll be rector here at Uppercross!’

‘I would like that,’ Charles answered looking into Henrietta’s eyes. ‘Indeed, that would be a living I should desire very much.’

‘And then all he should need is a wife for his rectory,’ spoke up one of the younger Hayter girls, who winked at Henrietta and smirked at another sister.

rec‘Uppercross rectory is a handsome house,’ Louisa remarked, ‘but surely you must have greater ambition than to be the rector in a country village, cousin Charles.’ Louisa, in a gown of butter yellow, gave him a challenging look, and smiled, showing her beautiful mouth and pearly teeth.

‘Promotion depends upon so much more than just plain desire, Louisa,’ he answered, blushing rather red. ‘I might wish to be a rector in London town itself, but unless I happen to bump into the Bishop, and he sees for himself what a splendid fellow I am, then I am afraid the hope of instant riches and a curacy in the city is rather a poor one.’

‘I hope you are come to perform for us, Charles, after dinner,’ said Henrietta, changing the subject. ‘We love to hear you play upon the pianoforte.’

‘But then there will not be enough gentlemen to dance, Henrietta,’ said Louisa, quickly answering. ‘And last time you promised you would dance with me first, Charles. Perhaps Anne will play! Oh, do say you will.’

‘Yes! How we love to watch you perform, Miss Anne!’ Mrs Musgrove cried. ‘Your fingers are so nimble, and there is no one who plays so well.’

anneAnne, who felt some relief at not having to dance herself, said she would be very happy to play for them all, and as soon as the business of eating was over, she made her way to the instrument. Anne was a very competent performer, and used to playing at Uppercross and Kellynch for the benefit of those who loved to dance. Once upon a time she’d loved dancing, and now as upon many other occasions, the recollections of those dances, which had made her heart sing with joy, came back to her with a sense of great sadness.

Frederick Wentworth, the perfect partner, and all his handsome good looks immediately came to mind as she played The Soldier’s Adieu. At Kellynch, she’d copied out the music in her own hand, substituting the word ‘soldier’ for ‘sailor’ in every instance, but being careful to sing it when she was alone. During the summer of 1806 when they’d first danced together at the assembly rooms, that period of felicity when they’d become acquainted before falling head over heels in love, Anne had never experienced such pleasure as she had dancing with her beloved. As she played, she saw him in her mind’s eye, dressed in formal attire, black breeches encasing strong limbs, a glimpse of pale satin waistcoat as he moved, and the high collar of his coat exaggerating his height and the breadth of his shoulders. His dark hair fell in glossy curls across his brow, and with eyes sparkling in candlelight, his mouth was curved in a generous smile, as he took her tiny hand and led her down the set.

Watching the others, she tried to banish him from her thoughts and concentrate on the music. Louisa was begging Mr Hayter for a second dance, but when she saw him glance across at Henrietta, she recognised the look of admiration as one she’d witnessed herself, all that time ago. Frederick Wentworth could convey so much with a glance or a penetrating look, Anne remembered, and seeing Mr Hayter behave in a similar manner as he looked at Miss Musgrove stirred up so many memories she thought were safely buried.

‘I promised to dance with Henrietta next,’ he addressed Louisa firmly, taking the former’s arm and leading her away.

Henrietta blushed with pleasure, looking up at Charles with a smile and let him direct her to a place opposite him.

‘Louisa,’ said her brother, ‘Mary said she wanted a rest if you’d like to be my partner.’

‘I am not certain that I am ready to sit this one out,’ said Mary, standing firm. ‘I was feeling fatigued, but my spirits are quite recovered now. However, I do not want to dance if I am not wanted. If you would rather dance with your sister, then so be it.’

Charles Musgrove raised an eyebrow with so slight a movement that most people would have not registered the action or the look passing between brother and sister at that moment.

‘Oh, do not trouble yourself, Mary,’ answered Louisa. ‘You can keep your husband, and I will share our cousin as the only eligible gentleman here. It is a pity we do not know more young men in the neighbourhood. Poor cousin Charles, we shall quite wear him out between us, shall we not, Henrietta?’

One of the younger children, Henry, a boy of twelve, and tall for his age stepped forward and held out his hand. ‘I will dance with you, if you’ll have me, dearest cousin,’ he said, bowing very formally, and making the company laugh.

DSCN1707Louisa graciously accepted and the company lined up once more. Anne started to play another country dance, a lively tune to dispel the awkward atmosphere fast descending upon the room. The music was fast paced, the company kicking up their heels, and clapping their hands, as they hopped and twirled, swinging their partners until the candles guttered in the breeze made by their frenzied capers. Mrs Musgrove clapped along, delighted to see her family entering into the spirit of the dance. Charles and Henrietta clasped hands, gazing into one another’s eyes, Henry and Louisa danced tolerably well, and Mary collapsed into her seat before the end, leaving her husband to muddle on his own as best as he could. The rest danced as if their lives depended upon it, and Louisa flirted with her eyes, whenever she thought Mr Hayter was looking.

Anne saw Louisa watching her sister and Charles covertly. Though she’d tried to be bright and animated, and continued to tease her cousin, her expression gave everything away. There was more than a hint of disappointment in the way Louisa bit her lip, when she glanced towards the couple, and after a while she did not attempt to ask for another dance. Anne couldn’t help but wonder if Louisa’s discontent was more likely as a result of simply being passed over in favour of her sister. She did not think Louisa really liked Mr Hayter as much as Henrietta seemed to, but was naturally put out when she was not the clear choice of her cousin. Miss Musgrove danced every dance with Charles, and when they weren’t dancing they were sitting down together. There were more than a few looks passing between the elder members. Recalling a conversation she’d had with Mrs Musgrove, Anne was not entirely convinced that the parents were so keen for an alliance with the Hayters, but if Henrietta liked him, and it seemed that was the case, they would not stand in their way. 

Anne considered how very different the reaction of her own family had been to the thought of an alliance with the man she loved. Their only consideration had been whether Frederick could bring money, status, and the required bloodline to the marriage. Her thoughts and feelings had never entered into it, and as for Frederick, he’d been snubbed and dismissed, and she felt the burning shame, once more, as she considered how he’d been treated by her father. Anne could not imagine how simple life must be for others who were allowed to follow their hearts and marry the man of their choice. 

 Despite dwelling on these melancholy events, Anne rallied as she always did, happy to see the Musgrove girls having fun, and remembering some of the joyous memories of her past with bittersweet pleasure. At the end of the evening, as the Hayters departed, Anne observed Henrietta rush out to say goodbye when she thought no one else was looking, running after Charles to whisper something in his ear. Louisa hung back, but she managed to smile at Anne who took her hand and squeezed it before leading them back inside.

 

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  1. Such a bittersweet episode, Jane. Just the right touch of melancholy. I really liked how Charles Hayter brings out so many reactions in different people. Really lovely.

    1. Thank you, Monica-I’m so glad you liked it!

    • Linda Shen on September 27, 2014 at 8:08 am
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    Yes, Jane, I enjoy the reading, I like Anne can smooth the hold cloud of people, young and old, even the man were like her very much, what is name of Anne’s lover, is he there too, I will like to read, what is their feel about each other, did they jealous other people’s happiness.

    1. Thank you, Linda-Captain Wentworth isn’t there yet, but that would be an interesting episode to write with both their points of view!

    • Mari on September 27, 2014 at 8:17 am
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    There was almost a dreamlike quality to this chapter. It was so lovely, and so sad at the same time. Anne is a wraith haunting her own life because of the actions of those surrounding her. Even those who like her very much have placed so many expectations on her. She is expected to wander through life doing all the heavy lifting for everyone else, while they enjoy the life they are denying her. What a burden it must be to be a peacemaker! Mary is so prickly and haughty, just like her sister, Elizabeth, and Sir Walter. Mary is like an oyster; she is forever irritating her life and everyone else’s, to show what a pearl she is. She has very little self respect, and entirely too much pride and arrogance. She has never learned to think of anyone but her self. At the same time she has never learned to respect and value herself, so she fancies herself ill to get the attention and affection she is starving for. Anne, who deserves everyone’s respect, gets it, but at a terrible cost. She is poked and prodded to handle everything unpleasant, but is never cherished for the intelligent, diplomatic and loving woman that she is. She is the means for everyone else to have peace and quiet, but has little of her own. Of everyone gathered at the Musgrove’s home, only Charles Hayter appreciates her for who and what she is. Everyone else, as usual, is using her. The Musgroves want her to take care of Mary and give them peace and quiet, the younger Musgroves want her to play music so they can dance. Despite that, they are a pleasant loving family. The young sisters are merely guilty of being young and selfish, not of any actual malice, while Mary is actually maliciously in the way she uses imaginary illness to shape and control her environment, and the people in it. Everyone is weak in some way, except for Anne. She is the strong one, but oddly no one seems to see her that way. If they think of her, it is only as poor Anne, or Anne who exists to serve their whims and caprices Your Anne is one I like very much. She has character and a resilience that I had never realized before, or appreciated. Thank you for making me see the Anne that I didn’t see before. She is a strong woman with a great deal of character, and an amazing capacity for love. She proves that every day of her life. I am looking forward to the happy ever after! You are doing an amazing job with the characters, as always. I am seeing them through new eyes, and seeing things that I didn’t see before. You have convinced me to see Anne as she really is, and to appreciate her. For years I was as guilty as her family in not valuing her as I should have. Besides being a gifted author, you have a gift for making us see people as they really are, instead of who we thought, or assumed them to be. You would have made an amazing and terrifying psychologist or detective! You balance Sherlock Holmes, Sigmund Feud, Jane Austen and magically give us Jane Odiwe. I don’t know how you do it, but however you do it, don’t stop.

    1. Well said, Mari. I agree totally. Jane Odiwe is such a subtle, talented writer!

      1. Monica-you’re making me blush!

    2. She is the strong one, but oddly no one seems to see her that way.

      That sentence sums up Anne so well, Mari! Yes, they are all quite selfish, aren’t they, but as you say, it’s not malicious just a lot of thoughtlessness and people putting their own needs first.
      Thank you so much for taking the trouble to write your thoughts and for your very kind words!

  2. This was such a lovely read. Thank you so very much for posting.

    1. Thank you, Barbara-I’m so pleased you enjoyed it!

    • Deborah on September 27, 2014 at 9:41 am
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    Jane, what an absolutely wonderful chapter! Anne’s recollections of Wentworth were so clear. I always knew why she wouldn’t dance with another, but here you showed its. tenacity so clearly and vividly. Of course, she would notice the looks between Charles Hatter and Henrietta, with insight and fondness, but momentarily, melancholy but fond memories. And Louisa, there is jealousy. She wants someone to pay attention to her, after all she is older and feels she should be married first. And then there’s Mary. She is so self-centered (The Elliott Pride) she can’t even share her husband with his sister and then can’t even finish the dance.

    What a beautiful piece with such emotion. Looking forward to reading about when Wentworth is there. Thank you for a wonderful post to begin my Saturday.

    1. Thank you, Deborah-it’s very sad to think of Anne giving up on her dancing, isn’t it? I really enjoyed thinking about all of their behaviour and how they would react to the different situations – thank you so much for your thoughts and your kind words!

    • junewilliams7 on September 27, 2014 at 2:06 pm
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    Excellent look at the Musgrove and Hayter families together. Sweet Anne, to be peacemaker and diplomat. I still wonder what Charles Musgrove was thinking when he settled for Mary – what went through his mind when Anne refused him and he went for the next sister.

    Thank yuo for the lovely dance!

    1. Thank you, June-I’m glad you enjoyed it! I always imagine that Charles knew he didn’t really have a chance with Anne, but at least if he married her sister he would still get to see her and spend time with her.

  3. Lovely, Jane – sweet and bittersweet mixed together. Anne is very observant of the interaction between the Musgrove sisters. That competition will be most interesting when a certain Captain comes on the scene!

    1. Thank you, Abigail! Yes, those dynamics in a scene will be an interesting episode or two to write.

  4. How the dynamics will change when Cpt. Wentworth arrives on the scene!

  5. Yes, lots of tension, Shannon-great episodes to write!

  6. Beautifully written as always, Jane. Your descriptive writing paints a vivid scene of the swirl of the dance (the guttering candles being my favourite bit of that!), and Anne’s melancholy is perfectly shown. How bittersweet indeed for her.

    It was also lovely to get some background on Charles Hayter’s attraction to Henrietta, and I liked how you showed Louisa’s character too in her reactions. As for Mary… big sigh…

    A lovely read!

  7. Thank you, Cassandra-I love indulging in a bit of descriptive writing. I can never resist writing Mary-she’s such a great character, even if she’s a pain in the neck!

    • Sheila L. M. on September 29, 2014 at 12:55 pm
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    I agree with Monica’s comments as to this being melancholy and bittersweet. And I agree with so many who point out how no one really sees Anne’s worth but use her as a tool to get what they what; be it a change in Mary’s behavior or a chance to dance.

    Louisa is interesting, in that we can see how she desires a beau of her own here but we who know this story also know how she pushes Henrietta to visit Aunt Hayter’s house during their long walk with Capt. Wentworth and Charles. So she thinks she has a beau in the captain and thus can further Henrietta’s attachment.

    Sad thoughts of how Anne, at this point, feels life has passed her by and so has to be content to be of service to others as she is not one to sit in the corner and pine openly. Later, in private or in her bedtime thoughts she can have all those “what if” and “only if” thoughts.

    Oh, how I am longing for happier times for her! Thank you for this enlightening episode.

  8. Thank you, Sheila! Yes, I think Louisa wants to be in love, and probably doesn’t mind -it could be any young man that happens along ; ) know just what you mean about happier times – perhaps we should have a few more flashbacks with Captain Wentworth!

  9. Yes, I loved this story very much. Dancing, music and courtship intersperse with Anne’s past courtship with Frederick are the very things I enjoyed reading. When a certain someone shows up, things will certainly be a lot more interesting.

    1. Thank you, Sylvia, for the kind words-yes, can’t wait for Frederick to show up!

    • Kathy on September 29, 2014 at 11:42 pm
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    I enjoyed this chapter very much. Although the Musgrove sisters are competing with each other for Charles Hayter’s attentions, I am finding it is not quite as vicious or sniping as it might have been with Elizabeth Elliot involved somehow. Still although Anne is not the heroine in the Musgrove family, she is accepted and valued. It is sad that she is just willing to play piano for everyone’s enjoyment, but the Musgroves don’t seem to take her for granted as her own family does. (I also was thinking of my own indifferent piano instruction, I could never play music for anyone to dance to!)

    I was struck by the fact that there are 2 characters named Charles – where it’s easy to get them mixed up! Isn’t that unusual in novels?

  10. Thank you, Kathy! I’ve often thought if Jane had had more time to edit she might have changed their names. I would never have two men with the same name in a novel, unless it was a plot device-I don’t think she’d finished with it properly before she died, and Henry published it after her death. Very sad when you think about it.

    • Carole in Canada on September 30, 2014 at 8:48 pm
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    Eight long years but Anne still remembers so vividly her one true love…yes, bittersweet and sad are the appropriate words to describe her reflections. Having to internalize her pain and not be ‘bitter’ with the world shows a true strength of character. Beautifully written Jane.

  11. Thank you, Carole, for those kind words. Anne is a special young woman, isn’t she?

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