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My WIP – Chapter 4 — 7 Comments

  1. LOVE it!!!! I’m surprised that Darcy was so vocal against Bingley dancing twice with Lizzy at a public assembly. I question his motives…is he already intrigued by Lizzy, or is purely his pride and prejudices against those beneath them socially? Given his comments, which are worse then he uttered at the assembly in Cannon, how will Lizzy respond when she meets Wickham? This story has GREAT promise! I also can’t wait to see how Bingley reacts to Jane, once she returns…or will Darcy be drawn to Jane? Lots of great possibilities!!!

  2. I am glad to see Elizabeth is not completely in love with Mr. Bingley. You are definitely tangling the threads before Jane arrives! Can’t wait to see what you have planned next.

  3. I can’t wait to see where this story goes!! I’m glad that Elizabeth is not “sold” on Bingley right away…which leaves room for Darcy to win her heart later.

    Trust Kitty and Lydia with officers??? NO way!! That’s definitely a scandal waiting to happen….

    Thanks for the chapter–I am sooooo enjoying this story!!

    Warmly,
    Susanne 🙂

  4. I am sure that Elizabeth will quickly cede her place in Bingley’s affections if/when Jane finds him all so “what a gentleman should be”. As for Darcy, he is even more inexcusable as he has noticed Elizabeth was outside and thus must know she overheard his remarks. In canon he was not aware she overheard him. So he has set himself up to be quite unlikeable and will attempt to get Bingley to move back to town even more quickly I am thinking. Thanks for this chapter.

  5. Another fun chapter. So Lizzy might encourage Bingley yo spite his friend. Not good though what he had to say was very rude. Actually I wish Jane would come back but if she gets engaged that will be a problem. I agree with Lizzy and wish the younge girls would behave. Looking forward to more.

  6. You’ve got a “couples” mix up going on here. Cannot wait to see what you do with this. If Bingley is his usual washy self, Elizabeth is not going to like him for long. I hope she gives Darcy a set down his never seen before. She may be undecided about Bingley, but she is decided about Darcy’s interference in Bingley’s affairs. I’m glad you kept the wicked sisters snooty and stuck up. Any other way would be hard to imagine. Enjoying this new story. Jane is away and Elizabeth gets to shine.

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