Colonel Brandon and Elinor Dashwood – Part 2 – Mary Simonsen

Marianne looked out the parlor window. “What are they talking about?” she asked her mother.

“Of whom are you speaking?” Mrs. Dashwood asked.

“Elinor and Colonel Brandon. They have been talking for a half an hour. What can they possibly be discussing? The Colonel is so boring. I cannot imagine what is holding Elinor’s interest.” But then Marianne guessed the reason for their prolonged discussion. “It is the Colonel’s intention to enlist Elinor as an ally in securing my hand in marriage. Shall we never be safe from him?”

“Not everything is about you, Marianne.”

Marianne did not even hear her mother’s retort and continued her soliloquy. “He is on a fool’s errand if he thinks I can be talked into loving him, even by someone as capable as Elinor. I shall be forever grateful that he brought you to Cleveland when I was so ill, but he did not cure me! Am I to be forever in his debt because he is a capable horseman?”

“The Colonel has not so much as hinted at his gallantry in that affair. You are the only one who brings it up.”

Marianne reiterated her reasons for refusing to entertain any thoughts of a marriage to Colonel Brandon: He was too old, too dull, too predictable, too little of this, and too much of that. “He has rheumatism and wears flannel waistcoats.”

Mrs. Dashwood shook her head. She was sure John Willoughby did not own flannel waistcoats, but neither was he in possession of a conscience. But the mother held her tongue, knowing that anything she said on that subject would fall on deaf ears. There was no convincing Marianne of the Colonel’s superior worth. She must arrive at that place all by herself.

* * *

Elinor was eager to hear what the Colonel had to say as she was sure that it involved Edward Ferrars and Lucy Steele. Although she had decided that their separation really was for the best, there was something unfinished about the business, and she wished to know how it had all ended.Col. Brandon 2

Elinor had hoped for a definitive ending, and now she would have it. While in London, the Colonel had heard news regarding the couple: Edward and Lucy had married.

“If that is the case, then I have been rather harsh in my judgment of Edward. He kept his promise to her, and by marrying Lucy, he was disinherited.”

The Colonel shook his head. “As it turns out, Edward Ferrars was not disinherited. It is a rather complicated story. Shall we walk?”

During their walk around a pond that encompassed much of the cottage’s acreage, Brandon explained that Lucy Steele had been very clever in dealing with Mrs. Ferrars’s reaction to the news of her son’s secret engagement. Upon hearing of Edward being disinherited, Miss Steele had sought counsel from a solicitor who had advised her that she could sue Mrs. Ferrars for breach of promise.

“Bring a suit against Mrs. Ferrars?”

“Yes, the mother. By disinheriting Edward, Mrs. Ferrars had compromised a verbal contract her son had entered into with Miss Steele. Miss Steele insisted that before she had accepted Edward’s proposal, she had taken into consideration his ability to provide for her financially for the rest of her life.”

Colonel Brandon explained that in a subsequent interview with the Ferrars’s family solicitor, it was established that Edward had, in fact, made such a declaration of providing for Miss Steele’s financial well-being. Upon further questioning, Edward admitted that he had willingly entered into the engagement and that he had at no time asked to be released from his promise. He also revealed that in the four years of their engagement, he had visited Plymouth at least twice a year and that, on several occasions, he had provided Miss Steele with money with no provision for repayment.

“Apparently, Edward also bought Miss Steele a pony and cart so that she might travel around Plymouth, and on at least one occasion, he settled Miss Steele’s account with a milliner—all indications that he was fully committed to the lady.”

“My goodness!” Elinor exclaimed. “I had no idea.”

“As a result of the interview, Mrs. Ferrars reinstated Edward as her heir.”

“But I thought the changes were irrevocable?”

“Mere bluster on the mother’s part. Who was to tell Mrs. Ferrars that she could not change her mind about her own estate? The difference is that Edward will inherit only half the estate. The remainder goes to his brother Robert.”

“Poor Fanny! She will have Miss Steele as a sister-in-law!” For the first time, Elinor smiled. “But how do you know all this?”

“It is widely broadcast in Town that Miss Steele succeeded with Mrs. Ferrars where few others had. Apparently, the lady hinted that it would be a terrible thing for the Ferrars’s name to be sullied by gossip and intimated that there was already much talk on the street and that it could escalate.”

“That was a threat!”

“Indeed it was, and it worked. So, now that I have told you all, how do you feel about all of this?”

Elinor could think of only one word: relieved. “Although there is an excellent chance I shall never wed, I would rather be a spinster than to be married to someone who is so easily dominated. My husband must be strong and have the courage of his convictions.”

“Then it is your choice to remain an unmarried woman.”

Elinor laughed. “It is hardly a choice, Colonel. But here in Devon, where would I find a suitor? My social circle is very limited.”

The Colonel stopped and looked at Elinor. “You might look no farther than Delaford.”

“What… What are you saying, sir?” Elinor stuttered.

“You were the songbird I spoke of earlier. My past—my love for Eliza—drew me to Marianne, and in doing so, I was blinded to what was right in front of me, that is, a lovely, calm, capable, and caring woman.”

Elinor turned away, and in doing so, the Colonel suspected that he had, once again, failed in securing the affection of a Dashwood daughter. But when Elinor finally looked his way, he could see a look—not of rejection—but of possibilities.

* * *

“Elinor, what were you talking to the Colonel about?” Marianne asked as soon as Elinor came through the door. “I shall not marry him no matter what you say.”

Elinor smiled. “Then I shall not try to convince you.”

“Something has changed. I can tell by the way you are smiling. I demand to know what it is.”

“You are wrong, Marianne. No one thing has changed. Instead, everything has changed.”

I hope you enjoyed my S&S mash-up. All comments are appreciated. Thanks for reading.

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    • Imelda on March 9, 2016 at 12:16 am
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    Lovely. I’ve always thought those two were well-suited.

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 2:35 pm
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      Thanks, Imelda.

        • BookwormKW on July 25, 2018 at 11:06 pm
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        Will you please write another colonel Brandon/ Elinor Dashwood story? I’m in an Alan Rickman mood, and I loved him in Sense & Sensibility. However, I could never quite except Col.Brandon/ Marianne pairing.

          • BookwormKW on September 11, 2018 at 7:58 am
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          **accept– stupid keyboard

    • Anji on March 9, 2016 at 2:21 am
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    I didn’t read part one until just now because I wanted to read the two parts as a whole.

    Like many of the others who’ve commented, I’ve always thought that Elinor and the Colonel were much better suited as a couple. It always seemed that his youthful passion for Eliza was influencing his reaction to Marianne rather than seeing her for herself. Although Edward kept Lucy dangling on a string for four years, he was eventually prepared to do the right thing by her until she broke off their engagement when he was disinherited.

    Finally Mary, there’s something in the way you’ve written thiis that makes the voices of Alan Rickman, Emma Thompson, Kate Winslet and Gemma Jones come through very clearly in all of the conversations in both parts. Thank you and well done.

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 2:36 pm
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      Thank you, Anji. I love Emma Thompson’s S&S. I thought the sceenplay was brilliant. I had those same voices in my head.

    • Cynthia on March 9, 2016 at 2:43 am
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    It was very good!! Thank you!!

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 2:36 pm
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      You are very welcome, Cynthia. Thank you.

    • Julie on March 9, 2016 at 2:47 am
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    Perfect! This is how it should be…

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 2:36 pm
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      I agree, Julie. Thanks for reading and commenting.

    • Deborah on March 9, 2016 at 6:45 am
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    How sweet. It ended up just as I had hoped. A beautiful pairing. Thank Mary.

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 2:37 pm
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      So far, I have 100% agreement on this pairing. I was prepared for some dissent. Thanks for reading and commenting.

    • Carol hoyt on March 9, 2016 at 7:10 am
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    Excellent job!

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 2:37 pm
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      Thanks, Carol.

    • Michelle on March 9, 2016 at 7:29 am
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    Elinor deserves the Brandon. They will be v happy together

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 2:38 pm
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      I agree, Michelle. Thank you for commenting.

    • Mari on March 9, 2016 at 7:38 am
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    This was amazing, and fun to read. I always picture the characters as Miss Thompson and Mr. Rickman too, so the outcome was especially satisfying. Edward, like Bingley is too tepid for anyone as sensible as Elinor to fall in love with, so I am delighted that he was hoist by his own petard with Lucy Steele. Elinor and the Colonel are a much better pairing. Marianne deserves to spend her life wallowing in memories of Willoughby as the world passes her by, and she would probably enjoy it! I do hope that you can turn this into a full length novel sometime. I want to know what happens next, and then after that. Really great job.

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 2:47 pm
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      Thanks, Mari. I hope Marianne matures enough to find a good man, but she did let a good one get away.

      • Ann Garland on March 11, 2016 at 3:18 am
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      Elinor is my favorite Dashwood sister, followed by Margaret. I hope someone writes a story surrounding Margaret.

  1. “not everything is about you, Marianne.”

    Yes and yes! In her eyes, the world must agree with her every opinion. She’s learned nothing, and still prefers a handsome man over a worthy one (and no, ladies, I am not saying Mr. Rickman was not handsome).

    Elinor is surprised, pleased, and intrigued. Brandon will not rush her, that was obvious, and I’m sorry not to get to see the progression of this courtship. Thank you so much for this!

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 2:48 pm
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      Thank you, June. When I was writing this, I had to keep reminding me just how young these two women were–just teenagers. Thanks for commenting.

    • Meg on March 9, 2016 at 8:08 am
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    If only Jane Austen had read your version!

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 2:49 pm
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      High praise, indeed! Thanks, Meg.

    • Theresa M on March 9, 2016 at 8:22 am
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    I agree! I always thought that Brandon and Elinor would be an ideal match. I know the Thompson/Winslet S&S was very well written but I could never get past Elinor and Brandon being so much older than the book. Plus Edward was rather wimpy…he deserved Miss Steele as he would never stand up to her (or his mother). Elinor deserved a more mature competent man like Brandon.

    Perhaps Mary Simonson would consider developing this into a full length novel?

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 2:50 pm
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      Thanks, Theresa. A full-length novel? I wouldn’t mind writing it, but there are few who would read it. As soon as you venture beyond P&P, your sales fall off a cliff. But I’m semi-retired now. So who knows!

        • Ann Garland on March 11, 2016 at 3:23 am
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        Mary–While PRIDE AND PREJUDICE is my single favorite Austen novel, I love S&S, and Elinor deserves Brandon, or someone like him.

          • Mary Simonsen on March 11, 2016 at 11:58 am
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          I agree. Elinor needs someone with a backbone. Thanks for commenting.

    • Sophia on March 9, 2016 at 8:27 am
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    That was interesting! Omg lovely pairing of Elinor and Colonel Brandon! The voices of Mr. Rickman, Kate Winslet and Emma Thompson was so clear when reading of the characters! Loved it! Can’t wait to see more of this! Maybe we can hope for a full length novel?

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 2:51 pm
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      Thanks, Sophia. As I said to Theresa above, I wouldn’t mind writing it, but there are few who would read it. As soon as you venture beyond P&P, your sales fall off a cliff. But I’m semi-retired now. So who knows!

    • Cindy on March 9, 2016 at 9:33 am
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    Lovely!

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 2:52 pm
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      Thank you, Cindy.

    • Stephanie L on March 9, 2016 at 9:37 am
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    Love it. Love it. Love it. I am a happy girl. I will echo what several have said. Could Mary (or one of you lovelies) PLEASE write this into a novel? I also agree that I was hearing the appropriate character voices in my head. Alan Rickman IS Col. Brandon to me.

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 2:53 pm
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      I love Emma Thompson’s S&S. I think she wrote a brilliant screenplay. I know she was much older than Austen’s Elinor, but I thought she was perfect. Thanks for commenting.

    • Kathy Berlin on March 9, 2016 at 9:41 am
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    Perfect!

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 2:54 pm
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      Thank you, Kathy. Always good to see a comment from you.

  2. A lovely story, Mary, and the romance we’d all been hoping for! I love how you bring out Marianne’s complete self-absorption. Very well done, indeed!

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 2:56 pm
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      Thanks, Monica. Re: Marianne – I have to keep reminding me that she’s only 17. Yikes! Too young to be getting married.

    • Carole in Canada on March 9, 2016 at 11:15 am
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    In a word ‘Perfect’. Thank you for this wonderful pairing.

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 2:56 pm
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      Thank you, Carole, for reading and commenting. So glad you enjoyed it.

    • Stephanie Carrico on March 9, 2016 at 12:16 pm
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    Wonderful, would love to read more on these two as a couple.

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 3:21 pm
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      Thanks, Stephanie. So glad you enjoyed it.

    • Kara Louise on March 9, 2016 at 12:33 pm
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    Yes! Dare I say how much I think this is the way the book should have ended? My problem with Brandon and Marianne is that he was infatuated with her looks because she reminded him of Eliza. Not a good thing to base a relationship on. He and Elinor are so much more suited. I have felt this way from the very first! Thanks, Mary!

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 3:22 pm
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      I, too, felt that Marianne and the Colonel were mismatched. Austen tied up all the loose ends, but I think Elinor’s temperament was better suited to Colonel Brandon and vice versa.

    • Sheila L. M. on March 9, 2016 at 12:48 pm
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    Oh, that was so lovely – just perfect. And what a smart cookie Lucy turns out to be…but then we know for sure who will wear the pants in that marriage. And now does anyone have an opinion as to how Marianne will speak about her new “brother”? Thank you so very much for this variation.

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 3:23 pm
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      Interesting question. Even after reading the “happily-ever-after” ending of S&S, I thought that Marianne could never be truly happy with the Colonel. He failed to meet her criteria for a romantic hero.

    • Martha Claycomb on March 9, 2016 at 12:55 pm
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    Awesome!

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 3:24 pm
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      Thanks, Martha. I appreciate the comment.

    • Glynis on March 9, 2016 at 1:41 pm
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    Lovely. Thank you. I believe Elinor deserves someone with a backbone! I think they would be very happy together 😊. Marianne certainly didn’t deserve Brandon and Edward did deserve Lucy.

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 3:25 pm
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      Nice summary. You covered it all. I agree one-hundred percent.

    • Madenna on March 9, 2016 at 1:41 pm
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    Wonderful – thank you!

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 3:26 pm
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      Thanks, Madenna. So glad you enjoyed it.

  3. Excellently done!! And Marianne’s selfishness is definitely revealed here although Austen gave her more of a self-revelation that we do not see in this story but which somehow feels more realistic to me.

    Thank you!

    Warmly,
    Susanne 🙂

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 3:40 pm
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      Thanks, Susanne. I appreciate the comment.

    • Clytie Koehler on March 9, 2016 at 2:57 pm
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    Hi Mary, I only want to add that in addition to the very perceptive and appreciative comments above, I have always been uncomfortable with the original pairing of Marianne and Colonel Brandon. Whether she eventually outgrew her youthful shallowness and fascination with insubstantial romance, Marianne seemed to me to be settling – for a man much older and, though full of feeling for her, ill-matched in inclination to her. He seemed to be settling for her appearance and his sentimental recollections of his first love. He is to bring her up to be the wife of his later years; she is to rely upon the superior wisdom and stability of the father she misses. I do feel sorry for Edward, though. And I almost thought the good colonel might be in love with Mrs Dashwood!

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 3:41 pm
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      I always thought Marianne “settled.” I just can’t see someone with her romantic sensibilities being happy to the Colonel. Content, possibly, but not happily-ever-after.

    • Jan S. on March 9, 2016 at 4:15 pm
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    Thank you, Mary, for this delightful pairing! I have always felt that Colonel Brandon would eventually regret his choice of Marianne. She was such a “drama queen” who felt that her over-the-top displays revealed her emotional depth — a depth that few could understand let alone appreciate (at least in Marianne’s opinion). I think a few years of living with her wild flights of fancy and fluctuating moods would send a nice, steady man like the colonel completely ’round the bend! And then there’s Edward and Elinor — Elinor’s maturity would probably help Edward to be more grown up, but who wants to marry someone who is looking for a mother figure? This pairing you have devised is much more satisfying!

    1. Thannks, Jan. I could not have put it better. I don’t think Edward had a calling to be a clergyman, so he would have needed Elinor to prop him up. As you said, it would have worn thin over time. Ditto for Marianne’s histrionics.

    • EvelynTost on March 9, 2016 at 4:44 pm
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    Mary– Wonderful job on this!! I totally agree on your pairing of the Colonel with Elinor, too!! I also have trouble seeing why she was so drawn to Edward when he was so wishy-washy, nice but too meek and mild. Elinor deserves passion in a relationship, too, and I believe Brandon perfect for her; he will understand her so much better than Edward.

    Great job! Oh, and if you did write it, perhaps you could insert some P&P somewhere, maybe in who comes along to woo Marianne, say maybe ???

    Thanks again for a great read!

      • Mary Simonsen on March 9, 2016 at 4:48 pm
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      Thank you for your comments. Wishy-washy is the perfect adjective for Edward. Temperamentally, Elinor and Brandon are well suited.

      • Ann Garland on March 11, 2016 at 3:29 am
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      I do hope that if someone from P&P came along for Marianne, I don’t think that it should be Mr. Wickham. Marianne is a “drama queen” as someone else has said, but she is still worth more than Mr. W. Could Mr. Denny be the one for Marianne?

    • Lynn Bischoff on March 11, 2016 at 2:57 pm
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    That was a lovely vignette. I can see Elinor and Colonel Brandon having a very happy life together.

      • Mary Simonsen on March 11, 2016 at 6:15 pm
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      Thanks, Lynn. 🙂

    • Violet on September 11, 2018 at 5:17 am
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    I love the idea of Elinor and the Colonel together 🙂

    Check out “True Love Comes to Delaford” by Virginia Kohl
    It pairs them together as well.

    1. I first read S&S at about age ten. Could not figure out for the life of me why Marianne married him. Fifty-five years later, I have grown to appreciate him, and wonder why he married her! We certainly do change, don’t we?

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